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I’m mostly happy how fairly even this was, top to bottom, stylistically… We’re usually okay at doing a few pieces in a style at once, but this was a real bunch

fave panel is probably untying her. It was a very “oh shit we can figure out a pacing that works for us” moment

but the first panel is good too LOL and we quickly liked how the first four panels make a sort of swoop across the page—with her tail, yes, remaining the very tip-top highest thing on the whole page

Center panel (first one holding her), we kinda panicked how much we got her Looking Like Dog there, despite being a really anthro form for most of this

felt up her sides and was like oh shit it’s dog lol

Pacing - first few panels was sorta just imagining rather than following a plan, right, but we like the impression that she was getting punished for misbehaving in some way—reminded that her duty is to listen

She’s gagged first! Her paws aren’t bound in the first panel

so panel 1 is along the lines of a dominating “lay down” and she’s got to follow that with complete volition—except, of course, to speak up about it

panel 2… I’d frame it as the first acknowledgement that she is a naughty and dirty dog—her head’s tipped back here, she’s flat on her back. Legs apart won’t hide what everyone knows (she is gravely into this), but she can’t do anything about it. She doesn’t get to do anything about it.

thing is once that’s all well and clear I don’t actually want to be cruel to her hahahaha, the fact is that it’s all really soft (this is the gag I was setting up as soon as I said “time to draw some hardcore porn!!”). The dynamic isn’t blunt or forceful, it’s sharp and assertive.

panel 3, the tone shift is “You’ve been bad, but I’m going to take care of you.” She’s wary but it’s useless to be wary, because she’s completely following control. Her brain starts zeroing out as Lanolin feels her over. She’s leaking at this point, but the thought of doing something about it is the faintest echo

okay panel 4 is the one with lan in half silhouette and I barely talked about it even though it’s awesome lol

It’s kinda the most abstract framing, but what we’ve got is both hands pressing around her - one flat on her head, down; the other curved around her chin, up. This isn’t petting. It’s letting her - making her - live in this moment, where all that matters is that she’s hers. (We took forever getting her face right and are very happy with it lol. The ball gag is the stealth star here. Just… uh… pretend I remembered the straps.)

panel 5 is the transition one; sure we literally loose her wrist binds here, yeah, but we’re moreso emotionally freeing her… She’s learned what she needs to; sat with the reminder that she earned. If she sinned, it’s forgiven. Her cock’s there to remind her that Lan still knows what’s at her core; all this freedom, relief, is concentrated there, in her real reward.

The bottom three panels go together. Middle is first - the dog doing her thing. The top-down pov is part for variety and drama, but we figured out it was kind of getting at the plural sex energy… It’s ‘from’ Whis’ perspective, for sure, though her own face is obscured too. Lan is just a shadow surrounding her; but oh, yes, are her hands here and real.

(We enjoy framing where two characters more or less visually make one silhouette—esp in a sex context lol—and I felt a bit like a genius when the layering of Whis legs -> Whis wagging tail -> Lan pants, just clicked together like that)

The left panel we drew last, as a pair for the right one. You get the impression with it… there’s nothing to say… except that rustling a dog as she cums probably feels pretty good

Right panel is last, and you know how that one is, too. A bit of a mess. Pretty mess. we haven’t really drawn just-post-orgasm faces sooooo it was fun lol

Lan’s hands in the right panel are the very last thing we drew

annnnd we were happy w/ her right shoulder, sorta let down and back like that

there’s a lot less shaped out boob than there might be LOL but we went for drawing out messy fluff instead

Alright thank you for witnessing commentary. :pray:

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