archive commentary structuring tweaks

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/album/archive.yaml b/album/archive.yaml
index 1f75d4ff..4db7abd1 100644
--- a/album/archive.yaml
+++ b/album/archive.yaml
@@ -20,6 +20,8 @@ Wallpaper Artists:
 Wallpaper Style: 'opacity: 0.7;'
 Additional Files:
 - Title: Bandcamp Banner and Background
+  Description: >-
+    From the original 2016 release.
   Files:
   - banner.png
   - bg.jpg
@@ -114,17 +116,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     From later 2024 on - following discussion in Bowmantown about the presentation of Archive, and various wiki concepts - these two entries are consolidated as a single album on the wiki. We reflect the track list from 2024, with tracks [[track:crimesters-theme]], [[track:crimesters-credits]], and [[track:awake-2013-version]] getting their earlier-release names as "additional names". Commentary from the various releases and platforms is all here, too.
 
-    The original cover artwork is included below. Those (unfortunately copyright-offending!) clouds are the same ones used for the wiki's background art - pulled from the album's 2016 presentation on Bandcamp.
-
     <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (original artwork)
 
     <img src="media/misc/archive-original-cover.jpg" width="300">
 
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
-
-    Bowman also shared some commentary about the creation of the new cover artwork while the 2018 release was in progress.
-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (Bowmantown Discord, excerpts, 9/4/2018)
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (Bowmantown Discord re: artwork for 2018 release, excerpts, 9/4/2018)
 
     I've been playing with some ideas for a new version of the cover, I wanted to see what you thought.