general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 42 insertions, 42 deletions

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--- a/album/homestuck-vol-10.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-10.yaml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     ...Probably.
 
-    <i>Marcy Nabors:</i> (co-organizer, mastering engineer)
+    <i>Marcy Nabors:</i> (co-organizer, mastering engineer, booklet commentary)
 
     Homestuck Volume 10, the big 1-0!
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Enjoy the tunes!
 
-    <i>Lexxy:</i> (cover artist)
+    <i>Lexxy:</i> (cover artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Homestuck will always hold a warm, nostalgic place in my heart, so despite drafting up a handful of concepts - from the graphic and representational to the tongue-in-cheek referential - I ultimately ended up going with the one that expressed that affection the most.
 
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     (yes it was totally that easy.<br>
     no you can't stop me from pretending this.)
 
-    <i>PJ Tush:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>PJ Tush:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     WOW 7 years of Homestuck. I only hopped on this hectic bandwagon in 2011, but it was definitely worth it. I NEVER would have expected to be able to contribute to and take part in Homestuck itself. This is like a dream come true. THAT BEING SAID: CREATA!
 
@@ -382,31 +382,31 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This was the best remix I ever worked on. There was another remix of this song that didn't make it onto the album, but you can use your imagination for that.
 
-    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer)
+    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     actually clark is wrong and u dont have to use ur imagination [[Beatup (Shutdown)|here u go]] ... bye
 
-    <i>Clark Powell:</i> (composer)
+    <i>Clark Powell:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     step on me Riki
 
-    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer)
+    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     i step on nobody
 
-    <i>Clark Powell:</i> (composer)
+    <i>Clark Powell:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     pls make an exception for me
 
-    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> (project manager)
+    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> (project manager, booklet commentary)
 
     is that your actual commentary i'll literally put this all in
 
-    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer)
+    <i>Riki Tsuji:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     yes RJ literally put this in also Clark I love you but this, I cannot make an exception for. Please go step on yourself.
 
-    <i>Shan Murphy:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Shan Murphy:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     This is a Strider song and I just wanted to draw both Strider bros in action..
 
@@ -449,23 +449,23 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     *You Killed My Father (Prepare To Die) is, as you may have noticed, a collaborative effort from a bunch of fanmusicians, except I guess we're all Homestuck Official now. Homestuck's been a pretty big part of our lives, as you can see from these testimonials:*
 
-    <i>pixelseph:</i> (bassist)
+    <i>pixelseph:</i> (bassist, booklet commentary)
 
     Homestuck had been one of the best experiences of my life, and being able to contribute music to it on several occasions fulfilled a few of my dreams.
 
     It's been a massive pleasure to work with y'all.
 
-    <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i> (orchestra, choir)
+    <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i> (orchestra, choir, booklet commentary)
 
     The amount of musical fan activity that came out of Homestuck was really quite incredible, and something I've never seen in any fandom before. For all the highs and lows in the Homestuck fandom the way the fandom appreciated fanmusic was special.
 
-    <i>David Dycus:</i> (composer, synths)
+    <i>David Dycus:</i> (composer, synths, booklet commentary)
 
     Homestuck gave me a sense of musical purpose I have not experienced before or since.
 
     ...Actually, that sounds stupid. Don't print any of that.
 
-    <i>Catboss:</i> (drums, mixing)
+    <i>Catboss:</i> (drums, mixing, booklet commentary)
 
     Literally everyone I know is a Homestuck.
 
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Please kill me.
 
-    <i>Mika B.:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Mika B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Being reeled in both by the song title and the clash between the two characters (and the music, of course), creating art for this was exciting.
 
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     That sounds ridiculous though.
 
-    <i>Sera B.:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Sera B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     For this piece I wanted to go really comic book-y, so I leaned towards a Daredevil influence for Terezi (for obvious reasons). Initially, I had her in a more detailed setting in extreme light and shadow, with Gamzee's silhouette looming over her. Totally by accident I ended up deleting the background layers, leaving just the strip of red lava as the orizon-- which looked way cooler than what I had before and gave it the comic-book-cover vibe I was shooting for.
 
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     While [[Harlequin|"Harlequin"]] was the first piece of mine to appear in Homestuck, the first piece I actually wrote for it was [[Aggrieve|"Aggrieve"]], and so I felt it was only fitting to make another mix of it for the final album. Plus it gave me an excuse to try writing it in a metal style! I'm not sure it could still be considered Rose's "official theme" anymore (not after the mountain of excellent music the team's written for her over the years), but I still like to think of it that way.
 
