1 files changed, 38 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
index 13fed21d..bad88154 100644
--- a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
+++ b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
@@ -631,6 +631,12 @@ Art Tags:
 - Serenity
 - Ruined Earth
 - Can Town
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Derples:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://melongifts.tumblr.com/post/21013986036/hey-guys))
+
+    <img src="media/misc/wv-become-the-mayor-of-cans-bonus.jpg" width="171" height="103" pixelate inline alt="Fuck you radiation.png">
+
+    Hey guys!!!!!!!!!!
 ---
 Track: March of the Batterwitch
 Artists:
@@ -671,6 +677,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://youtu.be/CO5IN60Nt9E
 Cover Artists:
 - Kurimja
+- len-yan (technical help)
 Art Tags:
 - Dave
 - LoHaC
@@ -682,6 +689,22 @@ Sheet Music Files:
 - Title: MIDI by pixelseph (original composer)
   Files:
   - 'Clockstopper - pixelseph.mid'
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Kurimja:</i> (uncropped artwork, [DeviantArt](https://www.deviantart.com/kurimja/art/HS-Land-of-Heat-and-Clockwork-270993514), excerpt)
+
+    Alpha Dave in LoHaC ftw~
+
+    This one was... not as much of a pain in the ass as some pieces have been, but there were a lot of technical problems I was having - thankfully, [[artist:len-yan|len-yan]] was there to save the day as always <img src="media/misc/deviantart-heart.gif" alt="heart" width="15" height="13" inline>
+
+    Mm, done from scratch in Adobe PS CS4 with intuos3 tablet, scaled to 30% of the original size - some detail shots at 100% available [here](https://www.deviantart.com/kurimja/art/Details-of-Land-of-Heat-and-Clockwork-270994754).
+
+    <img src="media/misc/clockstopper-full.jpg" width="275">
+
+    <i>Kurimja:</i> (full-size artwork crops, [DeviantArt](https://www.deviantart.com/kurimja/art/Details-of-Land-of-Heat-and-Clockwork-270994754))
+
+    Just a few sections from this piece, scaled at 100%. I'm quite fond of that eye;
+
+    <img src="media/misc/clockstopper-details.jpg" width="300">
 ---
 Track: Dapper Dueling
 Artists:
@@ -695,8 +718,10 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Jake
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Max Wright:</i>
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> (composer)
+
     Dapper Dueling was inspired originally by a Steampunk band named The Cog is Dead - after listening to the song I just linked, I tried to take down the general feel and basic instrumentation, and then work on my own from there. Instruments used in the piece are:
+
     - Acoustic Guitars
     - Accordion
     - Whistle Synth (fun fact, I'm pretty sure it's the same one as used in Horchestra)
@@ -706,11 +731,22 @@ Commentary: |-
     - Full string section (1:28)
     - Maracas, castanets, very very faint snare (you can hear it at 0:10, under the whistle), constant bass drum beat
     - bang bang wink
+
     I also gave the original Showtime strife mix a few listens for the purpose of structuring my piece - after all, it's meant to be a Strife theme. However, pretty much all sources of inspiration were only used in the parts before the banjo solo; the rest was just me having fun with music.
+
     Let me also point out that it made me extremely happy to see in canon that Jake bounces from side to side before he is about to fight; it was the exact image of him I was hoping for.
+
     Also, while composing, I imagined Dapper Dueling to fit a fight scene similar to <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BGCMfprPJoA">this</a>, from Sherlock Holmes (2009).
-    (<a href="https://youtu.be/clnLNQkB5O4">YouTube</a>)
+
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> (composer, <a href="https://youtu.be/clnLNQkB5O4">YouTube description</a>, excerpt)
+
     This was my interpretation of a Jake Strife theme. After the intensity of [[Cobalt Corsair]] I wanted to make something fun to listen to, and ended up with this. Imagine Jake English bouncing nimbly from side to side, facing off to wrestle his eager opponent.
+
+    <i>Soju:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://sojubrew.tumblr.com/post/12754503873), [DeviantArt](https://www.deviantart.com/shilloshilloh/art/Homestuck-Jake-English-268874606), excerpt)
+
+    Obligatory Jake art, 30 min doodle that I took too seriously ;7;
+
+    <img src="media/misc/dapper-dueling-full.jpg" width="375">
 ---
 Track: Checkmate
 Artists: