added early (and later, as well as the origin for the Highland Thunder name) titles for Ferkol's LoFaM4 alpha kid land themes, as well as The Muse's Lyre and The Lord's a Liar, as well as the "commentary" for those early The Lyrist and The Lordling titles

- corrected erroneous link to highland thunder on tragic heights commentary (linked to highland thunder's soundcloud; corrected to tombs and krypton)

2 files changed, 80 insertions, 1 deletions

diff --git a/album/cherubim.yaml b/album/cherubim.yaml
index bc55c2a1..f0de5e5b 100644
--- a/album/cherubim.yaml
+++ b/album/cherubim.yaml
@@ -297,6 +297,15 @@ Commentary: |-
     I even brought in Buzinkai's [[Doctor]] for two seconds because, you know, at this point, Doctor was in so many remixes and references and revisitations, that it was fine for me to take it for the first - and only! - time, and do it in this, ah, totally out of tune, random vignette. Just to say, there, there's my Doctor remix. Y'a happy?
 ---
 Track: The Lyrist
+Additional Names:
+- Name: >-
+    The Muse's Lyre
+  Annotation: >-
+    original name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/57455068572/homestuck-music-facts)
+- Name: >-
+    The Lyre
+  Annotation: >-
+    original idea name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/57455068572/homestuck-music-facts)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:35'
@@ -314,8 +323,27 @@ Sheet Music Files:
   Files:
   - 'The Lyrist - Thomas Ferkol (A minor).pdf'
   - 'The Lyrist - Thomas Ferkol (Ab minor).pdf'
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/57455068572/homestuck-music-facts), original name commentary regarding The Lyrist and [[The Lordling]], 08/05/2013)
+
+    <b>HOMESTUCK MUSIC. FACTS.</b>
+
+    DID YOU KNOW: the Lyrist was originally called The Muse's Lyre. When tracks had to be made in pairs however, each pair (or group) of musicians decided on dichotomous but stylistically similar names for their pieces. The original idea was to have it as The Lyre and The Liar (or The Muse's Lyre and The Lord's a Liar), but turns out Caliborn is much of a liar, really, so it became The Lyrist and [[The Lordling]]!
+
+    Also, DID YOU KNOW: [[artist:toby-fox]] is not actually a Fox? HAH, just pulling your leg. Of course he is!
+
+    <small>#I really liked those names #why couldn't caliborn have been a big ole liar too</small>
 ---
 Track: The Lordling
+Additional Names:
+- Name: >-
+    The Lord's a Liar
+  Annotation:
+    original name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/57455068572/homestuck-music-facts)
+- Name: >-
+    The Liar
+  Annotation:
+    original idea name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/57455068572/homestuck-music-facts)
 Artists:
 - Toby Fox
 Duration: '2:51'
diff --git a/album/lofam4.yaml b/album/lofam4.yaml
index 445984b0..793e1d90 100644
--- a/album/lofam4.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam4.yaml
@@ -924,6 +924,19 @@ Commentary: |-
     This is a solemn artwork that captures a snapshot of Rose and Kanaya in a tender embrace. The piece manages to render the two lovers at their closest, while also highlighting the extremes of both of their characters. Rose's skin is tainted black to indicate her status as Grimdark, while Kanaya is glowing white as rainbow drinkers often do. Although the addition of the titular "greensleeves" to Kanaya's outfit is subtle, it helps tie the artwork even further to its song and turns it into an excellent companion.
 ---
 Track: Highland Thunder
+Additional Names:
+- Name: >-
+    The Voltaic Fault
+  Annotation: >-
+    early name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon)
+- Name: >-
+    The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)
+  Annotation: >-
+    early name with Land title, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon)
+- Name: >-
+    Land of Mounds and Xenon
+  Annotation: >-
+    later name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:20'
@@ -937,6 +950,18 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Danger! High Voltage
 Commentary: |-
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35806153737/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon), WIP commentary, 11/15/2012)
+
+    <b>The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)</b>
+
+    Sorry it (maybe, I can't tell anymore) is so quiet, still trying to fix this volume issue I've had with my stuff. Jakes land reminded me of highlands with the mounds and all the green, and I love the charged xenon running through the planet's canyons.
+
+    <i>Thomas Ferkol:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/51435789353/the-voltaic-fault-land-of-mounds-and-xenon-i), origin of final track name, 05/26/2013)
+
+    <b>The Voltaic Fault (Land of Mounds and Xenon)</b>
+
+    I put my ear to the rolling hills of highland thunder.
+
     <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
 
     This was very much a test-bed for photoshop brushes and adjustment layers I had yet to touch on, all while putting the speed in speedpaint.
@@ -2170,6 +2195,19 @@ Commentary: |-
     Fun fact actually, this piece had a couple other variants before this version, which had Dave wearing different colored suits. One was white, and the other was red. However, after dazed-squid was suggested to try a green one instead, it managed to catch the eye quite very well indeed. As such, the green version stuck.
 ---
 Track: Cleopatra's Cocktail Party
+Additional Names:
+- Name: >-
+    Cleopatra's Cocktail Party (Land of Pyramids and Neon)
+  Annotation: >-
+    name with Land title, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35604745508/cleopatras-cocktail-party-land-of-pyramids-and)
+- Name: >-
+    Land of Pyramids and Neon
+  Annotation: >-
+    later name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/52824947464/land-of-pyramids-and-neon-happy-612-heres-some)
+- Name: >-
+    Land Of Pyramids And Neon
+  Annotation: >-
+    final capitalization, [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/land-of-pyramids-and-neon)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:45'
@@ -3205,6 +3243,19 @@ Commentary: |-
     Oh right, on another note, Crowbar's pretty sweet, I guess. Enjoy.
 ---
 Track: Tragic Heights
+Additional Names:
+- Name: >-
+    Tragic Heights (Land of Tombs and Krypton)
+  Annotation: >-
+    name with Land title, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/35879549166/tragic-heights-land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
+- Name: >-
+    Land of Tombs and Krypton
+  Annotation: >-
+    later name, [Tumblr](https://eidolonorpheus.tumblr.com/post/53159308507/land-of-tombs-and-krypton)
+- Name: >-
+    Tombs and Krypton
+  Annotation: >-
+    final name, [SoundCloud](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton)
 Artists:
 - Thomas Ferkol
 Duration: '3:02'
@@ -3223,7 +3274,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> (album help, booklet commentary)
 
-    This is one of Ferkol's 3 tracks [[track:highland-thunder|that were]] [[track:cleopatras-cocktail-party|created for]] the planets of the alpha session. (In particular, this was created for Dirk's planet: The Land of Tombs and Krypton.) Although this song never saw an official release, now you can enjoy it here, on Land of Fans and Music 4. Or on Ferkol's soundcloud. You can also listen to this song [on Ferkol's soundcloud.](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/highland-thunder)
+    This is one of Ferkol's 3 tracks [[track:highland-thunder|that were]] [[track:cleopatras-cocktail-party|created for]] the planets of the alpha session. (In particular, this was created for Dirk's planet: The Land of Tombs and Krypton.) Although this song never saw an official release, now you can enjoy it here, on Land of Fans and Music 4. Or on Ferkol's soundcloud. You can also listen to this song [on Ferkol's soundcloud.](https://soundcloud.com/eidolonorpheus/tombs-and-krypton)
 
     Starting off with simple choir alongside plucked strings, this piece builds up slightly, before letting a synthesizer take us deeper, as if we are descending onto the surface of Dirk's planet. As the piece continues, more and more electronic instruments come in, as the landscape becomes harsher and harsher. Yet, throughout it all, the strings remain steadfast.
 ---