review: lyrics

1 files changed, 33 insertions, 31 deletions

diff --git a/album/the-ballad-of-megan-pouring.yaml b/album/the-ballad-of-megan-pouring.yaml
index 510279e..374fa82 100644
--- a/album/the-ballad-of-megan-pouring.yaml
+++ b/album/the-ballad-of-megan-pouring.yaml
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Sampled Tracks:
 - The Ballad of Megan Pouring (instrumental)
 Lyrics: |-
-    (Are you done with the salt shaker?
-    Oh my-- you're not actually gonna eat that, are you?
-    Megan?
-    I'm almost done with it.)
+    (Are you done with the salt shaker?)
+    (Oh my— you're not actually gonna eat that, are you?)
+    (Megan?)
+    (I'm almost done with it.)
 
     Sodium chloride
     Sodium chloride
@@ -61,55 +61,57 @@ Lyrics: |-
     They look like fucking boats
     That's why they're called shiptoasts
 
-    (Miss Pouring, if we don't break even this month I don't see how we can make it.
-    We'll make it.
-    But--
-    WHAT did I say, Nicole? Now get back to work.
-    Fuck you, Andrea Hussie. This is all your fault.
-    You bitch.)
+    (Miss Pouring, if we don't break even this month I don't see how we can make it.)
+    (We'll make it.)
+    (But—)
+    (WHAT did I say, Nicole? Now get back to work.)
+    (This is all your fault, Andrea Hussie.)
+    (You bitch.)
 
     I wanted to be a princess
     And when I was a girl they told me that I could
     "As long as you try your hardest"
-    If only I had asked 'em if I should
+    Guess I should have asked them if I should
     I founded a sub for Homestuck
     Wish the fucking end was any good
     Now all I wanna do is die
-    Someone tell me why-y-y
-    (She hates her fucking job)
+    Someone tell me why-y-y (She hates her fucking job)
 
-    (Megan, this is your Doctor. The test results came back...
-    We tried to warn you about this, you know...
-    Anyway. We analyzed the salt content in your blood...
-    And we've come to the conclusion that, if you don't cut down your intake...
-    There's just no way you can survive.)
+    (Megan, this is your Doctor. The test results came back.)
+    (We tried to warn you about this, you know.)
+    (Anyway. We analyzed the salt content in your blood...)
+    (And we've come to the conclusion that, if you don't cut down your intake...)
+    (There's just no way you can survive.)
 
     Someone, someone tell me
     When I asked for this or
     What my sin was to deserve this lot in life
-    I know I'm not the best of people but you must believe
+    I know I'm not the best of
+    People but you must believe
     Me God, if you are out there I can change
-    I feel my self control, my salty sinful soul
+    I feel my self control
+    My salty sinful soul
     Inside me slip away, I'll end my life today
 
     Oh - oh - oh - oh - oh - oh (etc.)
-    MY NAME IS O, DID SOMEBODY RING?
+    MY NAME IS [[artist:o|O]], DID SOMEBODY RING?
     FOR I AM GOD, THE LORD OF ALL, EVERY H*CKING THING
     GOD HEARD THY PRAY'R AND HE WILL ANSWER THEE
     COME HOME, MY CHILD, SING ALONG WITH US AND THEN YOU SHALL BE FREE
 
-    (Megan, listen. I'm sorry about what Hussie did to you.
-    I want to make sure what she did never happens to anyone again.
-    She's burning in hell as we speak,
-    Being forced to make a video game that will never be completed.
-    If you come with me and post back to heaven, we can all make high quality rips for eternity.
-    And Megan - will you marry me?
-    Yes! I will!)
+    (Megan, listen. I'm sorry about what Hussie did to you.)
+    (I want to make sure what she did never happens to anyone again.)
+    (She's burning in hell as we speak, being forced to make a video game that will never be completed.)
+    (If you come with me and [[artist:aris-martinian|ost]] back to heaven, we can all make high quality rips for eternity.)
+    (Megan... will you marry me?)
+    (Yes! I will!)
 
     (No way Sheen, no way Sheen, you're not as big a fan of Jimmy's dad as I am!)
-    Cool and new web-comic
-    Cool and new web-comic
-    It saved the fandom and Megan too (it's true!)
+    (No way Sheen, no way Sheen, you're not as big a fan of Jimmy's dad as I am!)
+
+    Cool and new web comic
+    Cool and new web comic
+    It saved the fandom and Megan too (It's true!)
     Best fanmade property
     Better than Hiveswap'll be
     O, and it's all because of you!