turned SoundCloud description for Thunderhead into an excerpt

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/album/loftlocked-vol-1.yaml b/album/loftlocked-vol-1.yaml
index ec2cdf1f..1c402a28 100644
--- a/album/loftlocked-vol-1.yaml
+++ b/album/loftlocked-vol-1.yaml
@@ -213,6 +213,9 @@ Commentary: |-
 
    It was really hot.
 #citation: Jebb's DMs to Pat: "Pat: honestly it was probably me, sound like me at age 17" "Jebb: Lmao"
+   <i>Lilithtreasure:</i> (wiki editor)
+   
+   While Pat may've not remembered if it was him who wrote the commentary for Flower Child; it's mostly likely him given that the other track commentaries are from [[artist:veritas-unae]].
 ---
 Track: Thunderhead
 Directory: thunderhead-loftlocked
@@ -229,9 +232,9 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>Veritas Unae:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://loftlocked.bandcamp.com/track/thunderhead))
     The song is very chaotic, representing a world dominated by an [REDACTED] thunderstorm. I tried to bring a balance between tranquility and complete rage, counterbalancing the world of the player with the player [REDACTED].
 
-    <i>Veritas Unae:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/veritasunae/thunderhead))
+    <i>Veritas Unae:</i> ([SoundCloud description, excerpt](https://soundcloud.com/veritasunae/thunderhead))
 
-    I made a song at the request of [[artist:patmandx|Pat]] for his fan adventure, Loftlocked. The song is very chaotic, representing a world dominated by an [REDACTED] thunderstorm. I tried to bring a balance between tranquility and complete rage, counterbalancing the world of the player with the player [REDACTED].
+    I made a song at the request of [[artist:patmandx|Pat]] for his fan adventure, Loftlocked. <i>(Succeeding paragraph same as Bandcamp description, up 'til...)</i>
 
     I used Sibelius and Pro Tools SE for this.