general review & jebb changelog entries

3 files changed, 10 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/album/desynced-vol-2.yaml b/album/desynced-vol-2.yaml
index 7031d637..6e9f8c84 100644
--- a/album/desynced-vol-2.yaml
+++ b/album/desynced-vol-2.yaml
@@ -206,18 +206,26 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Light of the Sun
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Levc:</i> (Desynced OST Discord liveblog commentary)
+
     chat was originally inspired by a leftover idea I had for a homestuck fan song
+
     it was supposed to be a bossanova medley of many tracks from the comic
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     I really wanted to do something with the concept of "background music for when character are talking" since a lot of homestuck music tries to go for other more exciting places to give some kind of score
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     but since it is a comic with lots of words
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     it was weird to not find or remember a track about said lots of words
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     it was supposed to have the friendship theme, but I confused the motifs and didn't bother to correct
 
     <i>Jebb:</i> (Desynced OST Discord liveblog commentary)
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     I mean, this perfectly fits that idea of a bg "chatting music" imo
     It sounds a lot like a ringtone but that makes it even better
 
     <i>Levc:</i> (Desynced OST Discord liveblog commentary)
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     if I remember correctly I made the rington first and then expanded it into the rest of the song so it makes sense lmao
 ---
 Track: Town of Breath
diff --git a/album/lofam5a2.yaml b/album/lofam5a2.yaml
index 9d2dc422..9443cd34 100644
--- a/album/lofam5a2.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam5a2.yaml
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     You can [play this amazing and hilarious track](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DbtS8RiPkds) in more than one way.
 
     <i>Aubbie:</i>
-    haha wahoo! beckoning as a concept is really fuckin funny and i the fact bb managed to make it work is nothin short of radicool to me. I wanted to try and do justice to the visuals of the song while still staying true to the Homestuck style. I took references from early Act panels and flashes to capture John's whole look, and I also took visual cues and inspirations from the lighting and stuff in the song. I felt like the BG was a lilll empty so i put in the repeating text, hehe. ColorsNMayhem as a mod is somethin thats super cool and honestly p special to me personally. I mean come on, It's a Homestuck FNF mod made by one of my fuckin buds, of course im delighted about it. The fact I've gotten to work on it and make even more art for it (the first piece I ever made being the main banner art) is just. ITS COOL, MAN!!! ITS FUCKING COOL!!! As of writing, I cant wait for ColorsNMayhem to come out, and for yall to see what bb cooked. Because I promise you he cooked GOOD.
+    haha wahoo! beckoning as a concept is really fuckin funny and i the fact bb managed to make it work is nothin short of radicool to me. I wanted to try and do justice to the visuals of the song while still staying true to the Homestuck style. I took references from early Act panels and flashes to capture John's whole look, and I also took visual cues and inspirations from the lighting and stuff in the song. I felt like the BG was a lilll empty so i put in the repeating text, hehe. ColorsNMayhem as a mod is somethin thats super cool and honestly p special to me personally. I mean come on, It's a Homestuck FNF mod made by one of my fuckin buds, of course im delighted about it. The fact I've gotten to work on it and make even more art for it (the first piece I ever made being the main banner art) is just. ITS COOL, MAN!!! ITS FUCKING COOL!!! As of writing, I cant wait for [[album:fnf-colors-and-mayhem-vol-1|ColorsNMayhem]] to come out, and for yall to see what bb cooked. Because I promise you he cooked GOOD.
 ---
 Track: Yo Quiero la Homestuck
 Additional Names:
diff --git a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
index d33b66d0..f3b13027 100644
--- a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
+++ b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
@@ -1897,12 +1897,10 @@ Artists:
 - bb-panzu
 Duration: '4:21'
 URLs:
-- https://files.catbox.moe/b8rjfg.flac
+- https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/archive/vriska%20song%20NEW.flac
 ---
 Track: Welcome To Night Vasterror
 Duration: '1:25'
----
-Track: Wind Waker
 Artists:
 - pragmaticNihilist
 URLs: