lilith nov 3 review + changelog

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam4.yaml b/album/lofam4.yaml
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@@ -684,17 +684,19 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track was composed entirely backwards; That means I was constantly exporting WAVs seeing if the "forward" track I was making was sounding good backwards. It was a fun and interesting way to make music.
 
-    <i>Joe Ouellet:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://dj7music.tumblr.com/post/47857256875), 4/13/2013)
+    <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> (album help, booklet commentary)
+
+    You think they'd set up a bench by the road, but nooooooooooo. John has to sit on the grass, thanks to those inconsiderate jerks. The salamander probably had a hand in it. Damn that salamander.
 
-    <b>Intermission- by DoubleJoeSeven</b>
+    <i>Joe Ouellet:</i> ([Tumblr](https://dj7music.tumblr.com/post/47857256875), excerpt, 4/13/2013)
 
     Happy 4/13/13 everyone! To celebrate, I made a new song! In a style similar to a song or two on <i>[[album:the-felt]]</i> album, this song is backwards. It reflects John's time searching LOMAX for his friends. It was my first time composing this way and I think it turned out quite well!
 
     Have a great rest of the day, and may there be many amazing new updates as Homestuck draws to a close this year!
 
-    <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> (album help, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Homestuck:</i> ([SoundCloud artwork](https://soundcloud.com/doublejoeseven-1/intermission))
 
-    You think they'd set up a bench by the road, but nooooooooooo. John has to sit on the grass, thanks to those inconsiderate jerks. The salamander probably had a hand in it. Damn that salamander.
+    <img src="media/misc/intermission-soundcloud.png" width="300">
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