[sbargv2-volume-1] Revert commentary reorganization, adjust my commentary credits

1 files changed, 45 insertions, 42 deletions

diff --git a/album/sbargv2-volume-1.yaml b/album/sbargv2-volume-1.yaml
index eac6f861..62a6e00c 100644
--- a/album/sbargv2-volume-1.yaml
+++ b/album/sbargv2-volume-1.yaml
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+
 Album: 'SBARGv2 Volume 1'
 Date: June 17, 2013
 Date Added: August 19, 2025
@@ -30,6 +31,9 @@ Commentary: |-
     While I’m continuing work on preening this code, I thought maybe it could be useful to look back on what has happened so far.
     ==> Listen
 
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, private Discord, regarding wallpaper used)
+    I forget who did the static puzzle however (yes, it's technically a puzzle)
+
     <i>wertercatt, lavenderSiren:</i> (conversation in private Discord)
 
     *wertercatt:*<br>
@@ -68,9 +72,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     *lavenderSiren:*<br>
     no problem!
-Crediting Sources: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, private Discord, regarding wallpaper used)
-    I forget who did the static puzzle however (yes, it's technically a puzzle)
+
 Additional Files:
 - Title: WIP Cover Art
   Files:
@@ -91,6 +93,9 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - SBARGv2 (media)
 Commentary: |-
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, track credit research document)
+    puzzle made by a v2 staff member
+
     <i>wertercatt, lavenderSiren:</i> (conversation in private Discord)
 
     *lavenderSiren:*<br>
@@ -108,14 +113,11 @@ Commentary: |-
     *lavenderSiren:*<br>
     I feel like it's a good auditory representation of what the sbargv2 players were first shown
 
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was connect.png
-Crediting Sources: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, track credit research document)
-    puzzle made by a v2 staff member
-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (assumed track cover artist, album art credit research document)
     I know I at least made the version of the sbarg logo that was edited during sbargv2
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was connect.png
 ---
 Track: "#bacade"
 Artists:
@@ -130,6 +132,10 @@ Art Tags:
 - Pumpkin
 - SBARGv2 (media)
 Commentary: |-
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album art credit research document, sic)
+    \- bacade anmd [[track:bacafe]]: I think [[artist:timetravlur|TT]]? Might have been a rare other v2 staff member
+
+
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (ARG puzzle post-mortem, [Tumblr](https://shinyjiggly.tumblr.com/post/70976559948/the-legend-of-bacafe-the-beginninging))
     The Legend of Bacafe: the beginninging
 
@@ -156,9 +162,6 @@ Commentary: |-
     But for some reason, I actually found Bacafe the fantroll to be compelling and probably one of the more interesting things created by the SBARGv2 fandom.
 
     Next bacafe segment will probably go over the tons of other places the hex color has shown up in.
-Crediting Sources: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album art credit research document, sic)
-    \- bacade anmd [[track:bacafe]]: I think [[artist:timetravlur|TT]]? Might have been a rare other v2 staff member
 ---
 Track: "#bacafe"
 Color: '#bacafe'
@@ -170,7 +173,10 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - track:bacade
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (ARG puzzle post-mortem, [Tumblr](https://shinyjiggly.tumblr.com/post/70976559948/the-legend-of-bacafe-the-beginninging))
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album art credit research document, sic)
+    \- bacade anmd [[track:bacafe]]: I think [[artist:timetravlur|TT]]? Might have been a rare other v2 staff member
+
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (ARG puzzle post-mortem, [tumblr](https://shinyjiggly.tumblr.com/post/70976559948/the-legend-of-bacafe-the-beginninging))
     The Legend of Bacafe: the beginninging
 
     Ah, puzzle six. Where do I even start with this integral part of SBARGv2? Well, I guess I could start at the beginning.
@@ -196,9 +202,6 @@ Commentary: |-
     But for some reason, I actually found Bacafe the fantroll to be compelling and probably one of the more interesting things created by the SBARGv2 fandom.
 
     Next bacafe segment will probably go over the tons of other places the hex color has shown up in.
-Crediting Sources: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album art credit research document, sic)
-    \- bacade anmd [[track:bacafe]]: I think [[artist:timetravlur|TT]]? Might have been a rare other v2 staff member
 Cover Artists:
 - timeTravlur
 - Unknown Artist
@@ -212,11 +215,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/prospitar
 Artists:
 - Unknown Artist
-Crediting Sources: |-
+Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, private Discord)
     uh.... not sure, but I'm p sure I can identify the tracks still. I remember the track "Prospitar" is actually a cover of some random-ass classical piece and that I only found that out after hearing it years later on the classical music radio station, but I don't remember what it's actually called or who actually composed the original.
 
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor, track credit research document)
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (SBARG archivist, track credit research document)
     Classical cover of something? (independent researchers say this is false) This was for the Prospit Ball flash I think
 Cover Artists:
 - timeTravlur
@@ -231,11 +234,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/dersings
 Artists:
 - Unknown Artist
-Crediting Sources: |-
+Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, private Discord)
     P sure "Dersings"  was something written by the whoever we got to write that tho, since a less fleshed out wip was once sent to the sbargv2 staff skype group chat (which is now gone a zillion times over because skype is dead)
 
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor, track credit research document)
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (SBARG archivist, track credit research document)
     Had a WIP version posted to internal Skype, probably lost. Derse ball flash.
 Cover Artists:
 - timeTravlur
@@ -269,12 +272,11 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/whispers
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (private Discord)
-    the figure in whispers.png is technically brae's dreamself, because at the time FI and SF looked identical
-Referencing Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     I think I used the [[artist:chrono-trigger|chrono trigger]] soundfont for this one? It’s been a while either that or just really slowed down stuff in audacity
 
+    <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (private Discord)
+    the figure in whispers.png is technically brae's dreamself, because at the time FI and SF looked identical
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 Art Tags:
@@ -289,16 +291,16 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/two-can-play
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was twocanplay.png
-Crediting Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album organizer, track credit research document)
     puzzle made by a v2 staff member, when viewed in spectrogram {with 1 channel removed}, it says “Gotcha”, was a response to this incident: https://team-spectrum.tumblr.com/post/42914809791 where an ask was sent about having “lost the game” to the v2 blog
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (SBARG archivist)
     Text in {} added by me.
 
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (album art credit research document, sic)
     I think this was actually by noodles, though maybe that's an altered version of the image. maybe mastermordin?
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was twocanplay.png
 Cover Artists:
 - 'Noodles'
 - 'Mastermordin'
@@ -315,11 +317,11 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/ballad-of-the-guardian
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was guardian.png
-Referencing Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     iteration on the BACAFE/BACADE motif
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was guardian.png
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 Art Tags:
@@ -335,7 +337,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/loading
 Referenced Tracks:
   - track:final-battle-chrono-trigger
-Referencing Sources: |-
+Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     accidentally inspired by the [[track:final-battle-chrono-trigger|lavos final phase theme]], written because I was too afraid to ask [[artist:michael-guy-bowman|bowman]] for permission to use one of his loading songs
 Cover Artists:
@@ -353,6 +355,7 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     for the Enter flash
+
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 Art Tags:
@@ -367,7 +370,7 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/climbing
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor, track credit research document)
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (SBARG archivist, track credit research document)
     Spirebuilder game?
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
@@ -446,11 +449,11 @@ URLs:
 Additional Names:
 - The Great Land Tour (commentary)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was landquest.png
-Referencing Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     was in the 3rd gate flash, called “The Great Land Tour” on the album, uses the [[artist:the-legend-of-zelda|ocarina of time]] soundfont
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was landquest.png
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 Art Tags:
@@ -467,7 +470,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     the one part in the end of act 2 flash written by lavenderSiren, the rest of it, which did not get put on this album, was a song by PISS SPEARS
 
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor, track credit research document)
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (SBARG archivist, track credit research document)
     The mentioned song in that commentary is “ROB SWIRE CALLED ME COOL ON TWITTER ONCE” from I CREATED PISSCORE. Note: PISS SPEARS was a pseudonym of [[artist:jamie-paige]]
 
     <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
@@ -487,11 +490,11 @@ Commentary: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     a databent image of the green sun, with some morse code spelling out HELP ME in it
 
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was helpme.png
-Crediting Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track cover artist, album art credit research document)
     my edit, source of original sun image unknown
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was helpme.png
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 - Unknown Artist
@@ -510,11 +513,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://sbargv2.bandcamp.com/track/fixing-this-mess
 - https://sbargv2.tumblr.com/post/52189591727/flock-ornis-how-do-we-fix-this
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
-    Internal filename for this track art was oratorornis.png
-Crediting Sources: |-
     <i>lavenderSiren:</i> (track credit research document)
     voice acting done by someone that kaylen had contacted. Apparently it was the first time they had done voice acting. lavenderSiren edited it to remove stammering and probably also added the reverb
+
+    <i>wertercatt:</i> (wiki editor)
+    Internal filename for this track art was oratorornis.png
 Cover Artists:
 - "lavenderSiren"
 Art Tags: