more more fraymotif fighters wip

2 files changed, 120 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/album/fraymotif-fighters.yaml b/album/fraymotif-fighters.yaml
index e8128e6b..bb42e512 100644
--- a/album/fraymotif-fighters.yaml
+++ b/album/fraymotif-fighters.yaml
@@ -32,6 +32,13 @@ Artists:
 Duration: 2:03
 URLs:
 - https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/fraymotif-fighters-title-theme
+Referenced Tracks:
+- Showtime (Original Mix)
+- Homestuck
+- Aggrieve
+- Liquid Negrocity
+# megalovania
+- Beatdown (Strider Style)
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Funk McLovin:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/fraymotif-fighters-title-theme))
 
@@ -59,7 +66,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Showtime (Original Mix)
 - Aggrieve
 - Beatdown (Strider Style)
-- Dissension
+- Dissension (Original)
 - Homestuck Anthem # per commentary?
 Lyrics: |-
     <code>1 2 3 4
@@ -116,12 +123,29 @@ Commentary: |-
     oh also post deadline i added an organ with some [[track:homestuck-anthem|homestuck anthem]] or whatever
 
     mama mia
+
+    <i>Guffy:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1325072771147108473), 1/4/2025)
+
+    i do see you have [[track:homestuck-anthem|Homestuck Anthem]] `# per commentary?`<br>
+    its in the organ under the aspect spelling out part<br>
+    its a little fucked up but its There
+
+    (it could also just be [[track:homestuck|Homestuck]] but i dont remember)<br>
+    (i wrote this thing within like a 16 hour span)
 Credit Sources: |-
     <i>Guffy:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/thats-what-im-classspectin-character-select), excerpt)
 
     [... i] didnt have much time before the deadline lmao? deadline is in a few hours as i write this and i started the track maybe 16 hours ago [...]
 
     oh also post deadline i added an organ with some [[track:homestuck-anthem|homestuck anthem]] or whatever
+
+    <i>Guffy:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1325072771147108473), 1/4/2025)
+
+    i do see you have [[track:homestuck-anthem|Homestuck Anthem]] `# per commentary?`<br>
+    its in the organ under the aspect spelling out part<br>
+    its a little fucked up but its There
+
+    (it could also just be [[track:homestuck|Homestuck]] but i dont remember) [...]
 ---
 Track: KrabKlash (vs. Karkat)
 Directory: krabklash
@@ -164,9 +188,11 @@ Duration: 2:15
 URLs:
 - https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/gale-force-vs-john
 - https://soundcloud.com/guffy3/fraymotif-fighters-gale-force
-# Referenced Tracks:
-# - Showtime (Original Mix)
-# - Sburban Jungle
+Referenced Tracks:
+- Showtime (Piano Refrain)
+- Doctor
+- Harlequin
+- Sburban Jungle
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Guffy:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/gale-force-vs-john))
 
@@ -187,6 +213,40 @@ Commentary: |-
     i got stuck with this track a lot and i feel like you can probably hear it by the way its kinda segmented around where i started playing with motifs and sections from other john-related songs but i'd like to think it works out.
 
