hammerkind commentary updates

1 files changed, 53 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/album/hammerkind-ost.yaml b/album/hammerkind-ost.yaml
index 62b88b1d..8fff06c9 100644
--- a/album/hammerkind-ost.yaml
+++ b/album/hammerkind-ost.yaml
@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@ Groups:
 - Fandom
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
     This is the soundtrack for the Homestuck fangame [Hammerkind](http://web.archive.org/web/20130217073716/http://www.cloudcovergames.net/hammerkind/). It was composed by Stephen Maxwell, who made the game under the Cloud Cover Games label.
+
     Due to a lack of a proper soundtrack release, the album is hosted on YouTube and Archive.org. Additionally, the author was only able to recover four tracks, so [[Forgery]] and [[Beat the Game]] are recorded from the game itself (yes, I probably had to be the first person in a decade to beat all the levels and unlock all the secrets).
 ---
 Track: Beagle Aegis
@@ -33,8 +35,13 @@ Cover Artists:
 Art Tags:
 - Skaia
 Commentary: |-
-  <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
-  The MENU TUNE called "BEAGLE AEGIS" was also generally inspired by all the great work crafted by the MSPA MUSIC TEAM and WHAT PUMPKIN.
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
+    The MENU TUNE called "BEAGLE AEGIS" was also generally inspired by all the great work crafted by the MSPA MUSIC TEAM and WHAT PUMPKIN.
+
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> ([MSPA forums](https://web.archive.org/web/20100826164647/http://www.mspaforums.com:80/showthread.php?26512-Homestuck-Fan-Music-thread/page2&s=66b11e625cfee7a2a4191267582bdbea#post_message_3390859), excerpt)
+
+    Menu song (based on a background part of the main theme, so you can't really recognize any parts of Homestuck songs)
 ---
 Track: Impocalypse
 Duration: '3:03'
@@ -49,10 +56,17 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Guardian
 Commentary: |-
-  <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
-  [[track:guardian|"GUARDIAN"]] by [[artist:bill-bolin|BILL BOLIN]] (since removed from MSPA canon due to DRAMA) has been senselessly mutilated in order to make "IMPOCALYPSE".
-  <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
-  This track plays during the IMPOCALYPSE game mode, which is a survival mode where you fight off waves of enemies.
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
+    [[track:guardian|"GUARDIAN"]] by [[artist:bill-bolin|BILL BOLIN]] (since removed from MSPA canon due to DRAMA) has been senselessly mutilated in order to make "IMPOCALYPSE".
+
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> ([MSPA forums](https://web.archive.org/web/20100826164647/http://www.mspaforums.com:80/showthread.php?26512-Homestuck-Fan-Music-thread/page2&s=66b11e625cfee7a2a4191267582bdbea#post_message_3390859), excerpt)
+
+    Impocalypse (based on [[track:guardian|Guardian]]. This one is a little messy, but it has its moments.)
+
+    <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    This track plays during the IMPOCALYPSE game mode, which is a survival mode where you fight off waves of enemies.
 ---
 Track: Stairs of Skaia
 Duration: '2:48'
@@ -69,9 +83,16 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Skies of Skaia
 - Upward Movement (Dave Owns)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
     [[track:skies-of-skaia|"SKIES OF SKAIA"]] by [[artist:mark-j-hadley|MARK HADLEY]] and [[track:upward-movement-dave-owns|"UPWARD MOVEMENT"]] by [[artist:kalibration|KALIBRATION]] were unsubtly crammed together to create "STAIRS TO SKAIA".
+
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> ([MSPA forums](https://web.archive.org/web/20100826164647/http://www.mspaforums.com:80/showthread.php?26512-Homestuck-Fan-Music-thread/page2&s=66b11e625cfee7a2a4191267582bdbea#post_message_3390859), excerpt)
+
+    Hammerkind main theme (based on [[track:upward-movement-dave-owns|Dave Fucking Owns/Upward Movement]] and [[track:skies-of-skaia|Skies of Skaia]]. This version, used in the game, is kind of a cross between the two I already posted in this thread, with a few other minor changes.)
+
     <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
     This track plays during the main game mode STAIRS TO SKAIA, where you ascend/build past all the gates and fight imps to reach Skaia.
 ---
 Track: Explode (Candy)
@@ -87,10 +108,17 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Explore
 Commentary: |-
-  <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
-  [[track:explore|"EXPLORE"]] by [[artist:buzinkai|BUZINKAI]] was disrespected by the amateur duplication called "EXPLODE".
-  <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
-  This is the final boss theme of the main game mode, where you fight Trickster John Egbert.
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
+    [[track:explore|"EXPLORE"]] by [[artist:buzinkai|BUZINKAI]] was disrespected by the amateur duplication called "EXPLODE".
+
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> ([MSPA forums](https://web.archive.org/web/20100826164647/http://www.mspaforums.com:80/showthread.php?26512-Homestuck-Fan-Music-thread/page2&s=66b11e625cfee7a2a4191267582bdbea#post_message_3390859), excerpt)
+
+    Explode (Candy) (based on [[track:explore|Explore]])
+
+    <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    This is the final boss theme of the main game mode, where you fight Trickster John Egbert.
 ---
 Track: Forgery
 Duration: '0:51'
@@ -104,10 +132,13 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Chorale for Jaspers
 Commentary: |-
-  <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
-  [[track:chorale-for-jaspers|"CHORALE FOR JASPERS"]] by [[artist:michael-guy-bowman|MICHAEL GUY BOWMAN]] was twisted into "FORGERY".
-  <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
-  This track plays during the "SECRET THING" special mode, which is a series of platformer levels where you chase Trickster John Egbert.
+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
+    [[track:chorale-for-jaspers|"CHORALE FOR JASPERS"]] by [[artist:michael-guy-bowman|MICHAEL GUY BOWMAN]] was twisted into "FORGERY".
+
+    <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    This track plays during the "SECRET THING" special mode, which is a series of platformer levels where you chase Trickster John Egbert.
 ---
 Track: Beat the Game
 Duration: '0:52'
@@ -120,7 +151,10 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Beatdown (Strider Style)
 - Showtime (Original Mix)
 Commentary: |-
-  <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i>
-  [[track:beatdown-strider-style|"BEATDOWN"]] by [[artist:curt-blakeslee|CURT BLAKESLEE]] and [[track:showtime-original-mix|"SHOWTIME"]] by [[artist:malcolm-brown|MALCOLM BROWN]] see hasty remixes in the track "BEAT THE GAME".
-  <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
-  As the track title implies, this plays when you beat any of the game's modes.
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+    <i>Stephen Maxwell:</i> (in-game credits)
+
+    [[track:beatdown-strider-style|"BEATDOWN"]] by [[artist:curt-blakeslee|CURT BLAKESLEE]] and [[track:showtime-original-mix|"SHOWTIME"]] by [[artist:malcolm-brown|MALCOLM BROWN]] see hasty remixes in the track "BEAT THE GAME".
+
+    <i>Makin:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    As the track title implies, this plays when you beat any of the game's modes.