-    <i>Rachel Lake:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Rachel Lake:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Just, put, like, "It was cool to work on this," I don't know!
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@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     So, it's "Stride", my little sequel-of-sorts to [[Upward Movement (Dave Owns)|Upward Movement]], featuring samples from [[Moonsetter]] and [[Showdown]], and an updated version of that classic Dave Strider drum loop.
 
-    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Fuck the rug.
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@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     And a fun fact: the double kick drum is augmented by a sample of the kick drums used in Septic Flesh's song [[track:anubis-septicflesh|"Anubis"]] to give it that perfect death metal punch.
 
-    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Some of the more "mechanical" designs in Sburb were fricken cool.
 
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     So, you know, here it is. Freefall hems pretty close to my original remix's overall arrangement, except it swaps out all the samples for newly recorded material (all me) and riffs way, way more loosely on the song quotes. This song is older than [[flash:4109|[S] Cascade]] is, and I think the difference between the original version from all those years ago and this is one of the most striking comparisons you can make to show how far I've come.
 
-    <i>Nico J. Dolloso:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Nico J. Dolloso:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     I was approached by RJ to do a track art of my choosing for the album and decided to work closely with him for the track "Freefall." The track's subject was the EoA5 flash [[flash:4109|'[S] Cascade']], which was from what I remember a clusterfuck on many levels in the Homestuck universe and for the MSPA wegbsite & Newground's hosting servers.
 
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     So, ultimately, it's a win-win!
 
-    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (alternate artworks, [Tumblr](https://kingcheddarxvii.tumblr.com/post/146932969357/some-alternate-flavors-of-castle-one-of-the))
+    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (alternate artworks, [Tumblr](https://kingcheddarxvii.tumblr.com/post/146932969357/some-alternate-flavors-of-castle-one-of-the), 7/5/2016)
 
     Some alternate flavors of Castle, one of the tracks I did art for in HS vol. 10! I cycled through a bunch of different color schemes before settling on the one in the album!
 
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     (I am sure Mr. Doldinger - much like a certain ill-fated group of bullies - never could have seen THAT one coming.)
 
-    <i>Alyssa Lee Dalangin:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Alyssa Lee Dalangin:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     I wanted to illustrate Skaian Happy Flight when I heard it because the music was so whimsical and uplifting, I knew doing the imagery to match it would be fun. When I asked the musician what their vision was for a scenario or character, they said they didn't have anything in particular in mind (though they mentioned some influences from The Neverending Story, which Homestuck has also referenced.
 
@@ -838,7 +838,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Even so, the DX suffix is a bit of an homage to the traidtion of releasing enhanced versions of old video games.
 
-    <i>ranchuppi:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>ranchuppi:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Catch me on the roof in my mid 30's pwning a 9th grader with a sword.
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@@ -883,13 +883,13 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Also Paul.
 
-    <i>Paul Henderson:</i> (vocals)
+    <i>Paul Henderson:</i> (vocals, booklet commentary)
 
     I recorded some vocals for Explare (as it was called at the time) like a year ago bc marcy was like "hey this might be on the next homestuck album?" and i really wanted to be on a homestuck album, so i show up for like twelve seconds. this is a dream come true
 
     anyway bye
 
-    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     ¯\\\_(ツ)_/¯
 
@@ -932,27 +932,27 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     In the end, I'm glad to finally share it with the world in some form, and I hope the world enjoys it.
 
-    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> (producer, arranger)
+    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> (producer, arranger, booklet commentary)
 
     This is really Luke's song. I started the project file but he made it his own. The crow noises are mine.
 
-    <i>PJ Tush:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>PJ Tush:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Being so high energy, I wanted to make the piece as colorful as possible, but not unattractively saturated. Initially I planned on reflecting the characters in dream bubbles of their respective colors, but decided to depict them in full mugshot instead.
 
     Each character is lightly engulfed in a colorful overlay in front of the chaotic, perpetually expanding infinity of gay space.
 
-    <i>Fenn:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Fenn:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     <i>Feel</i> is a very powerful song full of energy. We were inspired by the tension filled events occuring during the 3 year span of time between those stuck on the troll meteor, flying through space towards an unknowing and terrifying future.
 
-    <i>Mika B.:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Mika B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     When rendering the final rendition of the track art piece, I hoped to give it a complete finish that would accustom the pieces lovely concept art. I enjoyed working to convey the spectacular energy Jade is known to behold, particularly with her hair.
 
     Overall, this piece was a great enjoyment to work on, and I was able to accompany two great artists in their work to create art to represent Feel, as well as the teens' spiraling adventure on the gay meteor.
 
