fnf: colors & mayhem vol 1 commentary review

2 files changed, 71 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/album/fnf-colors-and-mayhem-vol-1.yaml b/album/fnf-colors-and-mayhem-vol-1.yaml
index af11490..aa2adb1 100644
--- a/album/fnf-colors-and-mayhem-vol-1.yaml
+++ b/album/fnf-colors-and-mayhem-vol-1.yaml
@@ -34,6 +34,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/alternia/1713842340?i=1713842342
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     just a neat theme i cooked up for the mod menu.
 ---
 Track: megid0
@@ -60,10 +61,12 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/medig0/1713842340?i=1713842343
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     i feel super proud of this one just cause it plays with the storytelling aspect of fnf songs that i enjoy. cute lil progression between the life stages of aradia as bf tries to get a hold on his canon-traversal powers. Originally there was gonna be a god-tier section if you got a good enough accuracy.
 
     <i>Jebb:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Rather than Rock Lobster, the original reference given was "<a href="https://youtu.be/2ZxdOeXUiJ0">Iraq Lobster</a>" from Family Guy. Do with that information what you wish.
+
+    Rather than Rock Lobster, the original reference given was ["Iraq Lobster"](https://youtu.be/2ZxdOeXUiJ0) from Family Guy. Do with that information what you wish.
 ---
 Track: uMORAH
 Color: '#c36100'
@@ -78,7 +81,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/umorah/1713842340?i=1713842344
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    i was like 'why tf i aint give tav a song yet' so i whipped one up like those really bassy mexican cookouts.  idk if it's released yet, but in the build i have right now vriska avtually pops as an actual window on your computer it's pretty cute. this is also [[artist:jordo-jams|JordoPrice]]'s favorite song. its every important that i mention that
+
+    i was like 'why tf i aint give tav a song yet' so i whipped one up like those really bassy mexican cookouts.  idk if it's released yet, but in the build i have right now vriska avtually pops as an actual window on your computer it's pretty cute. this is also [[artist:jordo-jams|JordoPrice's]] favorite song. its every important that i mention that
 ---
 Track: 2unliight
 Additional Names:
@@ -105,9 +109,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/2unliight/1713842340?i=1713842345
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/S6T2K7xgzuE))
+
     cool sollux song ft. frogmaid herself
 
