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diff --git a/album/prospit-and-derse.yaml b/album/prospit-and-derse.yaml
index 7add754a..272e0d4e 100644
--- a/album/prospit-and-derse.yaml
+++ b/album/prospit-and-derse.yaml
@@ -21,20 +21,36 @@ Art Tags:
 - Prospit
 - Derse
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Solatrus:</i> (original Bandcamp blurb)
+    <i>Homestuck:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://web.archive.org/web/20110924081650/https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/prospit-derse))
 
-    <i>The twins of Skaia, locked in combat's hold<br>
-    One a shadow of fate, one a heart of gold.</i>
+    *The twins of Skaia, locked in combat's hold<br>
+    One a shadow of fate, one a heart of gold.*
 
-    <i>Watch as we see the children who dream,<br>
-    Of worlds so unlike anything we've seen.</i>
+    *Watch as we see the children who dream,<br>
+    Of worlds so unlike anything we've seen.*
 
-    <i>Now, listen to the sound that has been rehearsed.<br>
-    The sound of dreams... of Prospit and Derse.</i>
+    *Now, listen to the sound that has been rehearsed.<br>
+    The sound of dreams... of Prospit and Derse.*
+
+    <i>Homestuck:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://web.archive.org/web/20110924081650/https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/prospit-derse))
+
+    Music by [[artist:solatrus|Jeremy "Solatrus" Iamurri]].
+
+    Contains elements of songs by [[artist:buzinkai|George Buzinkai]] and [[artist:toby-fox|Toby "Radiation" Fox]].
+
+    Cover art by [[artist:lexxy|Alexandra "Lexxy" Douglas]] and [[artist:molly-gur|SkepticArcher]].
 
     Special thanks to:<br>
-    Nick Smalley<br>
-    Marcy Nabors
+    [[artist:nick-smalley]]<br>
+    [[artist:marcy-nabors]] (Steamlord313)
+
+    <i>Homestuck:</i> ([whatpumpkin.com album blurb](https://web.archive.org/web/20110925154300/http://whatpumpkin.com/music.html))
+
+    It's almost time to go back to school, and you know what that means - time for a new album! August's album is brought to you by [[artist:solatrus|Jeremy "Solatrus" Iamurri]], creator of [[track:frost-vol6|"Frost"]] and [[Crystalanthology|"Crystalanthology."]]
+
+    Named "Prospit & Derse," this album chronicles the contrast between Skaia's two moons. Prospit's brassy fanfares, eclectic bass, and melodic piano parallel Derse's somber strings, dark synths, and dirty drums. These two soundscapes work side-by-side to create a lunar ying-yang of harmoniously smooth tracks. Dark or light, Solatrus's production efforts really shine through!
+
+    So, how about it? Hop on over to Bandcamp and spend the last of your summertime daydreams on the moon. That desk ain't a quest bed, buddy.
 
     <i>Solatrus:</i> (one year anniversary)
 
@@ -58,7 +74,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     And that's when I created [[Darkened Streets]].
 
-    <i>Solatrus:</i> (2020 rerelease blurb)
+    <i>Solatrus:</i> ([2020 rerelease blurb](https://solatrus.bandcamp.com/album/prospit-derse))
 
     My solo album from Homestuck!