misc cleanup for albums from Jebb, mostly commentary tweaks

1 files changed, 33 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/album/the-gap.yaml b/album/the-gap.yaml
index 48a290a..95242cd 100644
--- a/album/the-gap.yaml
+++ b/album/the-gap.yaml
@@ -18,11 +18,30 @@ Groups:
 - horizon
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>horizon:</i>
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap))
+
     ( )
+
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWP8cMreYNM), excerpt)
+
+    "There must be blood, the girl thought. There must always be blood. The Green Wind said that, so it must be true. It will all be hard and bloody, but there will be wonders, too, or else why bring me here at all? And it’s the wonders I’m after, even if I have to bleed for them."
+
+    -- from The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making, a novel in a series by Catherynne M. Valente
+
+    ✼ 　 ҉ 　✼ 　 ҉ 　✼
+
+    months in the making, i have finally created something i am happy to share -- something that feels like it's saying what i want to say. it's struggling to raise its voice but doing so anyway.
+
+    the quote above is from my absolute favorite author in the world, and there's a vague reference to the novel quoted at the end of this song. if you're feeling lost in this big, terrifying world, i highly recommend her writing. i would never have made it this far without the worlds she's created, and whatever comes of this is thanks to you, her, and so many other wonderful, creative people.
+
+    that being said, the dedication here lies elsewhere -- in the name. or lack thereof? but that means it's for you anyway. so enjoy :)
+
+    (also the person speaking at the end is tripp i stole it from a dnd recording shhhhh don't tell him)
 ---
 Track: the gap
 Duration: '4:28'
+Contributors:
+- Trippcaptor (end vocals)
 URLs:
 - https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap
 - https://youtu.be/NWP8cMreYNM
@@ -96,4 +115,16 @@ Lyrics: |-
     Anything i can throw at me
     I will dance in these
     Changing times till the
-    Universe learns to sing with me
\ No newline at end of file
+    Universe learns to sing with me
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap))
+
+    lyrics, composition, production, etc: [[artist:horizon|OPHELIA ANADYOMENE]]<br>
+    speaking voice:[[artist:trippcaptor|Trippcaptor]]<br>
+    credit to zapsplat for percussion samples: [www.zapsplat.com](https://www.zapsplat.com/)
+
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWP8cMreYNM), excerpt)
+
+    Copyright ℗ 2021 [[artist:horizon|OPHELIA ANADYOMENE]]<br>
+    spoken words hijacked from [[artist:trippcaptor|Trippcaptor]]<br>
+    percussion samples from zapsplat ([https://www.zapsplat.com/](https://www.zapsplat.com/))