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     2nd ever C&M song. i think as i was walking from class, the idea of having lisps in fnf chroamtics excited me. so i sat in my closet lisping and shit to get soem cute samples. plus i was feelin hardstyle and drum and bass that day uwu
 ---
 Track: FUCKASS
@@ -130,7 +136,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/f-s/1713842340?i=1713842346
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    My personal favorite. The song is sorta similar to a Twilight Sparkle song i made for Funkin Is Magic. Anywho i tried to pull of a 'guy who tries to be a smart ass leader but has anger issues and is weird' and i think i nailed the vibe. also the neat Terezi Owns motif when terezi owns the mic ;PPP and the first ever iteration didn't even have terezi (https://files.catbox.moe/z1gv1n.flac). not even like a section of the song was replaced it was just the entire terezi part not there. the song ws gonna be like oen minute 50 seconds what??? so i shoved the T gal in there to steal the spotlight (and mic).
+
+    My personal favorite. The song is sorta similar to a Twilight Sparkle song i made for Funkin Is Magic. Anywho i tried to pull of a 'guy who tries to be a smart ass leader but has anger issues and is weird' and i think i nailed the vibe. also the neat [[Terezi Owns]] motif when terezi owns the mic ;PPP and [[media:misc/archive/FUCKASS (first iteration).flac|the first ever iteration]] didn't even have terezi. not even like a section of the song was replaced it was just the entire terezi part not there. the song ws gonna be like oen minute 50 seconds what??? so i shoved the T gal in there to steal the spotlight (and mic).
 ---
 Track: :33< meowrail
 Directory: meowrail
@@ -154,7 +161,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/33-meowrail/1713842340?i=1713842347
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    i first started this song based on <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rux8fJQ3ia8">Doja Cat - I Don't Do Drugs (Y2K Remix)</a>. and shoved in a bunch of cat shit like Anamanaguchi's Meow sample and that cat song i kept hearing on tiktok. the Jersey club beat was actually was an addition after the first iteration of the song (https://files.catbox.moe/qcele7.flac). A lot of the song's backing melodies are based on an old song i wrote that i had no idea what to do with called IMISSU(https://files.catbox.moe/64fot5.flac)
+
+    i first started this song based on [Doja Cat - I Don't Do Drugs (Y2K Remix)](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rux8fJQ3ia8). and shoved in a bunch of cat shit like Anamanaguchi's [[Meow]] sample and [[track:im-a-cat-now|that cat song i kept hearing on tiktok]]. the Jersey club beat was actually was an addition after [[media:misc/archive/meowrail (first iteration).flac|the first iteration]] of the song. A lot of the song's backing melodies are based on an old song i wrote that i had no idea what to do with called [[media:misc/archive/IMISSU.flac|IMISSU]]
 ---
 Track: Troll Fashion
 Color: '#008f48'
@@ -170,7 +178,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/troll-fashion/1713842340?i=1713842348
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    weirdly enough Kanaya's song was also based on <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rux8fJQ3ia8">Doja Cat - I Don't Do Drugs (Y2K Remix)</a> but i think i did a better job at capturing it. Kanaya's chromatic voice samples had to be resampled like 3 times cause the first iteration soudned to nasly and the 2nd lacked variety in the vowels. (1st https://files.catbox.moe/sou7oz.flac)(2nd https://files.catbox.moe/ku6sd1.flac).you can kinda hear the old voice in the spotify release of [[track:collide|Collide]]
+
+    weirdly enough Kanaya's song was also based on <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rux8fJQ3ia8">Doja Cat - I Don't Do Drugs (Y2K Remix)</a> but i think i did a better job at capturing it. Kanaya's chromatic voice samples had to be resampled like 3 times cause [[media:misc/archive/Troll Fashion (first iteration).flac|the first iteration]] soudned to nasly and [[media:misc/archive/Troll Fashion (second iteration).flac|the 2nd]] lacked variety in the vowels. you can kinda hear the old voice in the spotify release of [[track:collide-colors-mayhem-vol-1|Collide]]
 ---
 Track: JUST1C3
 Additional Names:
@@ -193,10 +202,12 @@ URLs:
 - https://open.spotify.com/track/1HhRwU7zry2vafau1qEcZ9
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/just1c3/1713842340?i=1713842349
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/QnA3na4c6RQ))
+    <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/QnA3na4c6RQ), excerpt)
+
     Making an Alternia mod!!!! wahoo
     
