data tweaks & final lyric updates!

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/album/beyond-canon.txt b/album/beyond-canon.txt
index 5d2c006..28a2d4b 100644
--- a/album/beyond-canon.txt
+++ b/album/beyond-canon.txt
@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/exclusion-zone
 - https://youtu.be/yllaAhv5EYA?list=PLnVpmehyaOFbH-1hH663k70qBQp5jc_CU
 Lyrics:
-    (vocalizations of "ee" and "ah")<br>always<br>you --<br>(vocalizations of "ee" and "ah" continue)<br>-- made a monster<br>ha ha ha<br>ha ha-ah
-    <i>"You sit up there all day long and do <b>nothing.</b> Except come down and make tea.</i>
-    you just made a monster (x4)
-    (sampled vocoder breakdown begins)
-    the skyline, the skyline, the<br>storyteller<br>the skyline, the skyline<br>the storyteller
-    you just made a monster (x4)
+    (Always you)
+    Made a monster<br>Ha, ha, ha<br>Ha-ah-ah
+    (You sit up there all day long and do nothing but come down and make tea.)
+    You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster
+    The skyline, the skyline, the storyteller<br>The skyline, the skyline, the storyteller
+    You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster<br>You just made a monster
 Commentary:
     <i>horizon:</i>
     (<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yllaAhv5EYA">YouTube</a>)
@@ -204,14 +204,14 @@ URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/the-leaving
 - https://youtu.be/rb3ZqqiLGYE?list=PLnVpmehyaOFbH-1hH663k70qBQp5jc_CU
 Lyrics:
-    Smoke is all I breathe,<br>is all you hear, is all in me.<br>Taste the drier air.<br>There's nothing left.
-    Letters fill the empty space.<br>There's so much space that's left untouched.<br>Running scares me more than God,<br>but staying can't sustain.
-    The sparks of fire, earthbound,<br>have found your home. Be gone now.<br>It's not your fault, you know this.<br>But the leaving is just the same.
-    I feel the wind beneath my arms.<br>It's warmer now than I recall.<br>Have you heard the news today?<br>They closed the school.
-    You and I have been through this,<br>have been through that, have been at ease.<br>Nothing scares me more than God,<br>and Nothing cannot sustain.
-    The sparks of fire, earthbound,<br>have found your home. Be gone now.<br>It's not your fault, you know this.<br>But the leaving is still the same.
-    You sent me fire.<br>Fire, I'll tear my throat out.<br>Burn my blackened lips.<br>You gave me fire.<br>Fire, I'll tear my heart out.<br>I'd rather tear my heart out.<br>But I can't stay here.
-    The sparks of fire earthbound<br>have found your home. Be gone now.<br>It's not your fault, you know this.<br>But you can't help but turn around.<br>The embers haven't faded.<br>The love you left, unmade.<br>It's not your fault, you know this.<br>But the leaving is still the same.
+    Smoke is all I breathe<br>Is all you hear, is all in me<br>Taste the drier air<br>There's nothing left
+    Letters fill the empty space<br>There's so much space that's left untouched<br>Running scares me more than God<br>But staying can't sustain
+    The sparks of fire, earthbound<br>Have found your home, be gone now<br>It's not your fault, you know this<br>But the leaving is just the same
+    I feel the wind beneath my arms<br>It's warmer now than I recall<br>Have you heard the news today?<br>They closed the school
+    You and I have been through this<br>Have been through that, have been at ease<br>Nothing scares me more than God<br>And Nothing cannot sustain
+    The sparks of fire, earthbound<br>Have found your home, be gone now<br>It's not your fault, you know this<br>But the leaving is still the same
+    You sent me fire<br>Fire, I'll tear my throat out<br>Burn my blackened lips<br>You gave me fire<br>Fire, I'll tear my heart out<br>I'd rather tear my heart out<br>But I can't stay here
+    The sparks of fire, earthbound<br>Have found your home, be gone now<br>It's not your fault, you know this<br>But you can't help but turn around<br>The embers haven't faded<br>The love you left, unmade<br>It's not your fault, you know this<br>But the leaving is still the same
 Commentary:
     <i>Marcus Carline:</i>
     (<a href="https://twitter.com/marcuscarline/status/1249814813179428864">Twitter</a>)
@@ -434,6 +434,9 @@ Lyrics:
     i burned the bridges thoroughly but still everyone's trusting me again<br>and i should be relieved but it happened so suddenly<br>and i know in my heart i haven't earned this,<br>but everyone acts like my concern isn't a problem<br>like nothing is wrong with my very involvement
     but i know how the song ends
     i can't begin to list the times that i've walked<br>along this road and concluded<br>that nothing that i've done here will make sense, in the end<br>but i find that kind of soothing
+    [i'm<br>pulled back<br>once again<br>and i told myself,<br>told myself,<br>told myself<br>i wouldn't be on this adventure
+    but i'm haunted by<br>all of these memories<br>that i have of four kids<br>and the game they played together
+    it's been a little bit since the last time]
 Commentary:
     <i>Robert J! Lake:</i>
     (<a href="https://twitter.com/spellbang/status/1249755343615393792">Twitter</a>)