add (wiki editor) & (team manager) commentary annotations

1 files changed, 2 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam4.yaml b/album/lofam4.yaml
index a4f037e..0fc17ca 100644
--- a/album/lofam4.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam4.yaml
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     Similarly to several other songs on this album, this started as a rescore of [S] Jane: Enter for this collaborative project where people would come up with new music for all the flashes in Homestuck. The goal here was to make a song similar in style to Another Jungle (a very underappreciated song) without actually quoting it other than the way that song quotes Sburban Jungle. It was quite a challenge not borrowing anything else from other songs except for when I used a part of Oppa Toby Style towards the end, but this song was fun to make and I'm happy enough with the end result even if it's not as punchy as the original.
     <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i>
     a fair number of songs didn't have commentary from their musicians and/or artists, so i asked a few people, mostly mspafans managers to write some filler commentary for those. they'll be prefaced by bold names.
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i>
+    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
     (ive gone and updated the old LoFaM commentaries to follow the same style!)
     <i><b>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</b></i>
     This art is a lovely rendition of Fitzwibble of that bit in [S] Dirk: Unite where Dirk takes Roxy and Jane along for a ride. Unfortunately, due to her foolish boorishness, Jane does not appreciate the joy of flying through the air as a bird would in spring. It is a shame, that such an enlightening experience must go ignored.
@@ -656,8 +656,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     Aura of Colour is one of my older tracks, originally completely unrelated to Homestuck and only then adapted as a theme for Rose and submitted as such. It is the piece that marked my transition form straightup EDM to more VGM-styled music.
     <i><b>keyboard cait:</b></i>
     This art by insecureIllustrator was actually one of two made for this track! iI sent us both this version and a different one of Rose with just as much incredible detail, and allowed us to choose which one suited the track better. This version won out primarily due to fitting the bright tone of the song more, and the general feeling of an "aura of colour".
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i>
-    (the other drawing by iI is below!)
+    <i>insecureIllustrator:</i> (alternate artwork)
     <img src="media/misc/aura-of-colour-bonus.png" width="300">
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 Track: Beyond the Death of the King