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     This was the first main song i made for C&M. I think i was playing around with a music box VST on FL Studio and suddenly got inspired to make a terezi song. aroudn the middle part where it goes all epic, i imagine like a cute [s] page looking sequence
 ---
 Track: Luck8r8ker
@@ -204,7 +215,11 @@ Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
     Luck8r8ker (Luckbreaker)
   Annotation: >-
-    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/luck8r8ker)
+    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/luck8r8ker-luckbreaker)
+- Name: >-
+    Amen 8r8k
+  Annotation: >-
+    original name
 Color: '#3796c6'
 Duration: '3:26'
 Referenced Tracks:
@@ -215,12 +230,13 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - 2unliight
 - vriska song NEW
 URLs:
-- https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/luck8r8ker
+- https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/luck8r8ker-luckbreaker
 - https://open.spotify.com/track/3PIvBg9cnLIKOc7AIQQNPv
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/luck8r8ker/1713842340?i=1713842350
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    This is actually my 4th attempt at making a Vriska song for FNFCM. The first iteration was called Amen 8r8k so you can imagine how that sounded like(https://files.catbox.moe/6m4j3n.flac). I think a lot of times i just repurposed old unreleased songs and try to shove vriska in it. The second iteration was called Luck8r8ker but again it was just vriska voice slapped on an instrumental of a remix of <a href="https://youtu.be/eK0hKrURCIc">Abjure</a> from Sburban Showtime (https://files.catbox.moe/2vkrma.flac)
+
+    This is actually my 4th attempt at making a Vriska song for FNFCM. [[media:misc/archive/Amen 8r8k (first iteration).flac|The first iteration]] was called Amen 8r8k so you can imagine how that sounded like. I think a lot of times i just repurposed old unreleased songs and try to shove vriska in it. [[media:misc/archive/Luck8r8ker (second iteration).flac|The second iteration]] was called Luck8r8ker but again it was just vriska voice slapped on an instrumental of a remix of [Abjure](https://youtu.be/eK0hKrURCIc) from Sburban Showtime
 ---
 Track: '%mound'
 Additional Names:
@@ -246,6 +262,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/strong-bound/1713842340?i=1713842351
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     There IS a reason this song's name is so inconsistant between releases and thats cause of Equius's typing quirk. i couldn't put % on spotify so i had to change it to STRONG bound instead of %(Cross)mound. The song was def based on sigmachad shit i heard on tiktok. so all that phonk shit and whatever genre Deku The -Ilante videos were. this song actually shares the same chord progression as [[track:meowrail|meowrail]]
 ---
 Track: mIrAcLeS
@@ -271,7 +288,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/miracles/1713842340?i=1713842352
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    This song had an older version which i wasn't too happy with. i tried experimenting with ''''clowncore'''' and some drum and bass dubstep honky shit but it didn't really fit gamgam so i changed it to neat ska. Thanks Jordo Price for the neat 'honks' i begged for
+
+    This song had an older version which i wasn't too happy with. i tried experimenting with ''''clowncore'''' and some drum and bass dubstep honky shit but it didn't really fit gamgam so i changed it to neat ska. Thanks [[artist:jordo-jams|Jordo Price]] for the neat 'honks' i begged for
 ---
 Track: vvisko wwisko
 Additional Names:
@@ -293,10 +311,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/e-obo/1713842340?i=1713842354
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     if im being honest this is my least favorite only cause it was a pain to sample crappy 2013 mobile phone quality voice clips to a pitchable format. so eridan's voice sounds kinda gnaggly. But i dig the inst. if i had the chance i would definately make it feel for rounded out.
 ---
 Track: --Ec)(obo
-Directory: echobo
+Directory: echobo-colors-mayhem-vol-1
 Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
     -- Ec)(obo (Echobo)
@@ -306,17 +325,24 @@ Additional Names:
     --Ec) (Obo
   Annotation: >-
     [Apple Music](https://music.apple.com/us/album/e-obo/1713842340?i=1713842354)
+- Name: >-
+    Troll Fascist
+  Annotation: >-
+    originally considered name
 Color: '#e30072'
 Duration: '2:40'
 Contributors:
 - Cheebs (cool glubs)
+Referenced Tracks:
+- Echobo
 URLs:
 - https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/e-obo-echobo
 - https://open.spotify.com/track/5IOMlT6yGV3O6v4cTXLwea
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/e-obo/1713842340?i=1713842354
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    I really like the melodies of this one. I heavily based it off of Anamanaguchi's <a href="https://youtu.be/LHkKW-OmCRM">Echobo</a> (even the namesake) cause of it's watery feel and fef needed a cheery bubbly(;P) song that fit her nice. thanks you CheebsVA for the cool 'glubs' i begged for. I was originally gonna call this song 'Troll Fascist' because Eridan being hemophobic and all and to constrant the song 'Troll Fashion' but i prioritzed the quirk and plus ehhhhh yea yk yea
+
+    I really like the melodies of this one. I heavily based it off of Anamanaguchi's [[track:echobo|Echobo]] (even the namesake) cause of it's watery feel and fef needed a cheery bubbly(;P) song that fit her nice. thanks you [[artist:cheebs|CheebsVA]] for the cool 'glubs' i begged for. I was originally gonna call this song 'Troll Fascist' because Eridan being hemophobic and all and to constrant the song [[track:troll-fashion|'Troll Fashion']] but i prioritzed the quirk and plus ehhhhh yea yk yea
 ---
 Track: Moonsettings (Interlude)
 Duration: '1:28'
@@ -329,6 +355,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/moonsettings-interlude/1713842340?i=1713842355
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     just a cute remix of moonsetter for the pause menu
 ---
 Track: 2BEEP2MEOW
@@ -343,7 +370,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/2beep2meow/1713842340?i=1713842356
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    a classic. my magnum opus in the Homestuck community priot to <a href="https://youtu.be/ew_EEQWnsto">Doritos and Fritos</a>. I remember making this song the day after reading that pesterlog. i want ed to creat a song that had that 'bgm' esc vibe to it but not super 'retro and 8 bit woagg' yknow. i remember making it having a bunch of instrumental elements that it ended up drowing out the voices so i had to learn how to be economic with my instruments and mixing. it was my first ever published homestuck fnf thing and i remember [[artist:yoitscro|YoItsCro]] geeking about it and how proud they were of my transition to a homestuck
+
+    a classic. my magnum opus in the Homestuck community priot to [Doritos and Fritos](https://youtu.be/ew_EEQWnsto). I remember making this song the day after reading that pesterlog. i want ed to creat a song that had that 'bgm' esc vibe to it but not super 'retro and 8 bit woagg' yknow. i remember making it having a bunch of instrumental elements that it ended up drowing out the voices so i had to learn how to be economic with my instruments and mixing. it was my first ever published homestuck fnf thing and i remember [[artist:yoitscro|YoItsCro]] geeking about it and how proud they were of my transition to a homestuck
 ---
 Track: Lewd Doodle
 Additional Names:
@@ -362,11 +390,13 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/lewd-doodle/1713842340?i=1713842477
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/3PhDg0SSX_4))
+
     It's jade harely's birthday. it's only fair
 
