minor fixes

affects doctor loop, austin atlantis, apple disaster, typheus+glitched

8 files changed, 28 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/album/cool-and-new-volume-2.yaml b/album/cool-and-new-volume-2.yaml
index d7a0e9e3..ea9df12b 100644
--- a/album/cool-and-new-volume-2.yaml
+++ b/album/cool-and-new-volume-2.yaml
@@ -802,7 +802,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
 ---
 Track: Sungetter V2 (Another Megalo Strike Back Remix)
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - yazshu
 Cover Art File Extension: jpg
@@ -1240,7 +1240,7 @@ Contributors:
 - Ngame (vocals)
 - Interrobang (vocals)
 - Cryptanark (vocals)
-- JohnJRenns (vocals)
+- Cecily Renns (vocals)
 - Bin (vocals)
 - Makin (vocals)
 Cover Artists:
diff --git a/album/cool-and-new-volume-ii.yaml b/album/cool-and-new-volume-ii.yaml
index 7a994207..945b7d8b 100644
--- a/album/cool-and-new-volume-ii.yaml
+++ b/album/cool-and-new-volume-ii.yaml
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
 ---
 Track: Same Medium
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - yazshu
 Duration: '02:51'
@@ -1432,7 +1432,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 ---
 Track: With Grief To A World
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - yazshu
 Cover Art File Extension: jpg
diff --git a/album/cool-and-new-voulem1.yaml b/album/cool-and-new-voulem1.yaml
index 10114779..85f3a9ad 100644
--- a/album/cool-and-new-voulem1.yaml
+++ b/album/cool-and-new-voulem1.yaml
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Track: Archagent Everlasting
 Duration: '2:07'
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - miraculousAvantgarde
 URLs:
@@ -504,7 +504,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Track: Unity of Thorns
 Duration: '2:12'
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - Hadron
 URLs:
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Track: fun cat song :3 :3
 Duration: '1:05'
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - Makin
 URLs:
@@ -1482,7 +1482,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Track: Cool and New Web Comic
 Duration: '2:24'
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Cover Artists:
 - Niklink
 URLs:
diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-1-4.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-1-4.yaml
index 31279c38..63401dc1 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-1-4.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-1-4.yaml
@@ -608,3 +608,12 @@ URLs:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Buzinkai:</i>
     <a href='https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EsG71P_zEIE'>'Doctor' Explained</a>
+    <i>Partial transcript:</i><br>Hello internet, my name is George Buzinkai. I am one of the musicians, well, I was one of the musicians for Ms Paint Adventures. I wrote such songs as [[track:endless-climb|Endless Climb]], [[track:showtime-imp-strife-mix|Imp Strife Mix? Strife Imp Mix]] I think and of course the wildly remixed Doctor, which I have open in the original software I wrote it in. 
+    I'm about to show you a few things you didn't know about the song Doctor, and I'm going to show you a few things people get wrong when remixing it. I don't find a problem with it because half the time I don't even notice it but sometimes there are some things. I think some people have listened to the song by ear and have attempted to write a remix using that and I get requests a lot to post a MIDI of this. Due to the fact I wrote it in PxTone that's really hard to do. There is also another reason, the song was built in such a way that it's really hard to give certain things from the song and I'll explain that as we go. 
+    First things first all of the instruments except for the main three main three notes of the main chords which you know were written with instruments from the original [[artist:cave-story|Cave Story]]. If you listen to the drum track that's the original Cave Story drum soundtracks. All the other instruments are also from Cave Story. When I was originally writing the song I always wrote top down so believe it or not the first thing I wrote was the bassline. Then as I was going I added the drums, and from there I decided I should add an extra bassline. Once I added the extra bassline I decided it would be a good time to write an actual, you know, melody line. I was originally planning on using strings but I accidentally put in square waves and I fell in love with it right after I did it and I'm like "I can't switch this to strings now so I'm just gonna leave it as it is." 
+    Now the rectangle waves [Note: Referring to the main melody of the song.] I'm focusing on right now are written in a really weird way, not one that I would normally use for writing on a piano or something like that. I wrote the top note first and I wrote the other notes just to harmonize with it. From there I wrote the second note. I obviously didn't write the third one yet, I just wanted to make sure it sounded right. From there I wrote the third note which was kind of a crapshoot but you know, why not. Now, the weird part was once I got to the part where it starts the arpeggiation I already had the instruments here but the problem was I had them on different stereo channels. Like this one was on the left speaker this one was on the right speaker and this one's in the center. 
+    However, the problem was once I got to the arpeggiation I really didn't want to have one track doing the arpeggiation and have to switch each note on the pan menu here. I really didn't want to do that so I was lazy and put each note on a different instrument to make the panning effect so if you play just with the top note this is what it sounds like. Believe it or not I didn't write this first and then write the second one and then write the third one under that because that would've been insane and I think that probably would've made me look a lot better than I actually am. So what I did was I wrote the actual whole thing on the one track on the top and then moved each note manually by having the top one highlighted with all the notes and then just moving it and erasing it from the top. 