     also endings are HARD sometimes dude.
+
+    <i>Guffy:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1325071423194271807), excerpt, 1/3/2025)
+
+    yo i wrote this and im doing my best to remember whats what
+
+    - 0:00-0:10 - i dont remember if this is a direct reference oops
+    - 0:10-0:13 - [[track:showtime-piano-refrain|showtime (piano refrain)]]
+    - 0:12-0:35 - [[track:doctor|doctor]] [the organ, the piano runs are just embellishment]
+    - 0:48-1:10 - ??? [NO IDEA as of this moment, going through backups to try pick it apart]
+    - 1:36-2:00 - [[track:harlequin|harlequin]]
+
+    thankfully i have 150 backups, apparently
+
+    i am 80% sure i only used showtime, doctor, sburban whatever and harlequin
+
+    0:48-1:10 MIGHT be doctor but key changed and note lengths all made the same?? i truly cant tell or remember anymore<br>
+    edit: no thats what i did in that post into section. idk what this shit is
+
+    oh the organ part in that might be arranged from harlequin
+
+    <i>Guffy:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1325071423194271807), excerpt, 1/4/2025)
+
+    alright so for gale force its like
+
+    - 0:00–0:10 ??? [no reference i think? i do not Remember]
+    - 0:10-0:13 [[track:showtime-piano-refrain|showtime (piano refrain)]]
+    - 0:12-0:35 [[track:doctor|doctor]] [the organ], [[track:showtime-piano-refrain|showtime (piano refrain)]] [the end of some of the piano runs]
+    - 0:35-0:47 [[track:showtime-piano-refrain|showtime (piano refrain)]] [i think this is the piano refrain? [[track:showtime-original-mix|the original mix]] has different embellishments and the refrain specific phrase ending i keep quoting that the original mix doesnt have]
+    - 0:47–0:58 ??? [i genuinely have NO idea what this is. could be filler? could be pre-emptive chords for the next part? i have 150 backups of this track working on it and theres an ominous gap where this section was worked on]
+    - 0:58–1:10 [[track:harlequin|harlequin]] [pitch changed and note length fuckery]
+    - 1:10–1:33 [[track:sburban-jungle|Sburban (something)]]
+    - 1:22–1:36 [[track:showtime-piano-refrain|showtime (piano refrain)]] [again :)]
+    - 1:36–2:00 [[track:harlequin|harlequin]] [this time quicker paced than the first tee hee]
+    - 2:02- ??? [this is just the intro again, but without the showtime ending]
 Credit Sources: |-
     <i>Guffy:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/gale-force-vs-john), excerpt)
 
@@ -195,6 +255,10 @@ Credit Sources: |-
     im borrowing bits from [[track:showtime-original-mix|showtime]], [[track:doctor|doctor]], [[track:sburban-jungle|sburban something]], and [[track:harlequin|harlequin]] in places [...]
 
     i got stuck with this track a lot and i feel like you can probably hear it by the way its kinda segmented around where i started playing with motifs and sections from other john-related songs but i'd like to think it works out.
+
+    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
+
+    Also see detailed reference breakdown in artist commentary.
 ---
 Track: Wicked Wax Warrior (vs. Dave)
 Directory: wicked-wax-warrior
@@ -290,11 +354,17 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Rainy:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=39KXnY8KynY), excerpt)
 
-    I was asked to write commentary for the two tracks, so here you go. I’ve always had a soft spot for Jane, so taking on the task of writing a strife theme for here was something I didn’t even need to think about. As one can probably hear, the track has heavy influence from the Kirby series. The goofy, saccharine sound of those soundtracks fit Jane’s silly personality, so I had to go for it. I initially wanted to do something more in the style of Flashygoodness but gave up lol. This song also sees me revisiting a fansong I wrote in 2018 called [[track:lifesaver|“Lifesaver”]] which was on the now delisted album [[album:stable-timeloops-and-paradoxes-2|Stable Timeloops and Paradoxes 2]]. Coming back to melodies that I wrote 6 years ago feels odd but doing really made me appreciate how far I’ve come since then.
+    I was asked to write commentary for the two tracks, so here you go. I’ve always had a soft spot for Jane, so taking on the task of writing a strife theme for here was something I didn’t even need to think about. As one can probably hear, the track has heavy influence from the Kirby series. The goofy, saccharine sound of those soundtracks fit Jane’s silly personality, so I had to go for it. I initially wanted to do something more in the style of Flashygoodness but gave up lol. This song also sees me revisiting a fansong I wrote in 2018 called [[track:lifesaver-stlap2|“Lifesaver”]] which was on the now delisted album [[album:stlap2|Stable Timeloops and Paradoxes 2]]. Coming back to melodies that I wrote 6 years ago feels odd but doing really made me appreciate how far I’ve come since then.
 Credit Sources: |-
     <i>Rainy:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=39KXnY8KynY), excerpt)
 
     [...] As one can probably hear, the track has heavy influence from the Kirby series. The goofy, saccharine sound of those soundtracks fit Jane’s silly personality, so I had to go for it. [...]
+
+    <i>Rainy:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=39KXnY8KynY), excerpt)
+
+    References:<br>
+    [[track:first-steps|"First Steps"]] by [[artist:david-ellis]]<br>
+    [[track:lifesaver-stlap2|"Lifesaver"]] by [[artist:rainy]]
 ---
 Track: Hopy Orders (Be JUST Be HEROIC or be DEAD)
 Additional Names:
@@ -332,9 +402,9 @@ Credit Sources: |-
     <i>Tee-vee:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/hopy-orders-be-just-be-heroic-or-be-dead), excerpt)
 