     i totally forgot his eyelashes im such a poser im such a faker im a fake uaghhh i suck im quitting fnf im quitting youtube
 
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     this song imo doesn't hold up as well as i think it could. the bass is fire tho and it was my first ever use of MODO Bass VST after the Ample Bass plugin kept doing the weird sound glitch (iykyk). and no the <a href="https://youtu.be/qrO4YZeyl0I">Bad Romance</a> motif was not intentional. First song i had to push my voice acting skills for cause i couldn't afford to get voice actors to say my super specififc lines with many retakes so i learned how to enhance my range.
 ---
 Track: Beckoning
@@ -395,10 +425,12 @@ Lyrics: |-
     S-S-S-SQUAWK LIKE AN IMBECILE AND SHIT ON YOUR DE— (No!)
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/DbtS8RiPkds))
+
     4/13, you'll get a lil update build i prommiseeeee
 
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    This song i wrote on a whim cause i wanted an early act song so that all my friends who were just starting can also get the 'hey i know this part' moment of my mod. i went for that classicalish composition cause yknow John's a piano mastermind. Thank you VoicingGuy for your epic John 'NOs' i took from you. fun fact his birthday is the same as john's
+
+    This song i wrote on a whim cause i wanted an early act song so that all my friends who were just starting can also get the 'hey i know this part' moment of my mod. i went for that classicalish composition cause yknow John's a piano mastermind. Thank you [[artist:the-voice-guy|VoicingGuy]] for your epic John 'NOs' i took from you. fun fact his birthday is the same as john's
 ---
 Track: Harley's Heat
 Duration: '1:19'
@@ -413,12 +445,14 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/harleys-heat/1713842340?i=1713842479
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i> ([YouTube description](https://youtu.be/SULQ8QdHrRI))
+
     Sorry this was fucking late youtube cut my shit off for bluey fuck this youtube shit here's the mod :heart:
 
-    and fuckin context
+    and fuckin context<br>
     https://www.homestuck.com/epilogues/candy/5
 
