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ARADIA: tough crowd

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DAVEBOT: ok heres one

DAVEBOT: how old do you think you are

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> (Months in the past, but not many...)
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SOLLUX: h0w the fuck am i g0ing t0 get d0wn fr0m here.

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> Back to reality.
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ARADIA: he is probably ok

DAVEBOT: so youre telling me you dont even feel a little bad that you ditched him to be a weird death acolyte

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> Weeks in the future, relative to the original point of interest...
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Moments like these are not rare, and serve a valuable function to the story. They are able to show a passage of time with the bulk of the emotional labor of a lengthy bonding process happening off screen. How did we get here? What have they been through? These questions are often better left open to individual interpretation and can give the one interpreting a sense of ownership of the story.

JADE: As a point of curiosity-

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JADE: ......

ARADIA: .......

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JADE: time

ARADIA: ouo

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> CHAPTER 12. Really Convolued Metaphorical Horseshit

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