lilith nov 2 general review + changelog

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/album/the-wanderers.yaml b/album/the-wanderers.yaml
index 22a66343..8082dcbc 100644
--- a/album/the-wanderers.yaml
+++ b/album/the-wanderers.yaml
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <i>Emi:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://averyniceprince.tumblr.com/post/7604455794/httphomestuckbandcampcomtrackwe-walk), 7/14/2011)
 
-    Rachel asked me to draw for one of the tracks for the new album, and I honestly couldn't have been more honored!!! ;____;;; I had always wanted to draw the exiles, so this was a perfect opportunity hehe *U*
+    [[artist:rachel-locklin|Rachel]] asked me to draw for one of the tracks for the new album, and I honestly couldn't have been more honored!!! ;____;;; I had always wanted to draw the exiles, so this was a perfect opportunity hehe \*U\*
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 Track: Requiem for an Exile
 Artists:
@@ -393,10 +393,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     What a daring dream...
     (Just what do you think you're planning on doing with that ring?)<br>(Whatever it is forget it)<br>(The Slayer is miiiiiiiine)<br>(Now w8ke up)<br>(I said W88888888KE!)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://albatrossthesoup.tumblr.com/post/25964085415/commentary-for-what-a-daring-dream), 6/26/2012)
-    Here's my writeup for What a Daring Dream, as requested:
-
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+    <i>Alex Rosetti:</i> (composer, [Tumblr](https://albatrossthesoup.tumblr.com/post/25964085415/commentary-for-what-a-daring-dream), excerpt, 6/26/2012)
 
     The Wanderers is my favorite Homestuck album. Its focused premise, interesting takes on a theme, and general aesthetic all appeal to me. Not to mention the fact that it contains some of the best songs in the Homestuck discography. This song is not one of those.
 
@@ -410,17 +407,20 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Speaking of bonuses, [[artist:noot]] did the art we used for this track. It was one of a few pieces of track art that weren't commissioned. I happened to be looking around for artists and saw this, and I already knew it was perfect.
 
-    <i>Noot:</i> (track artist, [DeviantArt](https://www.deviantart.com/shikana/art/Dreams-of-red-and-sunder-215885568) full size artwork, 6/30/2011)
+    <i>Noot:</i> (full size artwork)
 
     <img src="media/misc/what-a-daring-dream-full.png" width="500" warning="blood (abstract)">
 
-    > A man is but the product of his thoughts. What he thinks, he becomes. - Mohandas K. Gandhi
+    <i>Noot:</i> (track artist, [DeviantArt](https://www.deviantart.com/shikana/art/Dreams-of-red-and-sunder-215885568), excerpt, 6/30/2011)
+
+    <b>Dreams of red and sunder</b>
+
+    A man is but the product of his thoughts. What he thinks, he becomes.<br>
+    \- Mohandas K. Gandhi
 
     This was probably the most ambitious thing I have done in quite a while. WV's dream sequence was always incredibly interesting to me, and what it implied. I wonder when we'll get to see how he gets out of being blown the smitheroons.
 
     Here's hoping it isn't very long before that bit of exposition up there becomes HORRIBLY OUTDATED.
-
-    Wayward Vagabond and Bec Noir are from MSPA and belong to Andrew Hussie
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 Track: Nightmare
 Additional Names: