From 1d1a35c17131ab193996d31b99bffa1a4ca629e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lilithtreasure <62890895+Lilithtreasure@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 4 Nov 2024 02:45:32 -0500
Subject: adjusted Dawn of Man ask that sprung up Dawn of Man art commentary
 added commentary source for A Baby Legend - The Baby is 2

---
 album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.yaml | 3 +--
 album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml          | 6 ++++--
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'album')

diff --git a/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.yaml b/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.yaml
index 3ff74fab..387caad0 100644
--- a/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.yaml
+++ b/album/mobius-trip-and-hadron-kaleido.yaml
@@ -215,8 +215,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <i>Tavia Morra:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/seeyoutmorra/105490726789/what-is-even-the-art-for-dawn-of-man), 12/17/2014)
 
-    > what is even the art for dawn of man
-    >- benzrf
+    > what is even the art for dawn of man - benzrf
 
     The art for Dawn of Man are photos of train of powerlines from my hometown. I cut them up into jaggy pieces and placed them back together.
 ---
diff --git a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
index 950c6716..3e694b02 100644
--- a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
+++ b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
@@ -33,8 +33,10 @@ Lyrics: |-
     those that we call
     <big><big><i>BABIES</i></big></big>
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Toby Fox:</i>
-    Sometimes I wonder what my life would be like if I actually finished the second album.
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i> ([Tumblr](http://web.archive.org/web/20130312050613/http://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/tagged/the-baby-is-you), excerpt, 8/28/2011)
+    A Baby Legend - The Baby is 2
+
+    I made this in early June but never posted it publicly. Sometimes I wonder what my life would be like if I actually finished the second album.
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 Track: A Knight's Reflection
 Artists:
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