shenanigans: mspa updated wiki editor commentary

1 files changed, 20 insertions, 33 deletions

diff --git a/album/shenanigans-mspa.yaml b/album/shenanigans-mspa.yaml
index b678335e..fa275589 100644
--- a/album/shenanigans-mspa.yaml
+++ b/album/shenanigans-mspa.yaml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Album: 'Shenanigans: MSPA'
 Directory: shenanigans-mspa
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ibarra
-Date: September 22, 2012
+Date: January 1, 2013
 URLs:
 - https://soundcloud.com/sparksd2145/sets/homestuck-mixes
 Cover Artists:
@@ -12,6 +12,10 @@ Color: '#bca5bc'
 Groups:
 - Fandom
 Commentary: |-
+    <i>Thomas Ibarra:</i> ([SoundCloud album description](https://soundcloud.com/sparksd2145/sets/homestuck-mixes))
+
+    Homestuck remixes, lots of them.
+
     <i>Thomas Ibarra:</i> ([Bandcamp download blurb](https://web.archive.org/web/20130409111336/http://sparksd2145.bandcamp.com/))
 
     Comes complete with a near-perfect rendering of the [[flash:fan-animation-homestuck|"Irradiated"]] animation (in celebration of nearly 100,000 hits as of this writing), and a printable booklet of all original track art!
@@ -20,41 +24,24 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Gracious thanks to the talented individuals running MS Paint Adventures, their hard work inspired me to write these recomposed works.
 
-    <i>Thomas Ibarra:</i> ([SoundCloud album description](https://soundcloud.com/sparksd2145/sets/homestuck-mixes))
+    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
 
-    Homestuck remixes, lots of them.
+    This album is a rather early fandom release. Its entry on the wiki is mostly modeled around [the SoundCloud album/set](https://soundcloud.com/sparksd2145/sets/homestuck-mixes), which appears to be where these tracks were originally released. Shenanigans: MSPA was also released [on Bandcamp](tps://web.archive.org/web/20130409111336/http://sparksd2145.bandcamp.com/); this release is no longer directly available, but is rehosted [on skaia.net](http://dl.skaia.net/albums). (Albeit, missing the track art booklet and Irradiated animation rendering, which are currently lost media.)
 
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
+    The track list on SoundCloud is the one reflected on the wiki; tracks are generally ordered (presumably by the composer) in a custom way, rather than chronologically. On Bandcamp tracks are alphabetical. The wiki also uses the "album release date" and per-track dates from SoundCloud. On Bandcamp the release date is [[date:September 22, 2012]]. (The SoundCloud set appears to have been created on [[date:August 12, 2011]], matching the upload date of the earliest few tracks.)
+
+    The SoundCloud set has three tracks which weren't present on Bandcamp:
+
+    - [[track:irradiated-animation-version]]
+    - [[track:sweet-tart-theme-extended]]
+    - [[track:adieu-shenanigans-mspa]]
+
+    Bandcamp, likewise, had four exclusive tracks:
 
-    This album is a rather early fandom release. Its entry on the wiki is mostly modeled around [the Bandcamp release](https://web.archive.org/web/20130409111336/http://sparksd2145.bandcamp.com/); this release is no longer directly available, but is rehosted [on skaia.net](http://dl.skaia.net/albums). Shenanigans: MSPA is also an [album/set on SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/sparksd2145/sets/homestuck-mixes) (by the composer), and this is still online.
-
-    The track list on Bandcamp is the one reflected on the wiki, where tracks are alphabetical. On SoundCloud the tracks are ordered differently, and a handful of tracks there were not on Bandcamp:
-
-    1. [[track:rectify-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    2. [[track:pilot-light-shenanigans-mspa|Pilot Light: The Witch's Cauldron]]
-    3. [[track:curtain-roll]]
-    4. [[track:irradiated-shenanigans-mspa|Irradiated - Updated]]
-    5. [[track:downtime-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    6. [[track:the-felt-rise-of-lord-english|The Felt - Rise of Lord English (updated)]]
-    7. [[track:requiem-of-space]]
-    8. [[track:sburb-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    9. [[track:schrodingers-session]]
-    10. [[track:strife-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    11. [[track:curtain-roll-extended-mix]]
-    12. [[track:overture-of-paradox-space]]
-    13. [[track:irradiated-animation-version]] (SoundCloud-only)
-    14. [[track:revelations-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    15. [[track:advance-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    16. [[track:sweet-tart-theme]]
-    17. [[track:lotus-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    18. [[track:flowers-and-fireflies]]
-    19. [[track:feathered-shenanigans-mspa]]
-    20. [[track:john-walk-along-the-ruins|John: Walk along the Ruins]]
-    21. [[track:sweet-tart-theme-extended]] (SoundCloud-only)
-    22. [[track:electric-fireflies]]
-    23. [[track:adieu-shenanigans-mspa]] (SoundCloud-only)
-
-    Bandcamp-exclusive tracks include [[track:ace-of-spades]], [[track:interlude-shenanigans-mspa]], [[track:mjollnir-shenanigans-mspa]], and [[track:shatter-shenanigans-mspa]].
+    - [[track:ace-of-spades]]
+    - [[track:interlude-shenanigans-mspa]]
+    - [[track:mjollnir-shenanigans-mspa]]
+    - [[track:shatter-shenanigans-mspa]]
 Additional Files:
 - Title: Track Art Booklet
   Description: >-