data changes courtesy of Bambosh from the UHSC

7 files changed, 11 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.txt b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.txt
index 1acc0885..24d357fb 100644
--- a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.txt
+++ b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a.txt
@@ -258,6 +258,10 @@ Duration: 4:57
 URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/olive-rogue
 - https://youtu.be/L2BLUyv7UT0?list=PLnVpmehyaOFYiRW0x2OrqmeDZZp4rQHEV
+Commentary:
+    <i>Astrom:</i>
+    (Bonus art!)
+    <img src="media/misc/olive-rogue-bonus.png" width="600" height="600">
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 Track: Jade Sylph
 Artist: Frank Haught
diff --git a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.txt b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.txt
index 2e78fd91..3eb9c132 100644
--- a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.txt
+++ b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.txt
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ URLs:
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 Track: Emerald Terror
 Artist: Elisa McCabe
-Track Art: Elisa McCabe
+Track Art: HamsterParade
 Duration: 2:31
 URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/emerald-terror-2
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ URLs:
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 Track: Battle Brotocol
 Artist: Elliot Colp
-Track Art: Elliot Colp
+Track Art: Hanni Brosh
 Duration: 2:16
 URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/battle-brotocol-2
diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-10.txt b/album/homestuck-vol-10.txt
index db9239b8..5770b2a6 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-10.txt
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-10.txt
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ URLs:
 Commentary:
     <i>Tensei:</i>
     For the longest time I considered this a song for Jade, specifically her dog tier transformation. Then I realized, far too late, that Aranea doesn't have a lot of music given her relative importance in the comic!
-    More importantly, this song has some piratey/celcitc jig vibes (partially basedo n the fight club theme from Assassin's Creed 3), which actually made it a decent fit for Aranea (given her Mindfang alter ego).
+    More importantly, this song has some piratey/celcitc jig vibes (partially based on the fight club theme from Assassin's Creed 3), which actually made it a decent fit for Aranea (given her Mindfang alter ego).
     So by the limited powers of canonization invested in me, I hereby pronounce this song's alternative title as "Of Sylphs and Sekrets" and that it may be interpreted as a theme for either Jade or Aranea.
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 Track: Beatup
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ Contributors:
 - Robert J! Lake (production, arrangement)
 Commentary:
     <i>Luke Benjamins:</i>
-    I actually wrote the melody for this track almost five years ago, for a project that never got off the ground. As far as I can remember, I didn't have any particular inspiration when I wrote it, musical or otherwise. It's the catchiest tune I've ever made, yet I couldn't tell you how it came to me exactly. This version is a completely unique take on this melod ycompared to the original context, giving it a very different Feel. I wasn't able to do any of the audio production for this track, but I did guide RJ as to how I Feel it should be put together. We ended up pushing the deadline too much with this one, and there are still a couple things I wish had been changed, but like with any creative work, you need to draw the line somewhere, lest you polish it endlessly.
+    I actually wrote the melody for this track almost five years ago, for a project that never got off the ground. As far as I can remember, I didn't have any particular inspiration when I wrote it, musical or otherwise. It's the catchiest tune I've ever made, yet I couldn't tell you how it came to me exactly. This version is a completely unique take on this melody compared to the original context, giving it a very different Feel. I wasn't able to do any of the audio production for this track, but I did guide RJ as to how I Feel it should be put together. We ended up pushing the deadline too much with this one, and there are still a couple things I wish had been changed, but like with any creative work, you need to draw the line somewhere, lest you polish it endlessly.
     In the end, I'm gald to finally share itw ith the world in some form, and I hope the world enjoys it.
     <i>Robert J! Lake:</i>
     This is really Luke's song. I started the project file but he made it his own. The crow noises are mine.
diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-6.txt b/album/homestuck-vol-6.txt
index 8d04a316..bd6ccb3e 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-6.txt
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-6.txt
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ Commentary:
 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 Track: I Don't Want to Miss a Thing
 Artist: Michael Guy Bowman
-Duration: 357
+Duration: 3:57
 References:
 - I Don't Want to Miss a Thing:i-dont-want-to-miss-a-thing-aerosmith
 - Sburban Jungle
diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-9.txt b/album/homestuck-vol-9.txt
index af8e1524..29f2c4ec 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-9.txt
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-9.txt
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://youtu.be/RZGdkT96JDs?list=PLy5UGIMKOXpOfcXVfECYjb09aHc2uSEUv
 Commentary:
     <i>Toby Fox:</i>
-    art by P-RO at <a href="nomorepros.tumblr.com">nomorepros.tumblr.com</a>. P-RO always does a maximally amazing job so why I asked her to draw the art is a non-question.
+    art by P-RO at <a href="https://nomorepros.tumblr.com">nomorepros.tumblr.com</a>. P-RO always does a maximally amazing job so why I asked her to draw the art is a non-question.
     Stress is actually a pretty faithful arrangement of an original track by Buzinkai. Buzinkai has been responsible for several HS-important melodies like Doctor, Endless Climb, and Explore and [her] work, for me, has always established a certain “essence” of what Homestuck is. My goal for this piece was actually to create a classic strife theme for Dirk with the core feeling of earlier pieces like Showtime or Doctor, so basing the piece off of something with that “essence” was important.*
     I can’t say why Buzinkai wrote this piece the way she did, so I’ll instead highlight the differences between the original and my arrangement.
     <ul><li><p>Updated the instrumentation. Buzinkai’s usage of PXTONE is indeed charming and nostalgic-sounding, but I wanted to push things bit further. One major difference is the arrangement of the strings - Buzinkai’s PXTONE strings have an sharp attack to them, while mine come on a bit softer but are thicker. My strings then sound more “lush” but less “urgent.”</p></li> <li><p>I added a section between the original A section and B section with lower intensity. This was because the song got a bit too repetitive and static simply repeating like Buzinkai’s. Oddly, the repeats didn’t bother me in his track. I think this is partially because MY loop point, unlike Buzinkai’s, lowers the intensity a LOT more by removing a bunch of instruments where his simply flows into a repeat. I need to think about that more.</p></li> <li><p>Added an introduction and a true ending to make it more of a proper start-to-finish song.</p></li></ul>
diff --git a/album/lofam.txt b/album/lofam.txt
index d52319fd..bedb8841 100644
--- a/album/lofam.txt
+++ b/album/lofam.txt
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Commentary:
     This is about when I figured out that yes, there is a thing called the music team and no, they're not accepting applications. Oh well. I just figure I'll keep making music since I started.
     And then I just never stop.
     <hr>
-    So this is basically how I came to want to collect this music, polish it. People tend to complain about having to take the time to download the entire fanmusic thread one song at a time - and those people probably don't really ahve an inkling of how much good is in fanmusic.
+    So this is basically how I came to want to collect this music, polish it. People tend to complain about having to take the time to download the entire fanmusic thread one song at a time - and those people probably don't really have an inkling of how much good is in fanmusic.
     This album is a celebration of fanmusic, yes - but it's also intended as somthing to bring it to more people than would ordinarily venture onto a forum thread, several dozen pages long, in the Art Forum, in the MSPA fan forum, tucked away in a small corner of the Internet.
     So while you're here, I'll say two things:
     Firstly, maybe there's something you think you want to do. Maybe you're not good at it, but if you like it, and you practice, and you have people to give you good critical feedback on how good you are at it, it'll become something you're good at. Ask someone who's good at something and they'll say the same thing. (There are exceptions, like six-fingred pianists and seven-foot-tall basketball players. Not often, though.)
diff --git a/album/lofam4.txt b/album/lofam4.txt
index bad0f81b..1a6d12a5 100644
--- a/album/lofam4.txt
+++ b/album/lofam4.txt
@@ -1825,7 +1825,6 @@ Track: Exsanguinated
 Artist: Seijen
 Track Art: Kate Griffith
 Duration: 4:26
-References: https://unofficialmspafans.bandcamp.com/track/exsanguinated
 URLs:
 - https://unofficialmspafans.bandcamp.com/track/exsanguinated
 - https://youtu.be/_X8T8PjS8N4?list=PLYr2YZ5D3rfQBkwagYEi_JPvVYUIVfxn6