more commentary annotations

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diff --git a/album/lofam2.yaml b/album/lofam2.yaml
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--- a/album/lofam2.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam2.yaml
@@ -163,13 +163,10 @@ Art Tags:
 - Feferi
 - Dream Bubbles
 Commentary: |-
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     No Commentary. Sorry fellow fans and booklet readers. No haiku this time either. Just an empty page, with nothing to entertain you except the track title, artist credits, and pretty arts to the right.
     SCREW THAT.
     I'm gonna fill these empty pages with a story, just for you. I haven't written anything since high school English class. You're in for a treat. It's gonna be<br>S<br>T<br>U<br>P<br>I<br>D
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
-    (per [[track:jungle-3|LoFaM 4 standard]], ive highlighted commentary from people besides the original musicians or cover artists in bold!)
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
     <i>DUSK FALLS ACROSS A SAFFROWN MEADOW. A SINGLE BLADE OF CRABGRASS UNDULATES VOLUMINOUSLY AMIDST THE RAPTUROUS BREEZE, ONLY TO HALT ITS SWAY SUDDENLY AND CRUNCHINGLY AS IT IS CRASSLY CRUSHED UNDERFOOT BY AN IMMENSE FOOT (SPECIFICALLY THE UNDERNEATH PART OF THAT FOOT). THE OWNER OF THE AFOREMENTIONED FOOT LOOKS DOWNWARD WITH AN AIR OF BAFFLED ASTONISHMENT, IN A SIMILAR FASHION TO HOW A MOOSE CAUGHT IN A UFO TRACTOR BEAM MIGHT LOOK AT A BLADE OF CRABGRASS IT HAD JUST TRODDEN ON. THIS ISN'T A SIMILE.</i>
     <i>"EUUUUUUUUNGH," GROANS THE ABDUCTEE MOOSE AS IT RISES.</i>
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@@ -228,7 +225,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Skaian Skirmish
 - Skaian Shuffle
 Commentary: |-
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     NO COMMENTARY HERE!
     <i>continued from [[Cuddlefish]];</i>
     <i>AN EERILY IRRIDESCENT INCANDESCENCE ENVELOPS THE BEHEMOTH ELK AS IT JOURNEYS HEAVENWARD, UNWILLINGLY ABANDONING THE FLATTENED DIGITARIUM STRAND IN FAVOUR OF THE CHILL EMPTINESS OF THE FRIGID EVENING ATMOSPHERE. DEER-TICKS ATTEMPT TO EVACUATE THEIR MANGY HOST, ONLY TO FIND THEMSELVES DRAWN CONGRUENTLY SKYWARD. OAK-LIKE LIMBS THRASH FLACIDLY, FLAILING FRUITLESSLY FOR A FOOTHOLD, BUT FINDING FEWER THAN FEW. AFTER A SCANT MOMENT OF MOOSE DESPAIR, THE HULKING BEAST RESIGNS ITSELF TO INEVITABILITY, AND CEASES ITS STRUGGLE.</i>
@@ -357,7 +354,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Jackpot
 Commentary: |-
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     NO COMMENTARY HERE!
     <i>continued from [[Skaian Starstorm]]...</i>
     <i>AS THE ANTLERED ALCES ACCELERATES ITS ASCENSION, ABJECT AWE ASSUAGES ANXIOUSNESS. IT IS DAZZLED BY THE GOLDEN TUNDRA STRETCHING BEYOND THE MOONLIT HORIZON, CUMULUS CLOUds STREAKING BY LIKE A NUDE ATTENTION SEEKER AT A SPORTS MATCH. AS IF COMPLETING THE METAPHOR, THERE IS ALSO A NUDE MAN FLOATING ALONGSIDE.</i>
@@ -594,7 +591,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Kalibration:</i>
     Its a song, I made it, the computer<br>Great it's RJ music track enjoyed, that could bring<br>(⅃°ヘ°)⅃
     yeah i dont know how i feel about that track i guess its a song and i made it ans well, thats more than i can say for a lot of things
-    <i><b>Lambda Bledsoe:</b></i>
+    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i> (album organizer)
     kali has such a way with words
 ---
 Track: Showtime (End Strife Remix)
@@ -762,7 +759,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     (THIS TRACK ALSO CAUSED ME A LOT OF PAIN AND SUFFERING BUT IT WAS MORE LIKE "DEAR GOODNESS WHERE DO ALL THESE LAYERS KEEP COMING FROM" THAN "OH GOD HOW AM I GOING TO COLOR ALL THIS BLACK.")
     As another side note, the layered .lip file for this had a total of 60 layers not counting the texture layer!
     BONUS: When I was starting work on this, instead of copying the texture layer, I accidentally copied Jack over from the layered version of the Stalemate track art. I couldn't bear to delete him from the file, so he got to stay on the condition that his layer stayed invisible. Sometimes I'd make it visible when I was bored! Poor guy just keeps getting chased by things - first an angry PM and now an angry sea denizen!)
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     <s>note: Lunise wrote seven paragraphs about the creative process behind this wonderful art piece. I can only fit the first one on the page.</s>
     Here is the full commentary to the rise of the denizens track art. c:
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@@ -819,7 +816,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Rose
 - Consorts
 Commentary: |-
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     No commentary here!
     <i>continued from [[JackBot]];</i>
     <i>THE LUMINESCENT AURA SUBSIDES, AND BOTH OF THE UNCLOTHED EARTH CREATURES ARE PLUNGED INTO INKY BLACK DARKNESS. FAINT SOUNDS AND METALLIC SCRATCHING SUGGEST NEARBY MOVEMENT. THE MOOSE IS VISIBLY SHAKEN... AT LEAST IT WOULD BE IF IT WERE VISIBLE TO ANYBODY. BUT IT ISN'T BECAUSE OF THE DARKNESS.</i>
@@ -865,7 +862,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Jamie Paige Stanley:</i>
     Hello again!! Disk one is coming to a close. I hope you've enjoyed the fan land and of music so far!! This is a lullaby based mostly off of Homestuck Anthem by Clark "Plazmataz" Powell and Sburban Jungle by Michael Guy Bowman. It's really slow and sweet and has my favorite chord thingy ever which is the F to F minor thing going on there. It's all in all a song that you hopefully fall asleep listening to because that's what it's supposed to do!! And you might need a nap after listening to disk one. In fact, for the full Land of Fans and Musics Experience The Second™, take a nap in between the two disks. Yes. Anyways, I hope you enjoy our musical stylings and that you don't buy this album because that's illegal.
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     [END OF DISK 1]
 ---
 Section: Disk 2
@@ -886,13 +883,13 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - White King
 - Sburban Jungle
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i>
+    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i> (album organizer)
     Hi. I'm Lambda Bledsoe, or Xzaz. I started the project to put LoFaM2 together.
     I started reading Homestuck because of the music. It's fantastic.
     In some cases even moreso than the official music, the music that fans have made for it.
     This is to be expected, considering..... this album.
     I don't have some whimsical, vaguely inspiring words to put here, but thanks to everyone that helped make ths labum and everyone that's listened to it!
-     -λ
+    -λ
 ---
 Track: Brofessor Layton (Every Puzzle Has A Brolution)
 Artists:
@@ -1413,7 +1410,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Clark Powell:</i>
     This song was made at Christmas.
     It's not Christmas anymore.
-    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i>
+    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i> (album artist)
     this entire album was a joke at clark's expense
 ---
 Track: Finale Strife
@@ -1452,7 +1449,7 @@ Lyrics: ???
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Dante Basco:</i>
     one of my first comments for rose was "she's gangsta"... then when i met jade, i said she was gangsta too... it kinda just stuck in with the homestucks and this is a song that i dedicate to those girls... i'm glad everyone dug it.
-    <i><b>Lambda Bledsoe:</b></i>
+    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i> (album organizer)
     there <i>would</i> be lyrics here if i were capable of interpreting them.
 ---
 Track: Joy And Dreams Eternal
@@ -1607,7 +1604,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     When I started "Ave Dei Novi" (a song made just for Land of Fans and Music 2), I fully intended that it would be the biggest, strongest, most well-composed, best Homestuck fan composition I've worked on to date, a sort of capstone of Homestuck fan music. The first Land of Fans and Music had two of my early songs on it, and I felt it was appropriate that I do my best and show how far I'd come in a year for the second album. "Ave Dei Novi" takes its cue, partially, from the bombastic and incredible Gundam Unicorn soundtrack by Sawano Hiroyuki, especially in the orchestra and percussion grooves, which I worked very hard on. I think I'm most proud of the bongo groove breakdown in the middle and the "Atomyk Ebonpyre" section near the end. Those two parts ended up especially fantastic.
     <i>xkoraxayomex:</i>
     Overall I feel that the artwork suits the piece in terms of relativity and presentation. I think it looks refined and somewhat detailed, but there is room for improvement. When I read the title for the piece, Ascension, I automatically thought back to Jade's god tier, as it is simply gorgeous and I just love it. It was a milestone for her becoming an even more essential character in Homestuck.
-    <i><b>Lambda Bledsoe:</b></i>
+    <i>Lambda Bledsoe:</i> (album organizer)
     this song was originally titled "ascension", but there was to be another song on lofam2 with a similar title ("god tier ascension") (except now there isn't) so wmm changed it to"ave dei novi" which translates to "hail the new gods"
 ---
 Track: Nevermore (Can't Sleep, Crows Will Find Me)
@@ -1623,7 +1620,7 @@ Cover Art File Extension: jpg
 Art Tags:
 - Birds
 Commentary: |-
-    <i><b>Brad Griffin:</b></i>
+    <i>Brad Griffin:</i> (booklet editor)
     No commentary here!
     <i>continued from [[The Seer and the Tribesmen]]:</i>
     <i>THE NAKED FELLOW INTRODUCES HIMSELF IN RETURN. OVERJOYED, BNORKEL BARKS UP A CLOUD OF PUNGENT INK. THIS STARTLES THE MOOSE, WHO PROCEEDS TO INSTINCTIVELY CHARGE THEM BOTH. A FLURRY OF ACTIVITY! ANTLERS FLASH, TENTACLES FLAIL, EXPOSED FLESH JUTS OFFENSIVELY.</i>