unreleased tracks fixes, unofficial name notes

Fixes #22

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 28 deletions

diff --git a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
index 3f4a690..cd8d463 100644
--- a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
+++ b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
@@ -25,6 +25,9 @@ Lyrics: |-
     this is the story of one man's search for love and truth<br>in a universe forgotten by time
     the story of those fearful creatures<br>those that we call
     <big><big><i>BABIES</i></big></big>
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Toby Fox:</i>
+    Sometimes I wonder what my life would be like if I actually finished the second album.
 ---
 Track: Aradia's Theme (Pre-Death)
 Artists:
@@ -32,6 +35,9 @@ Artists:
 Duration: '2:06'
 URLs:
 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4deATGJcM4A
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Niklink:</i>
+    Unofficial name. If I recall correctly, I gave it that name for the Homestuck Sound Test because when [[group:toby-fox]] shared the track on his Tumblr, he shared it alongside a picture of Aradia (and nothing else to identify the song with), almost certainly the [[media:misc/aradias-theme-pre-death.png|same picture I used as track art for the song]] in the first versions of the Sound Test.
 ---
 Track: Before Before the Beginning
 Artists:
@@ -136,23 +142,6 @@ Duration: '1:22'
 URLs:
 - https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/242553
 ---
-Track: Flare (Cascade)
-Artists:
-- Clark Powell
-Duration: '3:26'
-URLs:
-- https://plazmataz.tumblr.com/post/19774190658/download-flare-cascade-i-have-recut-and
-- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hT0ijIKJkbE
-Referenced Tracks:
-- Flare
-- Cascade (Beta)
-Commentary: |-
-    <i>Clark Powell:</i>
-    I have recut and remastered my track Flare, as it was presented to you in the Cascade flash (rather than the calmed-down album version). I get asked a lot for this, so I decided to give it some extra love and attention.
-    I have attempted a number of times to put together a mix of Flare that utilized the distinctive crescendo that is recognizable from Cascade, but it never seems to work well without the cinematic context. The buildup sort of leads to nothing, and then the track either ends awkwardly or fades out, and I have something personal against fade-outs. Maybe I’ll talk about that someday. But not now.
-    I gave it another go, this time trying a decrescendo to bring the song back down from all the energy it riles up, then ending it on kind of a creepy note. I had more success here than I ever have in past attempts to cut the song together in this way.
-    Flare was a pretty big hit in its own right, so there’s always the pressure coming from the responsibility to handle this properly. I hope you enjoy it!
----
 Track: Flare (Green Sun Remix)
 Artists:
 - Clark Powell
@@ -261,6 +250,9 @@ URLs:
 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rdXvlsXlKOk
 Referenced Tracks:
 - The Beginning of Something Really Excellent
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Niklink:</i>
+    Unofficial name. If I recall correctly, I gave it that name for the Homestuck Sound Test because when [[group:toby-fox]] shared the track on his Tumblr, he shared it alongside a picture of Jadesprite (and nothing else to identify the song with), almost certainly the [[media:misc/jadesprite.png|same picture I used as track art for the song]] in the first versions of the Sound Test.
 ---
 Track: Jane's Dragon
 Artists:
@@ -372,8 +364,11 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Rex Duodecim Angelus
 - English
-Lyrics:
+Lyrics: |-
     (HONK)
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Niklink:</i>
+    Unofficial name. <a href="https://web.archive.org/web/20111110134032/http://fwugradiation.tumblr.com:80/post/12287015978">Archived link to the original Tumblr post.</a>
 ---
 Track: Ruins
 Artists:
@@ -382,16 +377,6 @@ Duration: '3:01'
 URLs:
 - https://youtu.be/gbiS4WkCOVo?t=4987
 ---
-Track: Savior of the Dreaming Dead (Cascade Cut)
-Artists:
-- Malcolm Brown
-Duration: '4:31'
-URLs:
-- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9dF20s8SYo
-Referenced Tracks:
-- Savior of the Dreaming Dead
-- Cascade (Beta)
----
 Track: Sea of Derse
 Artists:
 - Erik Scheele