+    Also, this is the part of the song [Note: Referring to the melody that starts at 0:27,] that is most often screwed up in remixes and I don't have a problem with that, this is really hard. This is not an easy thing. I've tried. I can play the whole beginning of the song on piano. I can't play this part at all. It's insane, and the reason for this is the notes go all over the place. The reason for that is because I would take a regular chord and then I would put the notes maybe down an octave or just find another note that would fit. I wanted to stretch this chord out as far as I could and still make it fit to the key, which is kind of what made it so weird in the beginning and actually if you look about where my mouse is you can see that this was just one line that just went down. So, since we have you here, I can actually slow this down for you so you can hear what it sounds like slowly. 
+    I don't expect anyone to play that at full speed. I've actually seen someone play about the right thing at full speed and that still freaking amazes me. I wouldn't expect that kind of thing. I thought that was unplayable. Also, this may seem lazy now, but it's probably lazy then too, but I copy and pasted this whole section and then added an extra melody line to make it interesting. 
+    Now here's a secret, why this song is called Doctor, and what this song is based on. Believe it or not this song is actually based on [[track:moonsong|Moonsong]] and Mischievous Robot from [[artist:cave-story|Cave Story]]. I wrote this song right shortly after Super Smash Brothers Brawl came out for the Wii. I know because I was playing that while I wrote it. There is a constant tone much like in Mischievous Robot that plays in the background and it's actually supposed to be a heartbeat monitor. This actually just stays constant the entire time (tone changes) except for when it changes right there (tone changes again) yeah it shows you how much I know about my own music (tone switches to alternating between two different tones.) But I try to keep that a constant side beat in the back there. 
+    We're here to talk about music so if you want to see any more of my music in this fashion, perhaps with a little more in-depth viewer, if you think there's something I missed or something that you're curious about with the music please let me know. I'm actually really open to talking about it, I think it's kind of cool that it went this far. I'm still actually listening to all the freaking remixes of this song that are online right now. You have to understand that I'm completely blown away.
diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
index 2436c655..b48d5d49 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-9.yaml
@@ -350,6 +350,11 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:explore
 - track:endless-climb
 - Flare
+Lyrics: |-
+    Magnificat anima mea Dominum (<i>My soul doth magnify the Lord</i>)
+
+    Magnificat anima mea Dominum (<i>My soul doth magnify the Lord</i>)
+    Et exultavit spiritus meus in Deo salutari meo (<i>And my spirit hath rejoiced in God my Saviour</i>)
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Clark Powell:</i>
     Nothing inspires me more than spaces, regardless of whether they are real or virtual. Examples include cities, mountains, buildings, individual rooms, even entire planets (see [[album:medium|Medium]]).
diff --git a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
index d4d910e5..87b73d4b 100644
--- a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
+++ b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Artists:
 - TirantBacon
 - Bambosh
 - Wheals
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Contributors:
 - greenTetrahedron (middle rap vocals)
 Duration: '6:41'
@@ -526,12 +526,12 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Track: In the Beginning
 Directory: in-the-beginning-canwc
 Artists:
-- JohnJRenns
+- Cecily Renns
 Duration: '1:26'
 URLs:
 - https://coolandnewwebcomic.bandcamp.com/track/in-the-beginning
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>JohnJRenns:</i>
+    <i>Cecily Renns:</i>
     alternative name ; Proto-CONTACT
 ---
 Track: Isn't This "Is This the End?" Again?
diff --git a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
index 2872a34d..12b9fd2b 100644
--- a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
+++ b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Lyrics: |-
     <i>AN APPLE DISASTER!!</i><br>That's the name of her song<br>And her name is Apple Girlington<br>She's the personification of<br>An apple
     This spell card is called <i>THE APPLE WIZARD OF MOUNT FUJI</i><br>It's part of important Japanese folk lore<br>The pre-battle dialogue goes like this:
-    <i>You should taste my wonderful apples</i><br><i>No, sorry, I'm watching my weight recently</i><br><i>No!! You have to try the apples or I won't let you through!</i><br><i>Oh, well, I'll give you a diabetes bow tie</i><br><i>[UNTRANSLATABLE JAPANESE IDIOM]</i>
+    <i>You should taste my wonderful apples</i><br><i>No, sorry, I'm watching my weight recently</i><br><i>No!! You have to try the apples or I won't let you through!</i><br><i>Oh, well, I'll give you a diabetes won't I</i><br><i>[UNTRANSLATABLE JAPANESE IDIOM]</i>
     Then you have a weird chord change<br>Because it's a newer Touhou song
     Then they make a joke about apple pie
 ---
diff --git a/album/unreleased-tracks.yaml b/album/unreleased-tracks.yaml
index bcf4ed32..478a351a 100644
--- a/album/unreleased-tracks.yaml
+++ b/album/unreleased-tracks.yaml
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 ---
 Track: Typheus
 Artists:
-- Homestuck
+- Unknown Artist
 Has URLs: false
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Fear of the Heavens
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 ---
 Track: Typheus (Glitched)
 Artists:
-- Homestuck
+- Unknown Artist
 Has URLs: false
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Typheus