misc cleanup for albums from Jebb, mostly commentary tweaks

8 files changed, 78 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost.yaml b/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost.yaml
index 6cdd779b..f362ecc5 100644
--- a/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost.yaml
+++ b/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost.yaml
@@ -25,10 +25,23 @@ Groups:
 - Toby Fox
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-     <i>Dweller's Empty Path:</i>
-     Original soundtrack for the game "Dweller's Empty Path" by Temmie Chang. Main melody, and chord are Temmie Chang, Toby Fox, and Camellia. Music arrangement, production are by Camellia, except Tr.29. 29 tracks included.
-     Play:  <a href="https://tuyoki.itch.io/dwellers-empty-path">tuyoki.itch.io/dwellers-empty-path</a>
-     PV:  <a href="https://youtu.be/QrwxUqSQTxA">www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrwxUqSQTxA</a>
+     <i>Dweller's Empty Path:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://dwellersemptypath.bandcamp.com/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost))
+
+     Original soundtrack for the game "Dweller's Empty Path" by [[artist:temmie-chang|Temmie Chang]]. Main melody, and chord are Temmie Chang, [[artist:toby-fox|Toby Fox]], and [[artist:camellia|Camellia]]. Music arrangement, production are by Camellia, except Tr.29. 29 tracks included.
+
+     Play: [tuyoki.itch.io/dwellers-empty-path](https://tuyoki.itch.io/dwellers-empty-path)<br>
+     PV: [www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrwxUqSQTxA](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrwxUqSQTxA)
+
+     <i>Dweller's Empty Path:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://dwellersemptypath.bandcamp.com/album/dwellers-empty-path-ost))
+
+     Game Creation:<br>
+     By [[artist:temmie-chang|Temmie Chang]]
+
+     Music (Melody & Chords)<br>
+     By [[artist:toby-fox|Toby Fox]], [[artist:temmie-chang|Temmie Chang]], [[artist:camellia|Camellia]]
+
+     Music (Arrangement & Production)<br>
+     By [[artist:camellia|Camellia]]
 ---
 Track: Dweller's Empty Path (Trailer Theme)
 Duration: '01:30'
diff --git a/album/everflow.yaml b/album/everflow.yaml
index 7008945f..e4acec2b 100644
--- a/album/everflow.yaml
+++ b/album/everflow.yaml
@@ -13,7 +13,8 @@ Groups:
 - horizon
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>horizon:</i>
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/everflow))
+
     a companion to <a href="https://youtu.be/KKzAi69-x4s">Sleepwalking</a> and [[album:the-gap]], EVERFLOW is the final in a trio about growing to understand and accept the passage of time. special thanks to yeon for the art and the title suggestion.
 ---
 Track: EVERFLOW
@@ -74,4 +75,4 @@ Contributors:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - EVERFLOW
 URLs:
-- https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/everflow-instrumental
\ No newline at end of file
+- https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/everflow-instrumental
diff --git a/album/fatebreak-volume-1.yaml b/album/fatebreak-volume-1.yaml
index 341db98e..a3dfd240 100644
--- a/album/fatebreak-volume-1.yaml
+++ b/album/fatebreak-volume-1.yaml
@@ -17,7 +17,8 @@ Color: '#DAB4E5'
 Groups:
 - Fandom
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/album/fatebreak-volume-1))
+
     OST for the Homestuck fanventure <a href="https://mspfa.com/?s=23639">Fatebreak</a>, a story about 12 trolls who wreck the multiverse by doing everything they weren't supposed to.
 ---
 Track: Touch the Stars
@@ -30,7 +31,8 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/touch-the-stars
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>GeminiMoonlight:</i>
+    <i>GeminiMoonlight:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/touch-the-stars))
+
     Theme for Auriax Astyra, gold pilot.
 ---
 Track: Heartstrings
@@ -44,7 +46,8 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/heartstrings
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/heartstrings))
+
     Theme for Cerida Kepler, hidden empath.
 ---
 Track: Viridian Suede
@@ -56,7 +59,8 @@ Duration: '02:40'
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/viridian-suede
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/viridian-suede))
+
     Theme for Seytus Caufer, olive mastermind.
 ---
 Track: Snow Day
@@ -68,7 +72,8 @@ Duration: '01:21'
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/snow-day
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/snow-day))
+
     Theme for Silena Lyncis, jade healer.
 ---
 Track: Equip Your Quiver
@@ -80,7 +85,8 @@ Duration: '01:32'
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/equip-your-quiver
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/equip-your-quiver))
+
     Theme for Oryyan Vaelus, indigo hunter.
 ---
 Track: Marching Reign
@@ -92,5 +98,6 @@ Duration: '02:30'
 URLs:
 - https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/marching-reign
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i>
+    <i>Fatebreak Music Team:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://fatebreak.bandcamp.com/track/marching-reign))
+
     Theme for Syldis Polyda, violet tyrant.
diff --git a/album/fortune.yaml b/album/fortune.yaml
index 1bef3615..c89fa508 100644
--- a/album/fortune.yaml
+++ b/album/fortune.yaml
@@ -18,7 +18,8 @@ Groups:
 - horizon
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>horizon:</i>
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/fortune))
+
     full illustration/official audio: <a href="https://youtu.be/cLpxTU--0XU">www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLpxTU--0XU</a>
 
     before anything else, this is ultimately a demo! it will be edited more when i go through the big album cleanup later this year, but i have a soft spot for where it is right now, and i don't want to make any more changes until i know what it's going to be paired with. anyway!
diff --git a/album/lost-and-found.yaml b/album/lost-and-found.yaml
index 2bb555c1..7e094513 100644
--- a/album/lost-and-found.yaml
+++ b/album/lost-and-found.yaml
@@ -13,7 +13,8 @@ Groups:
 - horizon
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>horizon:</i>
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/lost-and-found))
+
     sadder than it sounds.
