more commentary annotations

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/album/sburb-ost.yaml b/album/sburb-ost.yaml
index 7a4cf79..b1b14a1 100644
--- a/album/sburb-ost.yaml
+++ b/album/sburb-ost.yaml
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     
     Support this album as all the other artists are incredible people. (Tips hat to Brad)
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [*Brad tips his hat back!*]
 
     <i>RunDoubleRun:</i>
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ Cover Art File Extension: png
 Art Tags:
 - Underlings
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [James did not send me<br>
     commentary for this track<br>
     so here's a haiku!]
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Traikan:</i>
     I had that G, G#, B motive stuck in my head for a long time, and I knew I wanted to use it for a desert song, so when I saw "Years in the future" I jumped at the chance to put it into play. The latter half of the song is scavenged from an older piece, that never saw the light of day. Texturally, acoustic guitars, high strings, droning pads, and a bit of brass all make me think "DESERT." The scale does most of the also desert themed, work establishing that, though. I wanted the song to be upbeat and include two parts. The first serves as a "conversation theme" to be played when the exiles are communicating with the players and "exile action" which, is unlikely to be heard by a player, but would accompany something more intense happening years in the future.
     
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [YEARS IN THE FUTURE...<br>
     A ramshackle wanderer<br>
     ...finds a giant book?]
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Underlings
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [Hope you've leveled up<br>
     This guy doesn't mess around<br>
     but he makes a mess!]
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Consorts
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [Let's just take a sec<br>
     to appreciate that cow.<br>
     It's adorable!]
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Eston Schweickart:</i>
     [[artist:yan-rodriguez|Nucleose]] and I are good pals, so we collaborated on this piece. We decided to compose a theme for first encountering a denizen (but not fighting it!). We agreed that it should be cinematic and ominous, and perhaps switch moods throughout, to accompany a theoretical cutscene featuring a dialogue between the player and the denizen. Within a day, [[artist:yan-rodriguez|Nucleose]] had hammered out the main theme on piano, which I then set about to arrange for full orchestra and electronics. I emerged nearly 6 months later, scarred from many bloody battles with the demons of procrastination, with a song called Waking the Beast (a title that I settled on months before Eidolon Orpheus' [[track:bargaining-with-the-beast]] was released). Though [[artist:yan-rodriguez|Nucleose]] would claim that he had almost no hand in the finished product, I incorporated (read: stole) many elements that are common in his music: uncommon meter, Phrygian mode, numerous gradual tempo changes, etc. SO THERE, YAN.
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [It begs the question...<br>
     How zen is a denizen<br>
     when it's in a den?]
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ URLs:
 Cover Artists:
 - melodiousDiscord
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [SKAIA•NET PATCH NOTES:<br>
     ADDED SAVE POINTS TO ALL LANDS.<br>
     LOAD POINTS COMING SOON.]
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Veritas Unae:</i>
     These [[track:lavender-lullaby|two lulling lullabies]] were rather fun to write... I wrote the Prospit lullaby before writing the [[track:on-golden-dreams|Prospit song]] itself, so linearly it inspired part of the Prospit theme... As such they're short and relaxing, but with a little twist at the end.
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [These songs remind me<br>
     ...<br>
     Time for bed, goodnight!]
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Veritas Unae:</i>
     These [[track:lulling-lutescent|two lulling lullabies]] were rather fun to write, especially Derse's, which used a small refrain from [[track:planet-in-shadow|Konec0's Derse theme]]... These short instances would play, similar to the one that was played as Doomed Rose fell asleep and merged with the Alpha Rose...
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [...<br>
     I should not be up this late.<br>
     Time for bed, goodnight!]
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Catboss:</i>
     <i>He awakens with a start. The first thing he notices is the throbbing headache. He feels groggy, and his entire body feels heavy, as if he's been sleeping for ages, so long it's forgotten how to move. There's something in the back of his head, something that sounds like white noise, or static, or strange whispers. He dismisses them for the moment; it's probably the headache talking, he thinks. The second thing he notices, as he forces himself to sit up, is how everything is purple. The walls of his room are lined with violet and indigo, and even his sheets and his pajamas (he didn't remember putting these on before going to sleep; heck, he didn't even remember having them) are similar shades. This must be a dream, he thinks, and yet he is unable to shake the feeling that this is terribly, frighteningly real. The third thing he notices is how dark and quiet it is. Faint light streams in through the window, from a blue planet far away. It's thin and wispy, as if shining from behind a veil. The eerie silence makes his skin crawl. He strides over to the window, and looks up, towards the endless void. There is nothing there, and yet it beckons him, and he is nearly compelled to leap into the abyss. Tearing his gaze away from the vast nothingness, he peers downwards instead - and there it is, stretching out before him in all its glory: Derse, the planet in shadow.</i>
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [Planet in Shadow?<br>
     With all that purple, more like<br>
     Planet of the Grapes]
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Fuzz:</i>
     I have always been keen to experiment with soundscapes. Essentially this piece is just one giant soundscape with a melody. The goal i had was to create something which would be intense enough to feel horrific without being goofy or cheesy. In essence i feel this expresses the nature of the horrorterrors accurately.
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [H͏ ͘ E̶ ̡ Y̕   ҉҉̡ T̨ H͢ ͝ E̢ RE҉̢ ҉  ͢ L͝ I͡ T̢ T̨ ͢ ĹE  ̡ F̷ ҉R̢ Į͝ ̕ E̷ ͠ N͏ ҉D̵<br>
      ́H̶ ̛ O̡ W̷ WO͏ U͞ ĻD̡   ̵ ҉Y̛ O͘ ͜ U͞   ͞ L̕ Į̵ ͠ K҉E͝   T͞ Ớ͠   ͡ H͏ U͞ G̢ ̕   ̧ A͏ ŅḐ <br>
      B͟ E͟   ͜ ͝ T̀ ͟ A̕ N҉͠ G̛  L͜ ͞ E̴   ͏ B̢ ͠ Ù̶ ͘ D̸ D͘ I͡ ̶ ES͟ ͞ ]̸
@@ -685,7 +685,7 @@ URLs:
 Cover Artists:
 - Phosphorescence
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [Paradox parents<br>
     stealing slime from other times<br>
     Infinite infants.]
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Battlefield
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [The end of the world<br>
     Spacey stones seeding stations<br>
     ...and also babies]
@@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 Track: The Will to Fight Further [Denizen Strife]
 Directory: the-will-to-fight-further
 Artists:
-- Marcy Nabors
+- Kevin Grant
 - Catboss
 Duration: '5:08'
 URLs:
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Tarranon:</i>
     <i>A universe is born anew - a starry expanse of which one might catch only a vivid glimpse. Grandiose and immense beyond all rationality, the Genesis Frog bears the creation of a new reality within.</i>
 
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [Universal frog!<br>
     I bet it's quite slippery...<br>
     ..cuz it's Slick. Get it?]
@@ -1278,7 +1278,7 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Earth
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Brad Griffin:</i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [.....<br>
     .......<br>
     .....]