add rowing

various james dever-related fixes & improvements

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 0 deletions

diff --git a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
index 73ee5bb..465734c 100644
--- a/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
+++ b/album/more-homestuck-fandom.yaml
@@ -1023,6 +1023,11 @@ Artists:
 Duration: '1:28'
 URLs:
 - https://youtu.be/gbiS4WkCOVo?t=26954
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>James Dever:</i> ([Tumblr post](https://web.archive.org/web/20140820055220/https://squidshanties.tumblr.com/))
+    Right around when Cherubim came out in March, I got a few requests to hear what the original sketches were for Red Sucker and Green Lolly. These were the skeletons that I gave the team. I worked with them through the process with input and suggestions on the pacing and structure, but they really took these simple ideas and ran in the best possible direction!
+
+    The cherubs are bizarre creatures, and everything about them is pretty far out there, so I focused on chromaticism in the themes to give it some off kilter base. Caliborn is (pardon my French) a little shit. He’s diabolical and selfish. I decided to base this skeleton on a minor triad to give it a darker tone right off the bat. Mirroring it on the Calliope sketch accidentally gave it a Kuja’s Theme tone to it, which I ended up loving. I immediately approached [[artist:kalibration|Kali]] about adding his own personal flare to it. I’ve always been a monumental fan of his compositions, especially [[album:tomb-of-the-ancestors|TOTA]], which was the sound I was looking for. He nailed it exponentially!
 ---
 Track: The Uranian
 Artists:
@@ -1032,6 +1037,11 @@ URLs:
 - https://youtu.be/gbiS4WkCOVo?t=27042
 Referenced Tracks:
 - The Undying
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>James Dever:</i> ([Tumblr post](https://web.archive.org/web/20140820055220/https://squidshanties.tumblr.com/))
+    Right around when Cherubim came out in March, I got a few requests to hear what the original sketches were for Red Sucker and Green Lolly. These were the skeletons that I gave the team. I worked with them through the process with input and suggestions on the pacing and structure, but they really took these simple ideas and ran in the best possible direction!
+
+    The cherubs are bizarre creatures, and everything about them is pretty far out there, so I focused on chromaticism in the themes to give it some off kilter base. Caliborn is (pardon my French) a little shit. He’s diabolical and selfish. I decided to base this skeleton on a minor triad to give it a darker tone right off the bat. Mirroring it on the Calliope sketch accidentally gave it a Kuja’s Theme tone to it, which I ended up loving. I immediately approached [[artist:kalibration|Kali]] about adding his own personal flare to it. I’ve always been a monumental fan of his compositions, especially [[album:tomb-of-the-ancestors|TOTA]], which was the sound I was looking for. He nailed it exponentially!
 ---
 Track: Three In The Morning (Davekind)
 Artists: