troles and chiptumes commentary fixes

1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/album/of-troles-and-chiptumes.yaml b/album/of-troles-and-chiptumes.yaml
index 43d2aa6d..187d9d77 100644
--- a/album/of-troles-and-chiptumes.yaml
+++ b/album/of-troles-and-chiptumes.yaml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     One of the few times I did was sampling cheers in [[Oppa Toby Style]], which I miraculously managed to do through audio subtraction and freaking [Audacity](https://www.audacityteam.org/). Like, audio subtraction in Audacity used to extract cheer samples from a song. [[artist:toby-fox|Toby]] is a madman. Let's leave it at that.
 
-    But, yeah, every single song on this album, I think, every single song except for one has a remix of Toby Fox or Radiation's music, because he, unlike me, is really good at capturing the personalities of pretty much everything. It shows in his troll themes--like [[track:crustacean|Karkat's song]] is just, is really grouchy but fun to listen to and catchy at the same time.
+    But, yeah, every single song on this album, I think, every single song except for one has a remix of Toby Fox or Radiation's music, because he, unlike me, is really good at capturing the personalities of pretty much everything. It shows in his troll themes--like [[track:karkats-theme|Karkat's song]] is just, is really grouchy but fun to listen to and catchy at the same time.
 
     And then, he has this whole Vriska tone of music with insane guitars, and obviously it shows up in Undertale, which the characters can be pretty much summed up through their music. Like, I don't even need to say things like how, like, Sans and Papyrus's music especially is supposed to define their characters, but...
 
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Okay, so I accidentally messed up the recording, and I'll need to start over with commenting on Mexican But Not Really. But I guess I can pick up where I left off 20 seconds in.
 
-    And yeah, there's the remix of [[track:breathtak1ng|Breathtak1ng]], that song from the fan album [[album:beforus]], which is a really long album with a lot of pre-scratch trolls, and it's generally regarded as a not-very-good album, but it has some gems in, and Breathtak1ng is actually one of them, and it's a pretty similar song to the troll songs on this album. It was a song for Rufio, and it's basically a medley of songs for him and his ancestor and all the Taurus trolls, and it's actually a good song, even though the whole Beforus album encouraged original compositions.
+    And yeah, there's the remix of [[track:breathtak1ng|Breathtak1ng]], that song from the fan album [[album:beforus]], which is a really long album with a lot of pre-scratch trolls, and it's generally regarded as a not-very-good album, but it has some gems in, and Breathtak1ng is actually one of them, and it's a pretty similar song to the troll songs on this album. It was a song for Rufioh, and it's basically a medley of songs for him and his ancestor and all the Taurus trolls, and it's actually a good song, even though the whole Beforus album encouraged original compositions.
 
     Oh wait, fuck, that's my solo section of this song. It's one of the few songs I did that, and some people actually particularly like this song out of the album, and I think I turned it out at least somewhat unique and fun to listen to compared to the more dull parts of this album, at least.
 
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Davesprite
 - Catscratch
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>cookiefonster:</i> ([album video commentary](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=USoHDGQiNVA), 6/12/2017)
+    <i>cookiefonster:</i> ([album video commentary](https://youtu.be/USoHDGQiNVA?t=1419), 6/12/2017)
 
     *(Continued from [[track:the-not-fuckass-not-waltz]])*
 
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     But, all things considered, I'm happy that I actually did finish making Rex Mille Geromius.
 
-    [Unintelligible] has some pretty Cool track art there. It's also pretty New, don't you think?
+    It ended up unpolished, but it has some pretty Cool track art there. It's also pretty New, don't you think?
 
     *(Continued in [[track:of-troles-and-frytunes]])*
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