general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
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--- a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Johnathan Griffiths was the track art man of the hour - There's even a mega drive controller there! And how are those shades staying on? All round awesome :)
 
-    <i>Jonathan Griffiths:</i>
+    <i>Jonathan Griffiths:</i> ([Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/greliz/24975647756/my-track-art-for-anbroids-v20-by-malcolm-brown), 6/12/2012)
 
     My track art for Anbroids V2.0 by Malcolm Brown off Homestuck Volume 9!
 
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - track:fin-induction
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://kingcheddarxvii.tumblr.com/post/24963011080/since-the-album-is-out-now-i-guess-its-okay-to))
+    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://kingcheddarxvii.tumblr.com/post/24963011080/since-the-album-is-out-now-i-guess-its-okay-to), 6/12/2012)
 
     Since the album is out now I guess it’s okay to post this!
 
@@ -702,11 +702,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Just in case one or two of you might not know, this song and fifty other great Homestuck tunes are all released together on [Volume 9](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/homestuck-vol-9-10-with-s-collide-and-act-7)!
 
-    <i>Nic Carey:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://tynic.tumblr.com/post/24964072895/full-version-of-the-track-art-i-did-for-clark))
-
-    Full version of the track art I did for Clark Powell’s track Austin, Atlantis, as seen on Homestuck Volume 9 (get it now go go go music music music)
+    <i>Nic Carey:</i> (full-size artwork, [Tumblr](https://tynic.tumblr.com/post/24964072895/full-version-of-the-track-art-i-did-for-clark), 6/12/2012)
 
     <img src="media/misc/austin-atlantis-full.jpg" width="375">
+
+    Full version of the track art I did for Clark Powell’s track Austin, Atlantis, as seen on Homestuck Volume 9 (get it now go go go music music music)
 Review Points:
 - Date Recorded: January 21, 2024
   Field: Commentary
@@ -769,7 +769,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Five-Four Stress
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20130312050422/http://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/post/25866980984/stress-homestuck-vol-9-track-commentary))
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20130312050422/http://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/post/25866980984/stress-homestuck-vol-9-track-commentary), 6/25/2012)
 
     art by [[artist:p-ro]] at [nomorepros.tumblr.com](https://nomorepros.tumblr.com). P-RO always does a maximally amazing job so why I asked her to draw the art is a non-question.
 
@@ -939,23 +939,21 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     What was excellent about working on this track is it's one of the first instances in a while where I had really freed myself from any preconceived goals for the song's form and just decided to write a track from start to finish and see what felt right. I ended up at sort of the golden length - the song begins to loop at 2:15, making it still functional as video game music, and fades out by 2:39. [[artist:tavia-morra|Tavia]] pointed out to me that pop songs that run a bit short of 3 minutes tend to be incredibly satisfying, especially for a first time listener, as they ask for your attention for an amount of time that doesn't wear you down. Out of all my tracks for Vol. 9, this is the one I find the easiest to listen to on a loop.
 
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Michael Guy Bowman Talks About His Homestuck Music](https://youtu.be/85VXWZTg-vo?t=2059), adapted to text, 7/20/2024)
-
-    Elephant Gun, I think that one was a bit Frank Zappa influenced. I like the weird breakdown on it that's jumping around. I think if I were playing a game and I had to do a little battle, and (gesturing) press my buttons and pick my attacks while that was playing, I would be pretty hype, and not get, like, bored and driven crazy, the way that sometimes you can be in an RPG.
-
     <i>8bitkitten:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/25391031646), 6/18/2012)
 
     I was thrilled to get the opportunity of illustrating your music. It’s always so gosh darn fun. =3
 
-    <i>8bitkitten:</i> ([Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24979824333), 6/12/2012)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Michael Guy Bowman Talks About His Homestuck Music](https://youtu.be/85VXWZTg-vo?t=2059), adapted to text, 7/20/2024)
 
-    After listening to this energetic strife theme, I imagined Jake English is hunting down a pesky Tinkerbull. &gt;:3
+    Elephant Gun, I think that one was a bit Frank Zappa influenced. I like the weird breakdown on it that's jumping around. I think if I were playing a game and I had to do a little battle, and (gesturing) press my buttons and pick my attacks while that was playing, I would be pretty hype, and not get, like, bored and driven crazy, the way that sometimes you can be in an RPG.
 
     <i>8bitkitten:</i> (alternate artwork, [Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24979824333), 6/12/2012)
 
     <img src="media/misc/elephant-gun-bonus.png" width="300">
 
-    <i>8bitkitten:</i> ([Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24982629793), 6/12/2012)
+    After listening to this energetic strife theme, I imagined Jake English is hunting down a pesky Tinkerbull. &gt;:3
+
+    <i>8bitkitten:</i> (alternate artwork, [Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24982629793), 6/12/2012)
 
     <b>Elephant Gun post edit</b>
 
@@ -1048,7 +1046,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Jade
 - Davesprite
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>8bitkitten:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24980972616))
+    <i>8bitkitten:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://kitten-burrito.tumblr.com/post/24980972616), 6/12/2012)
 
     This soothing track sets the atmosphere for Davesprite, Jade Harley, and John Egbert as they cross the Yellow Yard.  UuU
 ---
@@ -1302,13 +1300,13 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Lancer - asmolfirefly.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>clorinspats:</i> ([Tumblr](https://clorinart.tumblr.com/post/24966295286/track-art-for-lancer-by-plazmataz-i-actually))
+    <i>clorinspats:</i> ([Tumblr](https://clorinart.tumblr.com/post/24966295286/track-art-for-lancer-by-plazmataz-i-actually), 6/12/2012)
 
     Track art for Lancer by [[artist:clark-powell|Plazmataz]]~
 
     I actually have two other versions of this pic. :V I’m very happy that I was given the opportunity to do more track art for the Homestuck albums! :3
 
-    <i>clorinspats:</i> (wiki communications over email, excerpt)
+    <i>clorinspats:</i> (wiki communications over email, excerpt, 1/18/2024)
 
     Honestly I'm super stoked that someone still remembers I did the art for these two tracks! You're very lucky, I do actually have the alternates around still, and I've attached them here. One is a high contrast black and white option I gave to Clark and the other is a softer version, so she'd have the choice of the lot.
 
@@ -1345,7 +1343,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - "Three's a Crowd - Unknown.mid"
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>ari:</i> ([Tumblr](https://arijandro.tumblr.com/post/24967175748))
+    <i>ari:</i> ([Tumblr](https://arijandro.tumblr.com/post/24967175748), 6/12/2012)
 
     Track art for [[artist:robert-j-lake|RJ's]] Three’s A Crowd on the new MSPA album.
 
@@ -1683,7 +1681,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <small>#HEAVY BURN FILTER</small>
 
-    <i>Worthikids:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://worthikids.tumblr.com/post/22141399172/messy-gif-version-the-texture-doesnt-loop), alternate artwork, 4/30/2012)
+    <i>Worthikids:</i> (alternate artwork, [Tumblr](https://worthikids.tumblr.com/post/22141399172/messy-gif-version-the-texture-doesnt-loop), 4/30/2012)
 
     <img src="media/misc/candles-and-clockwork-alpha-version-bonus.gif" width="300">