lilith nov 4 review + changelog

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diff --git a/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster.yaml b/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster.yaml
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--- a/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster.yaml
+++ b/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster.yaml
@@ -20,6 +20,16 @@ Additional Files:
   Files:
   - rust 2014 alt 1.png
   - rust 2014 alt 2.png
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://wellmanicuredmusic.bandcamp.com/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster))
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+    A remastered version of [[Rust Apocalypse]], released on the anniversary of the original track, which was itself an arrangement and expansion of [[track:rust-servant|a track I composed]] for the Homestuck album [[album:coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a]]. This version has been remastered from the original stem tracks for a brighter, clearer sound, and parts of the choir have been redone for additional clarity.
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+    <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://wellmanicuredmusic.bandcamp.com/album/rust-apocalypse-anniversary-remaster), excerpt)
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+    Based on [[track:rust-servant|"Rust Servant"]], composed in 2012 by [[artist:willow-ascenzo|Willow Ascenzo]], originally released April 2012 on [[album:coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a|"coloUrs and mayhem: Universe A"]] via Homestuck and What Pumpkin Studios
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+    Original [[track:rust-apocalypse|"Rust Apocalypse"]] released in January 2013 by Willow Ascenzo
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 Track: Rust Apocalypse [Anniversary Remaster]
 Duration: '07:36'
@@ -30,10 +40,6 @@ Cover Artists:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Rust Apocalypse
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i>
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-    A remastered version of [[Rust Apocalypse]], released on the anniversary of the original track, which was itself an arrangement and expansion of [[track:rust-servant|a track I composed]] for the Homestuck album [[album:coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-a]]. This version has been remastered from the original stem tracks for a brighter, clearer sound, and parts of the choir have been redone for additional clarity.
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     <i>Willow Ascenzo:</i> ([Tumblr](https://wellmanicuredmusic.tumblr.com/post/72285232982), excerpt, 1/5/2014)
 
     I said I wouldn't have any new music to ring in the new year with, and that's still true, but I listened to [[Rust Apocalypse]] and realized that with my growth in skills and technological advances over the past year I could make the track sound so much clearer and richer than the original release! Marvel at actually hearing more intelligible words in the opening!