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@@ -2070,7 +2070,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I actually did two pieces of potential art for this, both featuring Dave and Jade fighting Bec Noir, since it seemed appropriate for an intense boss tune featuring a theme associated with Jade. There was a duller version of this as well as a more comic bookish one. A panel of friends agreed that this one read better, but it was a little flat, so I started brightening it and tweaking it, but still wanted to convey '8-bit', so I started playing around with a square brush throwing in this Darwina-esque square noise, which I thought looked pretty cool. It has been remarked that Jade firing an assault rifle in the air in front of a volcano is metal as shit. That's probably my favourite commentary on the image.)
 
-    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (alternate track art, [Tumblr](https://faisdm.tumblr.com/post/52294281017/track-art-for-ohgodwhat-boss-battle-remix-by), 6/6/2013)
+    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (WIP track art, and alternate track art, [Tumblr](https://faisdm.tumblr.com/post/52294281017/track-art-for-ohgodwhat-boss-battle-remix-by), 6/6/2013)
 
     Track Art for 'OhGodWhat Boss Battle Remix' by [[artist:kevin-grant|UWBW]] for Land of Fans and Music 3 (coming soon, I hope!!). Originally I drew this all with hard pixel edges:
 
@@ -2084,7 +2084,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I like this image in and of itself, but discussing with CoLab friends, it was felt that the first image would read better, particularly on a little iPod screen, and also that it was more dynamic, exciting and suited to the track in question.
 
-    As you can see from both, I knew I wanted to do something involving Jade and Dave on LoFaF, fighting Jack. [[Ohgodwhat|OhGodWhat]] being, of course, a track that [[flash:830|Jade made for Dave originally]], and this being a boss battle remix.
+    As you can see from both, I knew I wanted to do something involving Jade and Dave on LoFaF, fighting Jack. [[Ohgodwhat|OhGodWhat]] being, of course, [[flash:830|a track that Jade made for Dave originally]], and this being a boss battle remix.
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 Track: Dogfight (Dirtiest's Dubstep Remix)
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