 ---
 Track: lost-and-found
diff --git a/album/soul-of-sovereignty-prelude-ost.yaml b/album/soul-of-sovereignty-prelude-ost.yaml
index 49131119..73d950db 100644
--- a/album/soul-of-sovereignty-prelude-ost.yaml
+++ b/album/soul-of-sovereignty-prelude-ost.yaml
@@ -17,8 +17,9 @@ Groups:
 - Toby Fox
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Gigi D.G.:</i>
-    Music from the <a href="https://gigidigi.itch.io/soulsov">visual novel</a>.
+    <i>Gigi D.G.:</i> ([Bandcamp](https://gigidigi.bandcamp.com/album/soul-of-sovereignty-prelude-ost))
+
+    Music from the visual novel. [gigidigi.itch.io/soulsov](https://gigidigi.itch.io/soulsov)
 ---
 Track: Prelude
 Directory: prelude-soul-of-sovereignty
@@ -150,4 +151,4 @@ Duration: '00:55'
 Artists:
 - Gigi D.G.
 URLs:
-- https://gigidigi.bandcamp.com/track/prayer-to-the-builder
\ No newline at end of file
+- https://gigidigi.bandcamp.com/track/prayer-to-the-builder
diff --git a/album/the-gap.yaml b/album/the-gap.yaml
index 48a290af..95242cd3 100644
--- a/album/the-gap.yaml
+++ b/album/the-gap.yaml
@@ -18,11 +18,30 @@ Groups:
 - horizon
 - Beyond
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>horizon:</i>
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap))
+
     ( )
+
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWP8cMreYNM), excerpt)
+
+    "There must be blood, the girl thought. There must always be blood. The Green Wind said that, so it must be true. It will all be hard and bloody, but there will be wonders, too, or else why bring me here at all? And it’s the wonders I’m after, even if I have to bleed for them."
+
+    -- from The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making, a novel in a series by Catherynne M. Valente
+
+    ✼ 　 ҉ 　✼ 　 ҉ 　✼
+
+    months in the making, i have finally created something i am happy to share -- something that feels like it's saying what i want to say. it's struggling to raise its voice but doing so anyway.
+
+    the quote above is from my absolute favorite author in the world, and there's a vague reference to the novel quoted at the end of this song. if you're feeling lost in this big, terrifying world, i highly recommend her writing. i would never have made it this far without the worlds she's created, and whatever comes of this is thanks to you, her, and so many other wonderful, creative people.
+
+    that being said, the dedication here lies elsewhere -- in the name. or lack thereof? but that means it's for you anyway. so enjoy :)
+
+    (also the person speaking at the end is tripp i stole it from a dnd recording shhhhh don't tell him)
 ---
 Track: the gap
 Duration: '4:28'
+Contributors:
+- Trippcaptor (end vocals)
 URLs:
 - https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap
 - https://youtu.be/NWP8cMreYNM
@@ -96,4 +115,16 @@ Lyrics: |-
     Anything i can throw at me
     I will dance in these
     Changing times till the
-    Universe learns to sing with me
\ No newline at end of file
+    Universe learns to sing with me
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://ohanadyomene.bandcamp.com/track/the-gap))
+
+    lyrics, composition, production, etc: [[artist:horizon|OPHELIA ANADYOMENE]]<br>
+    speaking voice:[[artist:trippcaptor|Trippcaptor]]<br>
+    credit to zapsplat for percussion samples: [www.zapsplat.com](https://www.zapsplat.com/)
+
+    <i>horizon:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWP8cMreYNM), excerpt)
+
+    Copyright ℗ 2021 [[artist:horizon|OPHELIA ANADYOMENE]]<br>
+    spoken words hijacked from [[artist:trippcaptor|Trippcaptor]]<br>
+    percussion samples from zapsplat ([https://www.zapsplat.com/](https://www.zapsplat.com/))
diff --git a/album/we-can-always-go-home.yaml b/album/we-can-always-go-home.yaml
index 646fe06a..b1124db6 100644
--- a/album/we-can-always-go-home.yaml
+++ b/album/we-can-always-go-home.yaml
@@ -17,7 +17,8 @@ Color: '#6DC6F2'
 Groups:
 - Fandom
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Beatrice:</i>
+    <i>Beatrice:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://goobea.bandcamp.com/album/we-can-always-go-home))
+
     An album dedicated to four children and the homes they've been stuck in for ten years.
 ---
 Track: Home Together
@@ -56,4 +57,4 @@ Duration: '01:32'
 Referenced Tracks:
 - track:showtime-piano-refrain
 URLs:
-- https://goobea.bandcamp.com/track/homesick
\ No newline at end of file
+- https://goobea.bandcamp.com/track/homesick