changelog + misc review

2 files changed, 73 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/album/early-access.yaml b/album/early-access.yaml
index 011b720f..95ce4e8f 100644
--- a/album/early-access.yaml
+++ b/album/early-access.yaml
@@ -53,7 +53,8 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 Lyrics: |-
     Make her a member of the Midnight Crew...
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dbnet18:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/year-one))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/year-one)
+
     Originally titled "OMEGA Anniversary Edition"
 ---
 Track: Cog
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@ URLs:
 Track Artwork:
 - Label: SoundCloud artwork
   Origin Details: >-
-    From [A way to design a gear](https://forums.getpaint.net/topic/21651-a-way-to-design-a-gear/) getpaint.net thread
+    From getpaint.net thread ["A way to design a gear"](https://forums.getpaint.net/topic/21651-a-way-to-design-a-gear/)
   Source: >-
     [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/cog)
   Artists:
@@ -82,6 +83,7 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 - Upward Movement (Dave Owns)
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Husr:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/cog), 5/14/2017)
+
     Concerning Time.
 ---
 Track: Blastoff
@@ -108,6 +110,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:MeGaLoVania
 Commentary: |-
     <i>dbnet18:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/user-201967720/blastoff-feat-husr), 6/17/2017)
+
     A track that me and Husr made for Act Omega, but the full version! Special thanks to Husr for composing most of this!
 ---
 Track: Extermination
@@ -201,7 +204,8 @@ URLs:
 - https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha
 - https://soundcloud.com/user-371879520/exterminationworm
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Husr:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/extermination-alpha)
+
     Originally made for [Worm](https://parahumans.wordpress.com)
 ---
 Track: Meowlevatorstuck (Cat Tax)
@@ -219,5 +223,6 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Elevatorstuck
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Joyfulldreams:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax))
+    @@ [Bandcamp about blurb](https://actomega.bandcamp.com/track/meowlevatorstuck-cat-tax)
+
     Originally "Elevatorstuck (With Even More Meows)"
diff --git a/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml b/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
index 22bf1c26..9cb09abe 100644
--- a/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
+++ b/album/vast-error-vol-5-side-1.yaml
@@ -272,6 +272,70 @@ URLs:
 - https://vasterror.bandcamp.com/track/indomitable
 - https://soundcloud.com/splitsuns/indomitable
 Lyrics: |-
+    @@ [Bandcamp lyrics](https://vasterror.bandcamp.com/track/indomitable)
+
+    Call me
+    When you answer
+    Slowly
+    Moving like the
+    Rage that's
+    Slipping through my soul
+    Hold me
+    Leave this planet
+    Kill me
+    Like somebody else that’s
+    Trying to control
+
+    I'm here
+    I'm free
+    From this
+    Indomitable
+    We're live
+    So here
+    I am
+    Indomitable
+
+    [unintelligible whispering]
+
+    Making sense of something
+    Wriggles through the outer wilds
+    Are you here with me?
+    Tear down, every fraction
+    Growing through a hell that faded
+    Into something more
+
+    ANOTHER NIGHT
+    ANOTHER CORPSE
+    ANOTHER DEAD SIDESHOW
+    NEW BLOOD ON MY OLD SHOES
+    BLOOD ON THE CANVAS
+    MY HEAD ON A PIKE
+    CHEERING FOR MY DEATH
+
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+    CAN'T LEAVE, CAN'T LEAVE
+
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+    Can't leave, Can't leave
+    Aren't you glad?
+
+    @@ [SoundCloud lyrics](https://soundcloud.com/splitsuns/indomitable)
+
     Call me when you answer
     Slowly moving like the rage that's
     Slipping through my soul