more lyric tweaks and additions from Niklink

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.txt b/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.txt
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--- a/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.txt
+++ b/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.txt
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 Lyrics:
     I was about fifteen<br>I was walking the beach<br>I was racing a wave<br>It knocked me off my feet<br>I fell into the tide<br>It spat me back on the sand<br>I laughed without a clue<br>How lucky I was to land
     It's been a long long time<br>Since my life was spared<br>It's been a long long time<br>But I'm still not scared
-    It was the dawn of man<br>I held the bone in my hand<br>I was hungry as death<br>Wandering through the sand<br>I met a wild boar<br>My bone came down with a crack<br>I tasted flesh and blood<br>And swore I'd never look back
+    It was the dawn of man<br>I held the bone in my hand<br>I was as hungry as death<br>Wandering through the sand<br>I met a wild boar<br>My bone came down with a crack<br>I tasted flesh and blood<br>And swore I'd never look back
     It's been a long long time<br>But I had just begun<br>It's been a long long time<br>Out in the African sun<br>It's been a long long time<br>Since I learned that skill<br>It's been a long long time<br>Since my very first kill
-    If anyone's out there to see what we have done<br>Can somebody tell me what we are to become<br>Our tiny lives, they fly right by<br>This goodly frame, it does not care<br>If we live or die
-    It was the month of june<br>It Tiananmen Square<br>The thanks were on TV<br>But I was not yet there<br>The guns they all went pop<br>We heard the screams and shouts<br>I was brought into this world<br>As they were taken out
-    It's been a long long time<br>So many people to mourn<br>It's been a long long time<br>Since the day I was born<br>It's been a long long time<br>And yet no time at all<br>It's been a long long time<br>And yet no time at all
-    If anyone's out there to see what I have done<br>Can somebody tell me what I am to become<br>Our tiny lives, they fly right by<br>Who were they, and next to them<br>Who the hell am I?
+    If anyone's out there to see what we have done<br>Can somebody tell me what we are to become<br>Our tiny lives<br>They fly right by<br>This goodly frame, it does not care<br>If we live or die
+    It was the month of June<br>In Tiananmen Square<br>The tanks were on TV<br>But I was not yet there<br>The guns they wall went pop<br>We heard the screams and shouts<br>I was brought into this world<br>As they were taken out
+    If anyone's out there to see what I have done<br>Can somebody tell me what we are to become<br>Our tiny lives<br>They fly right by<br>Who were they, and next to them<br>Who the hell am I?
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