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     I was reading the epilogues and was shocked at how heated Jade was to karkat and found it funny that he bit her in the en. bam adaptation. short ass song tho
 ---
 Track: Grimdark
@@ -434,7 +468,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/grimdark/1713842340?i=1713842480
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    One day i was listening to <a href="https://youtu.be/LFPjMRvZsU0">Impatience</a> from Funkscop and i was like 'i wanna song like this in C&M' and i thought about a fight song between grimdark rose and jack noir. I know if this show us, it should have the husnasty artstyle.
+
+    One day i was listening to [Impatience](https://youtu.be/LFPjMRvZsU0) from Funkscop and i was like 'i wanna song like this in C&M' and i thought about a fight song between grimdark rose and jack noir. I know if this show us, it should have the husnasty artstyle.
 ---
 Track: Grimbark
 Directory: grimbark-colors-mayhem-vol-1
@@ -451,26 +486,31 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/grimbark/1713842340?i=1713842481
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
-    when making this song i thought it'd be clever to start the song the same as Grimdark. even have the same name too lolz. iT WAS AT THIS POINT I REALIZED I HAD TOO MANY JADEKAT SONGS.
+
+    when making this song i thought it'd be clever to start the song the same as [[track:grimdark-colors-mayhem-vol-1|Grimdark]]. even have the same name too lolz. iT WAS AT THIS POINT I REALIZED I HAD TOO MANY JADEKAT SONGS.
 ---
 Track: Hammer Unkind
 Duration: '3:36'
 Referenced Tracks:
 - vriska song NEW
 - Alternia (Intro)
-- track:MeGaLoVania
+- track:megalovania-halloween
 URLs:
 - https://soundcloud.com/bbpanzus-alt-account/hammer-unkind
 - https://open.spotify.com/track/504b1H4hYD0QkpUubIP3jj
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/hammer-unkind/1713842340?i=1713842482
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     THE john song. it's him fighting those 2 big goblin thingies + his grandma assist. i made sure to really stick with the limitations of the nes when making this chiptune song
 
     <i>Jebb:</i> (wiki editor)
-    The Megalovania reference listed is actually the Megalovania melody played in reverse.
+
+    The [[track:megalovania-halloween|Megalovania]] reference listed is actually the Megalovania melody played in reverse.
 ---
 Track: Omnicient
+Directory: omnicient-colors-mayhem-vol-1
+Always Reference By Directory: true
 Duration: '2:21'
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Flare
@@ -481,9 +521,12 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/omnicient/1713842340?i=1713842484
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     One day me and some friends were on a discord call and he had his voicemod vocoder on and it started vocoding his air conditioner. we joked about sampling it to a song and i did. and then i ended up making a Doc Scratch song ft. Damara. Damara's voice is just sampled from Jolyne since thats my headcanon and all :333. the song was gonna have Andrew Hussie in it but i think i just had to put something out so i did. if i were to make something with this again i'd add in the hussie voices
 ---
 Track: Collide
+Directory: collide-colors-mayhem-vol-1
+Always Reference By Directory: true
 Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
     [S] Collide (FNF)
@@ -511,4 +554,5 @@ URLs:
 - https://music.apple.com/us/album/collide/1713842340?i=1713842485
 Commentary: |-
     <i>bb-panzu:</i>
+
     whats more to say. a fat 10 minute fnf song that basically summaraizes the entirety of [[flash:8087|[S] Collide]].
diff --git a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
index 77b0c06..a0a8585 100644
--- a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
+++ b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
@@ -22159,6 +22159,14 @@ Lyrics: |-
     'Cause I have seen many worlds, for what it's worth
     But I'll never see again the planet Earth, my Earth
 ---
+Track: Echobo
+Duration: '3:13'
+Artists:
+- Anamanaguchi
+URLs:
+- https://anamanaguchi.bandcamp.com/track/echobo
+- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LHkKW-OmCRM
+---
 Track: Eeyore
 Duration: '2:48'
 Artists: