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@@ -57,15 +57,55 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:sburban-jungle
 - The Return
 - Violet and Gold
+Sampled Tracks:
+- Apollo 8 communications 069:37:00 Lovell
 Lyrics: |-
-    O darling, what have we become?<br>Has all been said, has all been done?<br>And after all that we've been through<br>Am I still me, are you still you?
-    O darling, what is it we seek?<br>Perhaps I think myself a freak<br>Perhaps I crave a second chance<br>In the universe's endless dance
-    If I had a choice<br>Still I wouldn't stay<br>Set out on a voyage for forever and a day
-    Exiled from our world<br>Into parts unknown<br>Wholly unfamiliar and yet it feels like home
-    And yet the pyramid still looms<br>And life still fades and life still blooms<br>And as the centuries they pass<br>We're not the first and not the last
-    The dawn consumed the night<br>Bathed in the sentinel's light<br>Clinging onto that bone<br>Ready to put up a fight<br>My bone came down again<br>I threw it up to the sky<br>That was the day I knew<br>I'd never really die
-    If I had a choice<br>Still I wouldn't stay<br>Set out on a voyage for forever and a day
-    Exiled from our world<br>Into parts unknown<br>Wholly unfamiliar and yet it feels like home
+    (VGY was zero, VGZ was plus 0.2, Delta-VC was minus 20.2, orbit 169.1 by 60.5.)
+
+    O darling, what have we become?
+    Has all been said, has all been done?
+    And after all that we've been through
+    Am I still me, are you still you?
+
+    O darling, what is it we seek?
+    Perhaps I think myself a freak
+    Perhaps I crave a second chance
+    In the universe's endless dance
+
+    If I had a choice
+    Still I wouldn't stay
+    Set out on a voyage for forever and a day
+
+    Exiled from our world
+    Into parts unknown
+    Wholly unfamiliar and yet it feels like home
+
+    And yet the pyramid still looms
+    And life still fades and life still blooms
+    And as the centuries they pass
+    We're not the first and not the last
+
+    The dawn consumed the night
+    Bathed in the sentinel's light
+    Clinging onto that bone
+    Ready to put up a fight
+    My bone came down again
+    I threw it up to the sky
+    That was the day I knew
+    I'd never really die
+
+    If I had a choice
+    Still I wouldn't stay
+    Set out on a voyage for forever and a day
+
+    Exiled from our world
+    Into parts unknown
+    Wholly unfamiliar and yet it feels like home
+
+    [Reversed]
+    Exiled from our world
+    Into parts unknown
+    Wholly unfamiliar and yet it feels like home
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Grace Medley:</i>
     Moons of Theseus is an album idea we had lying around from before UnofficialMSPAFans' recent year of 0 content, and it's a project a lot of us had been looking forward to for a long time. Fitting, too, that it's named for the paradox in which every piece of an object is replaced gradually until it has nothing physically in common with its original state. The idea for Home we had back then is nothing like what you hear now. SplitSuns and I didn't know what we wanted back then, beyond "Oh hey, you want to make a tribute to Forever? Me too!" It's safe to say that little to none of that initial desire to reimagine Mobius Trip's overture has bled through into the finished product, but it's safer still to say that this song wouldn't be possible if it had been approached any other way. That's not the only thing that's changed in the meantime, either: since we initially promised to collaborate on this, we've both improved as composers and producers, and our styles have evolved, our influences are different, and the zeitgeist of what it means to be a Homestuck fan, particularly a Homestuck music fan, is practically unrecognisable.