many changes, mostly from reviewing rainy's commentary

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 1 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam5a2.yaml b/album/lofam5a2.yaml
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--- a/album/lofam5a2.yaml
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@@ -196,8 +196,13 @@ Commentary: |-
     I tried my best to replicate the Ghibli style whilst still keeping it Homestuck. Researching Ghibli backgrounds was quite fascinating, because until then I hadn’t realised Hayao Miyazaki liked to create a sense of openness with his scenes. The composition of them often involves a large open plain and then a small section for the focal point, so I tried doing the same thing with this piece. Keeping Rose and John to the right-hand side, while giving the sense of a much larger and calmer open space to the left.
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 Track: Grave of the Fireflies
+Additional Names:
+- Name: Grave of the Fireflies (Firefly Remix)
+  Annotation: '[YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=har3VS51HBY)'
 Artists:
 - Rainy
+Contributors:
+- Morris (mastering)
 Duration: '2:38'
 URLs:
 - https://unofficialmspafans.bandcamp.com/track/grave-of-the-fireflies
@@ -1914,7 +1919,8 @@ Lyrics: |-
 
     (Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Rainy:</i>
+    <i>Rainy:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iS9lSSRirSE), excerpt)
+
     This track was bit of a last minute addition to [DistantQuest's] soundtrack for signless's route. Without getting into the details, the track that was originally going to be used for the route had to be removed. I was more than happy to fill in and it gave me excuse to write a rock track. I took a lot of influence from the track "Burn" by Deep Purple, especially in the organ solo parts. I hope you enjoy the music and take time to enjoy [the game](https://distantpast.itch.io/distantquest) as well.
 
     Biggest shout out to Tee-vee, who performed all the guitars for this