     References:<br>
-    [[track:now-im-a-villain|Now I'm a Villain]] by [[artist:david-ellis|David Ellis]]<br>
-    [[track:stress|Stress]] by [[artist:buzinkai|Buzinkai]] and [[artist:toby-fox|Toby Fox]]<br>
-    [[track:moonsetter|Moonsetter]] by [[artist:toby-fox|Toby Fox]]
+    [[track:now-im-a-villain|Now I'm a Villain]] by [[artist:david-ellis]]<br>
+    [[track:stress|Stress]] by [[artist:buzinkai]] and [[artist:toby-fox]]<br>
+    [[track:moonsetter|Moonsetter]] by [[artist:toby-fox]]
 ---
 Track: Nyantusion (vs. Roxy)
 Directory: nyantusion
@@ -372,6 +442,11 @@ Credit Sources: |-
 
     [...] When I was writing the track, it was around the time the Marvel vs Capcom collection got announced and was discovering the Marvel Super Heroes soundtrack by Yuki Iwai for the first time. Consequently, this song took heavy inspiration from Captain America’s theme with some additional influence from the Mega Man X soundtrack. [...]
 
+    <i>Rainy:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P1mlA031u60), excerpt)
+
+    References:<br>
+    "Dissension" by [[artist:david-ko]]
+
     <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
 
     Bandcamp commentary on this track appears to be accidentally duplicated from Tee-vee's track [[track:hopy-orders-be-just-be-heroic-or-be-dead]], so it's not included here.
@@ -432,6 +507,11 @@ Artists:
 Duration: 4:11
 URLs:
 - https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/midnight-carnage-boss-bec-noir
+Referenced Tracks:
+- Walk-Stab-Walk (R&E)
+- Liquid Negrocity
+- Penumbra Phantasm
+- The Person That Should Pay Is
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Levc:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://sahcon.bandcamp.com/track/midnight-carnage-boss-bec-noir))
 
@@ -454,6 +534,17 @@ Credit Sources: |-
     While totally cool, it is a really cheesy pick to go with the really straight forward version of the iconic melody. It needs to make you feel like ANIME IS REAL. So a song that takes that motif and "evolves" it will make you ASCEND to the sky as you wavedash into that bastard. [...]
 
     Oh, and it's also based on [[track:walk-stab-walk-r-and-e|"Walk-Stab-Walk"]] because, of course it would.
+
+    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1324911684338319360), 1/3/2025)
+
+    Just noticed something <br>
+    Midnight carnage doesn't list it but it 100% references levc's other song, "The one who should pay is"<br>
+    errr I mean [[track:the-person-that-should-pay-is|the person that should pay is]]<br>
+    That's the og on his channel
+
+    <i>Witch's Cadence:</i> ([HSMusic Discord](https://discord.com/channels/749042497610842152/749067042250031214/1326197636323217420), 1/6/2025)
+
+    The main little bit of [[track:the-person-that-should-pay-is|the person that should pay is]] plays like right after 1:00
 ---
 Track: Pumpkin Party in Sea Hitler's Water Apocalypse (1982 Cabinet Rip)
 Artists:
diff --git a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
index afd244a3..c13a2df8 100644
--- a/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
+++ b/album/references-beyond-homestuck.yaml
@@ -1429,6 +1429,27 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/archive/Borrius%20Motif.mp3
 ---
+Track: The Person That Should Pay Is
+Date First Released: November 12, 2023
+Duration: 3:19
+Artists:
+- Levc
+Cover Artists:
+- Levc
+Cover Art File Extension: png
+URLs:
+- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9h_kHAg9fA
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Levc:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9h_kHAg9fA), excerpt)
+
+    A JRPG battle theme using the live a live soundfont.
+
+    I did a really catchy hook. So I grabbed the Live a Live soundfont and did a track arround it. Inspired by both [[MEGALOMANIA|megalomania]] and ["A Painful Death at the Hands of a Psycho"](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jq4WMY-vRUM)
+
+    Does it fit the game? is it catchy? way too repetitive? IDK I was having fun while making it.
+
+    (Also the name was inspired by Bravely Default because that's what makes it a true JRPG song.)
+---
 Track: Theme of Dr. Brinner
 Artists:
 - Unknown Artist