general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
index ea5cce93..04f0077e 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Sburban Jungle - Twix Stix.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, from [Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
 
     "Sburban Jungle" finally comes into its own with its full reveal after being on the shelf for months. That we didn't delay the thing further amazes me considering the scale of the story, although I'm still indebted to [[artist:andrew-hussie|Andrew]] for making the animated sequence which the song accompanied especially iconic. Who doesn't love the picture of Rose making her incredibly stylized jump to catch the bottle during the piano break?
 
@@ -299,11 +299,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Sburban Jungle was so clearly necessary to expand upon, and I went ahead and just wrote the full thing out, you know, with the big bridge, with the piano breakdown and all that stuff, just to see what would happen. Because, actually, the main emphasis was going to be on loops, originally - we thought that everything that appeared in the comic was just going to be a piece of looping media, the idea that he was going to do full animations, with a beginning, middle and end, that wasn't in the scope of the project yet. Finishing out Sburban Jungle and saying, like, "now *here's* something that could progress from start to finish, and stand on its own," motivated him to later bring it back at [[flash:1149|the end of Act 3]] as this big moment. And that's what ended up happening, with a lot of the project, is [that] people said, you know, "let's move away from just doing loops, and let's also focus on full-length pieces." Everybody just started working that much harder, as we saw that Andrew was willing to do that kind of thing.
 
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PP6916yGx6c), excerpt)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PP6916yGx6c), excerpt, 5/26/2023)
 
     The theme song of #Homestuck, first appearing as [[track:sburban-jungle-brief-mix|an excerpt]] on [[flash:137|page 137]] and then later in full on page 1149 ([[flash:1149]]). The full song was originally released by What Pumpkin on [[album:homestuck-vol-4]] on April 13, 2010.
 
-    <i>Alice Hu:</i>
+    <i>Alice Hu:</i> ([Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/coccodoodles/718440598164652032/big-thank-you-to-michael-guy-bowman-for-featuring), 5/27/2023)
 
     Big thank you to Michael Guy Bowman for featuring my art on this new official upload of Sburban Jungle!
 
@@ -377,6 +377,8 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The arpeggio part at the end goes between the left, both, and right speakers sequentially. I was too lazy to set the channel settings manually, so I did each note on a different instrument, which is set to each speaker channel. Not many people know that, and I think it actually made it a living hell for remixers who got a hold of the original file.
 
+    <i>Buzinkai:</i> (["Hi, I'm George Buzinkai, writer of The Doctor and other such songs. AMA?"](https://old.reddit.com/r/homestuck/comments/1afvkb/hi_im_george_buzinkai_writer_of_the_doctor_and/), 3/17/2013)
+
     <i>(On March 17, 2013, [Buzinkai ran an AMA - "Ask Me Anything" - on the r/Homestuck subreddit.](https://old.reddit.com/r/homestuck/comments/1afvkb/hi_im_george_buzinkai_writer_of_the_doctor_and/) Select responses are listed below; you can visit the full AMA on the [Wayback Machine](https://web.archive.org/web/20230625011746/https://old.reddit.com/r/homestuck/comments/1afvkb/hi_im_george_buzinkai_writer_of_the_doctor_and/) as well. Banner art below is from a [fundraiser](https://www.gofundme.com/f/buzinkai) ran for their first album in 2016.)</i>
 
     <img src="media/misc/buzinkai-banner.png" width="720">
@@ -485,7 +487,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I can't thank you all enough for this!
 
-    <i>emil:</i> ([Tumblr](https://emil.tumblr.com/post/666266192199172096))
+    <i>emil:</i> ([Tumblr](https://emil.tumblr.com/post/666266192199172096), 10/28/2021)
 
     i feel like people forget that homestuck had a lot of talented musicians working on it, not just toby
 
@@ -493,13 +495,13 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     (edited to include her correct name)
 
-    <i>blunttheking:</i> ([Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/blunttheking/666268683781521408/homestuck-doctor-i-know-i-already-reblogged))
+    <i>blunttheking:</i> ([Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/blunttheking/666268683781521408/homestuck-doctor-i-know-i-already-reblogged), 10/28/2021)
 
     i know i already reblogged this but here's Doctor so you can remind yourself what a great song it is
 
     *[Bandcamp embed]*
 
-    <i>Clark Powell:</i> ([Tumblr](https://plazmataz.tumblr.com/post/669762656269484032/the-song-doctor-was-a-collaboration-piece-between))
+    <i>Clark Powell:</i> ([Tumblr](https://plazmataz.tumblr.com/post/669762656269484032/the-song-doctor-was-a-collaboration-piece-between), 12/5/2021)
 
     the song Doctor was a collaboration piece between me and Buzinkai. They made the super lush chiptune that’s the backbone of the song, and I arranged it with other instruments to try and really bring it to life. As one of the first songs either of us finished for the comic in those early days, we were both so proud of it ☺️