-    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> ([YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yngy9XIzRLY&lc=UgheYBDHMQfgt3gCoAEC))
+    <i>Robert J! Lake:</i> ([YouTube comment](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yngy9XIzRLY&lc=UgheYBDHMQfgt3gCoAEC), 6/28/2016)
 
     > RJ, if you arranged this piece, then there must be an original you used as a base. Is there some sort of file or sheet for that track?
 
@@ -975,13 +975,13 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:evanescence-maria-schneider
 - Sea of Derse
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Erik Scheele:</i>
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> (composer, booklet commentary)
 
     Originally my thought for this piece was Spades Slick and Ms. Paint on a gondola, something semi-romantic and jazzy and very ship-worthy. Hence the accordion. But then, like any other time I started feeling vaguely like making something into a piece for shipping people, I actually made the piece and got a way better idea for what it would be for, aka post-game everyone-hanging-out reflection-relaxation. And hey, the accordion still worked.
 
     I don't expect anyone else to be a Maria Schneider fan and also encounter this piece, but if they do, yes I pretty much took the first 4 bars of [[track:evanescence-maria-schneider|Evanescence]] and used it as the basis for the piece. A few other cues came from that piece as well.
 
-    <i>Richard Gung:</i>
+    <i>Richard Gung:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     A chill tune deserves a classy cover.
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@@ -1013,7 +1013,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Oh if you want to check out Justin's work, [go here](https://www.facebook.com/FliteDnB/).
 
-    <i>Lunise:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Lunise:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     So I was minding my own business one day, and then all of a sudden Jeremy came and asked me if I wanted to do some art for Volume 10. Naturally, I obliged, and I asked him if he had anything specific in mind that he wanted me to draw for it, and he basically told me to draw whatever came to mind. So I listened to the WIP of the track he sent me a few times to get a feel for what I wanted to draw for it, and jotted down a couple of concept sketches for what I wanted to do!
 
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     Supa hot beats - I drop that.<br>
     John and Aradia - I ship that.
 
-    <i>Tensei, Makin|[[artist:tensei]]:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://web.archive.org/web/20160612172425/http://tenseimusic.tumblr.com/post/145791143925/also-call-the-song-ascend-if-theres-any-song))
+    <i>Tensei, Makin|[[artist:tensei]]:</i> (Tumblr [(dead link)](https://tenseimusic.tumblr.com/post/145791143925/also-call-the-song-ascend-if-theres-any-song))
 
     > Anonymous asked: Also, call the song "Ascend", if there's any song that's earned the right it's that one
 
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     There's a little bit of Enya influence sneaking in, particularly with all the humming choirs, and then halfway through we go into a bit of Yasunori Mitsuda inspired celtic dance and a little excerpt of [[Darling Kanaya]] before slowing down and ending on the Aggrieve melody again.
 
-    <i>Sera B.:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Sera B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     When Malcolm told me this was a Rose/Kanaya piece I got hung up on the idea of them having a little dance together in the meteor library. I figured it would be a sweet way to demonstrate the darker, more elegant aspects of the song and its liveliness at the same time.
 
@@ -1169,7 +1169,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     At least, that's how I'm justifying it. In reality this can be considered a Calliope piece at heart.
 
-    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>slogbait:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     This is a realy fantastic song that I'd been rooting for from the start, and when given the chance to do art for it I was intent on making sure it got the beautiful art it deserved.
 
@@ -1307,11 +1307,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     For obvious reasons I decided to drop one of those words when naming this arrangement.
 
-    <i>Worthikids:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Worthikids:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
-    Alex's original request for this art was "so here's the thing......
-    could u draw the what pumpkin logo....
-    but with an exclamation point instead of a question mark
+    Alex's original request for this art was "so here's the thing......<br>
+    could u draw the what pumpkin logo....<br>
+    but with an exclamation point instead of a question mark<br>
     maybe candy corn vampire-problem sleuth could be holding it?"
 
     I remember drawing the altered logo all plain by itself and sending that to Alex,
@@ -1320,7 +1320,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     but I was ultimately irked and redid it with candy corn PS a few days later.
 
-    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> ([Tumblr](https://rosettimusic.tumblr.com/post/100946585565/pumpkin-cravings-for-orchestra-original-by-seth))
+    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> ([Tumblr](https://rosettimusic.tumblr.com/post/100946585565/pumpkin-cravings-for-orchestra-original-by-seth), 10/25/2014)
 
     <b>[[Pumpkin Cravings]] for orchestra</b>
 
@@ -1374,7 +1374,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I'm hopeful that you believe in them, as well.
 
-    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (track artist)
+    <i>Kiko B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     Look how far we've come! Beatfox did such a spectacular job combining so many early Homestuck themes here. Listening to "Conclude" for the first time was a major nostalgia rush!