more lilith review

through 10/30 (up til, not including "November 2 update")

1 files changed, 39 insertions, 21 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam4.yaml b/album/lofam4.yaml
index 61a61cb3..ea9672d7 100644
--- a/album/lofam4.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam4.yaml
@@ -936,15 +936,15 @@ Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
     The Voltaic Fault
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon), early name
+    Tumblr audio embed on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon)
 - Name: >-
-    The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)
+    Land of Mounds and Xenon
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon), early name with Land title
+    Tumblr audio embed on [complete track](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i)
 - Name: >-
-    Land of Mounds and Xenon
+    The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i), later name
+    Tumblr post text on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon) and [complete track](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:20'
@@ -958,25 +958,25 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Danger! High Voltage
 Commentary: |-
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+
+    This was very much a test-bed for photoshop brushes and adjustment layers I had yet to touch on, all while putting the speed in speedpaint.
+
+    <i>keyboard cait:</i> (album team, booklet commentary)
+
+    At one point I described this as something along the lines of "electric Scottish war music", and that still stands. The melody in this song is absolutely iconic, if you ask me, and it gets INCREDIBLY amped. Maybe enough to see what lies under that voltaic fault. (Spoiler: It's just a lot of xenon.) Also, the lyrics to this song are "DANGER HIGH VOLTAGE". That is all.
+
     <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon), WIP commentary, 11/15/2012)
 
     <b>The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)</b>
 
     Sorry it (maybe, I can't tell anymore) is so quiet, still trying to fix this volume issue I've had with my stuff. Jakes land reminded me of highlands with the mounds and all the green, and I love the charged xenon running through the planet's canyons.
 
-    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i), origin of final track name, 05/26/2013)
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> ([Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i), 05/26/2013)
 
     <b>The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)</b>
 
     I put my ear to the rolling hills of highland thunder.
-
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
-
-    This was very much a test-bed for photoshop brushes and adjustment layers I had yet to touch on, all while putting the speed in speedpaint.
-
-    <i>keyboard cait:</i> (album team, booklet commentary)
-
-    At one point I described this as something along the lines of "electric Scottish war music", and that still stands. The melody in this song is absolutely iconic, if you ask me, and it gets INCREDIBLY amped. Maybe enough to see what lies under that voltaic fault. (Spoiler: It's just a lot of xenon.) Also, the lyrics to this song are "DANGER HIGH VOLTAGE". That is all.
 ---
 Track: Ghosts
 Suffix Directory: true
@@ -2205,17 +2205,21 @@ Commentary: |-
 Track: Cleopatra's Cocktail Party
 Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
+    Cleopatra's Cocktail Party (LOPAN)
+  Annotation: >-
+    Tumblr audio embed on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35604745508/cleopatras-cocktail-party-land-of-pyramids-and)
+- Name: >-
     Cleopatra's Cocktail Party (Land of Pyramids and Neon)
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35604745508/cleopatras-cocktail-party-land-of-pyramids-and), name with Land title
+    Tumblr post text on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35604745508/cleopatras-cocktail-party-land-of-pyramids-and)
 - Name: >-
     Land of Pyramids and Neon
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/52824947464/land-of-pyramids-and-neon-happy-612-heres-some), later name
+    Tumblr audio embed and post text on [complete track](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/52824947464/land-of-pyramids-and-neon-happy-612-heres-some)
 - Name: >-
     Land Of Pyramids And Neon
   Annotation: >-
-    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/land-of-pyramids-and-neon), final capitalization
+    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/land-of-pyramids-and-neon)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:45'
@@ -3253,17 +3257,25 @@ Commentary: |-
 Track: Tragic Heights
 Additional Names:
 - Name: >-
+    LOTAK
+  Annotation: >-
+    Tumblr audio embed on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35879549166/tragic-heights-land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
+- Name: >-
     Tragic Heights (Land of Tombs and Krypton)
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35879549166/tragic-heights-land-of-tombs-and-krypton), name with Land title
+    Tumblr post text on [WIP](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/35879549166/tragic-heights-land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
+- Name: >-
+    LOTAK 1
+  Annotation: >-
+    Tumblr audio embed on [complete track](https://www.tumblr.com/eidolonorpheus/53159308507/land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
 - Name: >-
     Land of Tombs and Krypton
   Annotation: >-
-    [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/53159308507/land-of-tombs-and-krypton), later name
+    Tumblr post text on [complete track](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/53159308507/land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
 - Name: >-
-    Tombs and Krypton
+    Tombs And Krypton
   Annotation: >-
-    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton), final name
+    [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:02'
@@ -3285,6 +3297,12 @@ Commentary: |-
     This is one of Ferkol's 3 tracks [[track:highland-thunder|that were]] [[track:cleopatras-cocktail-party|created for]] the planets of the alpha session. (In particular, this was created for Dirk's planet: The Land of Tombs and Krypton.) Although this song never saw an official release, now you can enjoy it here, on Land of Fans and Music 4. Or on Ferkol's soundcloud. You can also listen to this song [on Ferkol's soundcloud.](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton)
 
     Starting off with simple choir alongside plucked strings, this piece builds up slightly, before letting a synthesizer take us deeper, as if we are descending onto the surface of Dirk's planet. As the piece continues, more and more electronic instruments come in, as the landscape becomes harsher and harsher. Yet, throughout it all, the strings remain steadfast.
+
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> ([SoundCloud comment](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton), 1/12/2017)
+
+    > Are you going to be doing any more of these for the other planets?
+
+    Probably not at this point. LoPaN, LoTaK, and LoMaX needed themes at the time since LoCaH was already introduced with one, so I thought I could fill in the blanks for those three.
 ---
 Track: Waltz for Calliope
 Artists: