jebb commentary review

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/album/stalemate-adieu.yaml b/album/stalemate-adieu.yaml
index 99f07b57..7e8e5195 100644
--- a/album/stalemate-adieu.yaml
+++ b/album/stalemate-adieu.yaml
@@ -18,6 +18,7 @@ Track Art File Extension: png
 #Wallpaper File Extension: png
 Commentary: |-
     <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/album/stalemate-adieu))
+
     Stalemate had a lot of music in the works when we had to pull the plug on it. But that doesn't mean it has to disappear! Here we have all the music that the team had lined up for future albums, which, unfortunately were never published. Every tracks info has the name of its creator, and a link to their page. Some even have unique album arts.
     
     Songs 1-11 were intended for an album called "Light and Dark", an album meant to highlight the lives of the Trolls and Dryads with character themes and more.
@@ -272,8 +273,10 @@ Artists:
 URLs:
 - https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/toads-flash-vers
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/toads-flash-vers))
-    Original by WarxTron... Edited by him, too. https://soundcloud.com/user-98942170
+    <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/toads-flash-vers), excerpt)
+
+    Original by WarxTron... Edited by him, too.
+
     This edit was going to be used in the End of Act 2 flash. Its not now.
 ---
 Section: Vol. 3 assorted
@@ -451,6 +454,7 @@ URLs:
 - https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/forever-viola-version
 Commentary: |-
     <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/forever-viola-version))
+
     This was going to be used in a flash, and was eventually going to get a full version with backing and stuff.
 ---
 Track: Scotch
@@ -480,11 +484,12 @@ Sampled Tracks:
 URLs:
 - https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/vaguelettes-but-its-french
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/vaguelettes-but-its-french))
+    <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/vaguelettes-but-its-french), excerpt)
+
     Song by SpilledCereal, remixed/Distorted from original song by [[artist:nexx-mowarek|Nexx Mowarek]]
-    https://soundcloud.com/spilledcereals
 
-    <i>SpilledCereals:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/vaguelettes-but-its-french))
+    <i>SpilledCereals:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/vaguelettes-but-its-french), excerpt)
+
     Warning - I hope y'all don't care about your eardrums
 ---
 Track: Sumptuous Strife Remix
@@ -545,6 +550,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     Above the dead body that will be mine
 Commentary: |-
     <i>infinite:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://stalematecomic.bandcamp.com/track/the-title-of-this-song-was-supposed-to-be-a-reference-to-a-quote-unquote-piece-of-art-but-infinite-reminded-me-that-we-could-probably-get-sued-because-of-it-being-a-copyrighted-work-that-hasnt-en))
+
     I never said that
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 Track: Topsy-Turvy