drop "track artist" commentary annotations

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@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Producing Merge was one of the most exciting projects I'd worked on in a long time. Kouta and I made a great team, and working with her pushed both of our boundaries well beyond our comfort zones. We got a lot of doubt from our friends about working with the caw and meow samples, but we were sure it was the perfect way to bring the song together. We were also heavy-handed with leitmotif from the original soundtrack, focusing on blending them in a way that was both interesting to listen to and recognizable. This was made with the utmost care, so give it a listen or ten.
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I drew this immediately following [[flash:8087|[S] Collide]]. Kouta later asked to use it as the track cover for Merge on SoundCloud, and I was happy to oblige. I'm honoured that they saw it as a fitting image to accompany their (very impressive) track.
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@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Rather than embodying a sense of mystery or adventure (as most Medium-related music tends to), I wanted this track to feel like home—something that this webcomic has become for me.
 
-    <i>RaChoTamer:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>RaChoTamer:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This was such a fun song and it reminded me of one of my favorite parts of Homestuck - the fun and adventure. It feels so welcoming and warm and triumphant, and I really tried to capture that here!
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@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song was written to celebrate the reunion of Rose and Roxy in the 4/29/15 Homestuck update! It was so sweet and triumphant, so I tried to reflect that in the music. The main melody is structured kinf of like a call-and-response between the two of them.
 
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Rose and Roxy's interactions are some of my favorite parts of Homestuck, the best of which is their meeting after [[flash:6901|Gameover]]. I've resketched and redrawn this way too much since I wanted to give this very nice track some justice. Originally the idea was much more different, I was going to draw roxy running towards rose with skaia in the background, but I changed it to match the canon scene better. Overall I'm pretty happy with the final product, I hope you guys like it too!
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@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     A little piece I put together, thinking about the broken moon of Prospit during the final battle between Jack and PM.
 
-    <i>Brawlitup99:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Brawlitup99:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The song that Mmetafour made was an electronic 8-bit style mix, so, logically, I took the role of drawing (or rather, "spriting") the art for this track. As you may know, the song symbolizes Prospit from A6A6A1 after it gets destroyed, so I did two scenes in one: Jane and Jake after their godtier transformations, and our heroes encountering Jack English for the first time. Come to think of it, that act was really messed up, wasn't it? Anyway, the song is amazing, and I really liked how the art came out. I hope you enjoy it too!
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@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Also, I think the artist for this track wanted to make it have to do with John/Roxy? Which isn't really what I initially had in mind, but it's cool and it works. Death of the Author and all that.
 
-    <i>yazshu:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>yazshu:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     i went through like fucking 5 variations of this art before i just decided to fuck it and do vaguely johnroxy retcon sequence that was at the bottom of the subreddit for some time. all of the others involved davesprite but fuck blorange. also please dont notice how lazy i was and i used the color blending tool on the tree when everything else was with the pencil tool.
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@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The main motif was taken from midnight suffers... A bluesy jazz type theme that was made with no real direction intended. This song is not necessarily "catchy", but at least it has direction and sounds good, which is always nice! Some of the most prominent instrumentation involved DVS saxophones, loud crazy drums, a heavy bassline, sharp synths and a really loud piano chord progression in the background. It's all crazy stuff.
 
-    <i>Calicorn:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Calicorn:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I chose Midnight as my track art, mostly just because of my love for Intermission. The song is absolutely fantastic, but since I'm not the most creative person around it took me a while to come up with any concrete designs at first. I was originally going to start off with a 50/50 bust drawing of Slick and Jack, but I soon discovered that might be a little too bland. I ended up listening to the song a dozen more times until I sketched out the base idea for the finalized idea. The main challenge had just been lining everything and getting the perspective to look pretty alright, although I'm not really an expert on perspective or composition. Either way, I'm really happy with how the piece turned out, especailly with the lighting on Slick himself.
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@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I'm actually not a huge fan of this song. See, I more or less made the whole album [[album:cyclica|Cyclica]] in a couple of days, and this short "here are a bunch of melodies over the [[Flare]] arpeggios" only took me an huor or two. I really think there are parts of Cyclica that are better (if you haven't listened to Cyclica yet, you should do that; you can find the full album [on YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ME3r64_NsnM)). A bunch of people seemed to like Dersite, and it made it onto [[album:cool-and-new-greatest-hits|Cool and New Greatest Hits]], so here it is I guess. The violin note holds are unrealistic, the synth is weird as fuck, the piano is bad. But everyone liked it. Except for [[artist:veritas-unae|Veri]]. Veri didn't like it. Bless you Veri.
 
-    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I wonder what life was like for the carapacians, floating out in space away from everything going on on the battlefield as it got prototyped. Seems kind of lonely.
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@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     It's about the Condesce, obviously. It's vaguely about her conquering a planet? The natives fight a long fight and then they just barely win! and everyone is reflecting on their loss and then she just glasses them or whatever she does. There's [[Crystalanthemums]] mostly because it seems to be the default badass-trolls theme. Also that is some badass art.
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The prompt I received with this track was "the Condesce (conquering planets)". The bubbly synths and unusual harmonies called to mind a geometrical design of neons against blacks, and I thought a logo-esque look suited the rather propagandistic vibe of the title. (Am I overthinking things? Probably.)
 
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Gold Pilot
 - The Blind Prophet
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Adamantist:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Adamantist:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     the Blind Pilot is leading what is left of his people through unknown lengths to a new home, albeit despite his own will. lonely encaged flighting spirit with a glimmer of hope. digital whispers of draining life. that is what I felt the Blind Pilot is.
 
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track has quite the story! It was originally meant to be fake "loading screen" music, to accompany a parodic video on the [[group:canmt|Cool and New Music Team]] youtube channel about Overseer v3 (a web-based sburb web game, whose development team I used to be part of) being shut down by [[artist:what-pumpkin-games|What Pumpkin]] (though the C&D was later found out to be fake). The project fell through, so I continued working on it and posted it on the LOFAM Discord server, where it got approved (thanks [[artist:lambda-elise-merryberry|Lambda]]), though the deadline had technically passed.
 
-    <i>Chumi:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Chumi:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     it sounds like a song for the beginning of a cool adventure! so that's what i drew :o
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@@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Some trivia: this song was named after an update discussion thread on the old MSPA forums. Apparently, that thread was in turn named after [a TVTropes page](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Retconjuration). Also, alongside a [[Homestuck Anthem]] quote at the end, the music box refrain featured throughout the song quotes [[track:windchime-foley|the foley]] on [[flash:82|Homestuck's title page]]. That's both because it's where the retcon arms first appear, and because I always wanted to reference those windchimes. Now you know!
 
-    <i>William Leonard:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>William Leonard:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I've always loved the 'John's retocn adventures' section of Homestuck, and I think it has to do with how it leads both the characters and myself along a brisk rollercoaster of twists and turns, through unknown paths - this sense of adventure is what I tried to convey in this art.
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@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song is for [[group:canmt|Cool and New Webcomic]], but I like it a lot and a lot of people like it too, so I want the world to see it. It is inspired by a lot of the new-age synthpop, which itself is inspired by the 1980s. In this time of rapid community music projects being built I want y'all to remember; we're all musicians and that is the blood that festers throughout the body. We're all alike in our different ways. love you all thanks have fun :>
 
-    <i>meigender:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>meigender:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Formation has a very 80's vibe to it, so I decided to aim towards more of a Hotline Miami feel for the accompanying artwork. I'm not sure how well I achieved that, but I figure a combination of bright colours and guns is at least veering in the right direction.
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@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     At the time I wrote this song it was mostly theorizing, but it's held up through the years (thankfully), so I took the chance to rework and record it for this album! It was a struggle to record, and there's a thing or two I would change, but I still think 2012 me would be pretty damn proud, haha. Finished, not perfect, as they say! Homestuck did so much for me creatively. I'm glad I could be a part of this tribute.
 
-    <i>shu:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>shu:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     the track is really pretty in a melancholic and reminiscing way so I wanted to encorporate things from earlier in the comic (the tree, the hanging scalemates, and the pink flowers) into a sadder scene that's near the end? The tree's also a clever metaphor for branching paths and al that lol and also it looks cool
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@@ -843,7 +843,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Originally, this piece was written for a good friend of mine, [[artist:patmandx|Patrick]]. He was running the fan adventure [[flash-act:loftlocked|Loftlocked]] at the time, and I'd supplied the comic with a lot of music in conjunction with [[artist:rnd|Kurtis]] (who is also on this album! Check him out!) Pat had approached me to write a haunting refrain for a harp playing character, Eliza. This theme would eventually form part of several songs written by Kurtis and myself, and the most prominent of which, Lamental, was made into another song, [[Infinity's Lament]]. It is a fun, jovial melody that turns darker as Eliza becomes less sure of herself and her playing. However, in a Homestuck specific context, consider Rose playing the rain, plucking strings but quickly finding herself at odds with her own land quest. Who knows? The beauty of music is that you can make your own interpretations.
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This track was initially left open to interpretation but being in contact with Veri, I asked him for a recommendation for its subject. Apparently, while Glide was oriinally composed for a fan adventure, the main motif features in a large and yet-unreleased track concerning Alt!Calliope. Veri ultimately decided that I should draw Alt!Calliope, which I was happy to, seeing as Calliope is my favourite character in Homestuck and in dire need of more fanart.
 
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song was originally written for FLSA's [[album:weird-puzzle-tunes|Problem Sleuth album]], however those of you who've heard the original may notice some subtle differences. This song is meant to be a theme for late-game PS, with the first half representing the over-the-top surrealism of Higgs Bonehead's sacrifice, and the second, the far more interesting rush to beat DMK. I pretty much spent the ages 10-12 listening to Daft Punk and Digitalism near-exclusively, and I think the influence shines through pretty clearly here. The second half is a slight nod to the rush of [[flash:5252|[S] Dirk: Unite]] and [[flash:5238|Synchronize]], which I feel is stylistically similar to the pacing from the end of PS.
 
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The futility of a sacrifice, the chaos of a final battle, the wrath of an arbiter, the finding of love after death, the absolute ownage of a sharply written missive. All these and more contributed to making the epic ending of Problem Sleuth what it came to be known as: a confusing clusterfuck of hilarious and completely insane shenanigans.
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@@ -977,7 +977,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Danger! High Voltage
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This was very much a test-bed for photoshop brushes and adjustment layers I had yet to touch on, all while putting the speed in speedpaint.
 
@@ -1016,7 +1016,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This started out as an attempt to make a song in the style of [[artist:death-grips|Death Grips]], but ended up going in a different direction. It was a challenge to try and make something equal parts creepy and danceable.
 
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     For the last couple of months my computer has been sitting on a small folding table as my house undergoes a bunch of scattered repairs, which made deploying my tablet a tricky situation. Thankfully I've been buying art markers piecemeal—they're very expensive in my country—and had enough colors to paint a troll! But when it came to a background I and my limited palette both failed miserably, so in the end I had to take the drawing to photoshop and figure things out with a mouse anyway. Whew!
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@@ -1046,7 +1046,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Some other facts about this song: Quite a bit of the instruments (I'd say about 80% or so) are modifications of default Garageband synths/presets. This is the first song I've ever made that regularly causes audio overloads on my computer from just playback. The name, "Pilotwave" comes from when it was going to be vaporwave, I named the project file that and it sort of stuck. Special thanks goes to everyone that listened to it and helped me with balance/mastering issues, and extra special thanks to AroSoup for their amazing art!
 
-    <i>AroSoup:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>AroSoup:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This took a really long time.
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@@ -1150,7 +1150,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I was listening to [[album:strife-2|STRIIFE]] right when it came out, then I thought, "Hey, this is fucking amazing" so I was inspired to make a [[artist:tensei|Tensei]]-esque song. Its success is still unclear, but I like it. I hope you enjoy.
 
-    <i>Griever:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Griever:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     So. Let me just say right now that [[artist:nights|nights]], the one who first thought up these fantrolls and drew them up for the [[album:strife-2|Strife 2]] album, is top tier at character design. These guys were all really fun to draw and I'm glad that they came out as well as they did, honestly. They're all very differentiable from other fantrolls and just look really nice. Read nights' comic, [[group:oceanfalls|Oceanfalls]], because it is good and has nice character design/art in it too.
 
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     "how do I make a future bass song without sounding generic or like a total douche?" you don't, youre a douche. Accept it and move on with life. The only saving grace this track has is the tempo. Most future bass is 130 or 144. Nah fam, we're going 150 on this since 150 and 175 are all I know. This track was exclusively made with harmor and maybe 1 serum. Fuck the system, and fuck my CPU since like [[exsanguinated]], FL crashes 3/4 of the times I try to open the tracks. RIP the dream.
 
-    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     is this what drugs look like? i hope this is what drugs look like.
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@@ -1272,7 +1272,7 @@ Lyrics: |-
     (It's easy, Jack! Just bring her with you! That's all I'm sayin')
     (Make her a member of the midnight crew)
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I was asking around for iconic rock album covers to base the art on since it was rather classic rock take on the midnight crew. Someone said Nirvana's Nevermind and I laughed and laughed and went with it
 
@@ -1307,7 +1307,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Anyways, I'm gay! Bye!
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This track has a climactic and solemn feel that, for me, seems to suggest the chillingly peaceful scenes preceding the violent turn of events in [[flash:8127|Act 7]]. As the quietest and yet most significant event in EoA6, I chose to depict the scene of PM and the Mayor climbing the Forge to cast the ring in, against the looming light of Skaia.
 
@@ -1379,7 +1379,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song was made, unsurprisingly, during one of the many Hiatuses that Homestuck had over the years. I wanted to capture the feeling of hopeful waiting combined with the sadness that came with the lack of content.
 
-    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The song was made during the gigapause, if the timestamp on soundcloud was right. So, I drew part of the scene where the gigapause left off aka [Terezi getting the shit kicked out of her](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6838).
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@@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Initially, I was going to compose this as one of those classic "ironically bad" songs, which I love dearly. At some point, it became clear I was going to drive it in a bit of a different direction, and then a few more directions, until I'd pretty much done a sick 360 degree spin across the musical canvas that is FL Studio. Wow that was kind of a weird metaphor? All in all, what you hear is what you get, and that's pretty much all I have to say on the matter. I don't want to take up too much of the commentary space, so I'll leave the rest of it to Nick and... uh, well, yeah.
 
-    <i>Nick Tucker:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nick Tucker:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I sketched out two versions of this art, the clean one and the "meme one", which was more popular. And that's pretty much entirely understandable. Also, the title bar is based off the spine of a PS1 game.
 
@@ -1688,7 +1688,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I'm a bit fuzzy where this song came from. I made this sometime in the summer of 2011, and I remember sending it to [[artist:alex-rosetti|Alex Rosetti]] as a token of my appreciation for his work shaping the musical palette of the Squiddles universe. The friend who got me into Homestuck (now Alex's partner and roommate) came up with the title. I think this was the last thing I made in Logic Pro before my ill-fated stint bumbling around in FL Studio for the latter portion of 2011. I love you Logic, I'm sorry I ever left.
 
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Honestly don't know what to say about this one. I tried very hard to do pixels.
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@@ -1711,7 +1711,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Spider8ite!!!!!!!!
 - Lotus
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Phil Gibson:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Phil Gibson:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Vriska is gr8 and thank goodness she saved all of space and time so we could hear this album
 
@@ -1733,7 +1733,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Roxy
 - Cats
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Trufflemeep:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The music reminded me of a disco party, so I tied that in with the name of the song and created the most fabulous fortune-telling session I was able to. It's OOC because Roxy knows that only nerds half-ass their wizard cosplays. In reality it would be a proper tunic, silk closure beard, and 230% more glowsticks.
 
@@ -1808,7 +1808,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I wrote this pretty soon after [the Openbound walkaround](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5263), and it was the first fansong I really felt amazingly proud of. Gotta love that sadstuck.
 
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I needed to draw something equally cute for this cute track. I made this almost exclusively with MS Paint save for the final effects on the art, which were done with SAI.
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@@ -1831,7 +1831,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Atomyk Ebonpyre
 - Derse Dreamers
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     For this piece my only goal was to express the same soft dreaminess of the song itself. And to draw Joey, of course. Where's she going to in this dream?
 
@@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Penumbra Phantasm
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Amethyst Barron:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Amethyst Barron:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     A space werewolf with reality warping powers would be terrifying and I wanted to reflect that. Also I really like drawing drooly sharp teeth.
 
@@ -1876,7 +1876,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Very slightly hints at [[track:penumbra-phantasm|Penumbral Phantasm]]. (thank you [[artist:lambda-elise-merryberry|Xzaz]] for reminding me what song that was!)
 
-    <i>Amethyst Barron:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://amethystbarron.tumblr.com/post/165345797882/track-art-i-contributed-for-the-song-grimbark-by))
+    <i>Amethyst Barron:</i> ([Tumblr](https://amethystbarron.tumblr.com/post/165345797882/track-art-i-contributed-for-the-song-grimbark-by))
 
     Track-art I contributed for the song “Grimbark” by Willow Ascenzo, on the recently released Homestuck fanalbum “Land of Fans and Music 4!″
 
@@ -1929,7 +1929,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     For extra fun, play this in sync with the original version of [[Requited]].
 
-    <i>Josefin B.:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Josefin B.:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     [[Requited]] has always been a song associated with the Leijons for me, and since I had trouble deciding which one to draw I went with all three. I figure they all had love stories central to their narrative, but not necessarily happy ones. The word "requited" can taste bitter, especially to Disciple, since her love certainly was requited... I added a red string to show that they're all connected, but also how tied they all are to this bitter word.
 
@@ -1951,7 +1951,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Gold Pilot
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>yazshu:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>yazshu:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Now, this art. It's something im proud of in a sense. Great background. Half-decent Becs. Too much going on, maybe, but i think it works well for the vast expanses of space. Space, however, does not have much in it. It might be a bit counterintuitive for that reason. Space is always really fun to draw though, so thats why i went a little bit overboard. Great song, too. Am very glad I did art for it. Yeah, thanks oj for making this fantastic remix.
 
@@ -2042,7 +2042,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <img src="media/misc/one-and-a-half-midnight-bonus.jpg" width="150" warning="blood, eye horror">
 
-    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     LET THEM FIGHT
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@@ -2069,7 +2069,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     For centuries, the bottom of the deepest seas had been shrouded in mystery and superstition. Some say it's a hostile place inhabited by the strangest creatures. Others, that it's a prison for the most dangerous outcasts. Legend has it that the only hope of ever getting out of there is a mask, that every deep sea creature has been craving for years. A mask they say, everyone is prepared to fight for, and risk their lives to possess. But the only way of ever finding out, is to go there and see for yourself.
 
-    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Look, I should never be allowed to draw Bionicles.
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@@ -2092,7 +2092,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     AKA The One Time I Sold Out to LOFAM, Ringleader is a Crowbar song I had a lot of fun throwing together. I tried incorporating aspects of jazz and rock solbos, in addition to experimenting with a 7/8 time signature. I'm pleasantly surprised at how it turned out, considering how obtuse the concept felt to me when I was first planning out the track. Blah blah blah check out [[group:canmt|cool and new webcomic]] please
 
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Crypt's songs are always a delight to listen to, I'm so happy I got the chance to do art for one of them. (Plus it's a Crowbar track! Objectively the best Felt member. This is fact not opinion.)
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@@ -2172,7 +2172,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Many thanks to all the amazing fan musicians who populated the sheet music thread back in the day. So many of those scores were invaluable to me. Also thanks to TheOtherN on musescore for their incredible transcription of [[track:watercolour-pendulum|Watercolour]], [[artist:alex-rosetti|Alex Rosetti]] for the [[Pondsquatter]] MIDI, [[artist:max-wright|Max Wright]] for Gods of the New World sheet music, [[artist:nate-tronerud|Nate Tronerud]] for the [[For Beforus]] sheet music, [[artist:tensei|Tensei]] for the [[Rouge on the Rox]] MIDI, [[artist:circlejourney|Circlejourney]] for the [[track:just1c3-r41ns-from-4bov3|JUST1C3]] MIDI, and [[artist:marcy-nabors|Marcy]] for her incredible melody notating skills.
 
-    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I think it makes a statement, and that statement is, "I've been playing too much Persona 5", or perhaps "I hate drawing musical isntruments"
 
@@ -2283,7 +2283,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - LoPaN
 - 'cw: alcohol'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I'm really happy with this piece! The music sets a uniquely nice atmosphere on LOPAN, which I hoped to capture in this art's composition and colors. (Also the glass is just water, I promise I don't condone underage drinking, please don't call the cops)
 
@@ -2312,7 +2312,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Also, this cryptic crypt song was partially based on [[Sburban Jungle]] and cryptically took inspiration from Sburb OST's [[track:outer-reaches|Outer Reaches]] cryptomnesially. The song does not have anything to do with cryptids. That's Quest Crypt.
 
-    <i>sweetjegus:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>sweetjegus:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The A6A5A1x2combo is -apart from being a mouthful- a very introspective breath after a wild, high-octane sequence. My early draft for this piece featured all four alpha kids on their respective devices, but it felt too engaged, too connected. I think this song is more reflective of solitude (the solitude that comes despite being in simultaneous chat conversations with two other people), and I hoped to convey that.
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@@ -2372,7 +2372,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - track:sunslammer
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>YoItsCro:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>YoItsCro:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This was quite an interesting piece to work on; I was trying to do something with perspective though you know, practice will eventually take someone far! Anyway, here's Jade. The green sun is in the corner because outside of paying mind to the spacey environment, it somewhat references her whole god tiering ordeal, which essentially meant the first guardian bonus pack.
 
@@ -2420,7 +2420,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track was made for the [[group:canmt|Cool and New Music Team's]] [[album:canwave|CANWAVE]], an album entirely of Homestuck vaporwave parodies. This song in particular is a vaporwave edit of [[Endless Climb]], hence the name. I tried to extend the vaporwave feel beyond just slowing the song down, splicing and editing the original song in interesting ways, adding 80's style instruments, and utilizing pitchbend and other distortion effects to provide an uneasy feel. The result is something that transcends meme status and enters "dream status," if you will. Actually that sounds kind of dumb. Forget I said that.
 
-    <i>SplitSuns:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>SplitSuns:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The track art is a parody of [the cover](https://web.archive.org/web/20160217082002/https://vektroid.bandcamp.com/album/shader-complete) of the vaporwave album ["Shader Complete"](https://vektroid.bandcamp.com/album/shader-complete) by Sacred Tapestry.
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@@ -2478,7 +2478,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I've learned to mix and match certain sections of a song to a better over composition. As for mixing, I had my music tutor (A semi-popular DJ) listen to the track and give their feedback. I then used this to make the overall song so much better.
 
-    <i>tempest2k:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>tempest2k:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     So this art is for Airtime Asasult, which was originally named Dave v John, which is a boring as heck name if you want my opinion. There was one slot left for art and when I saw this posted in announcements I decided to take it. I haven't drawn John or Dave as much as I have my favorite Homestuck gals, so getting things right was a bit difficult at first. I started work on this in June and as time went by and I got more done, I was getting better with my art style. If I had went and finished this in a day, I don't think it would've looked nearly as good as it does. The idea came from me thinking about how John and Dave would battle. I figured Dave would abuse time travel and John would be able to retcon around, making for an interplanetary fight between good buddies. The top drawings of John and Dave are intended to look silly, as it's not likely they're fighting over something serious. Anyway this was really fun to do and I hope you enjoy the rest of the album and junk!
 
@@ -2503,7 +2503,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track is a joke. It doesn't have a serious purpose. But it is, in fact, an 8-bit track I worked quite hard to make sound good. If you love 8-bit and [[artist:rj-lake|RJ]], then this is the track just for you!
 
-    <i>artist:kobacat:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>artist:kobacat:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     so i worked on this art way back in the beginning of the year just to see if i could contribute to the album and made a piece of art i'm pretty happy about, i don't really do art stuff so this was a first for me but im glad i could have worked on the album in some way still. it was pretty fun working on the art in general, coming up with the idea was pretty quick after i heard the song, but the hard part was trying to draw lil [[artist:rj-lake|rj]] for the art (with a trackpad, dont use trackpads), and after a few revisions i think i got it to a pretty close style to the original. anyway glad i could help work on the album, and hope you dudes all enjoy the rest of it
 
@@ -2587,7 +2587,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I really like Arquiussprite; he gets me at a fundamental level. He doesn't swear, he is super into technology, he loves horses, and is just all around a pure sprite; too bad Andrew BYBooted him into Lord English. why do that to a pure horse boy
 
-    <i>Griever:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Griever:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Jojo and Homestuck sure do have a lot of things in common, don't they? Themes of predestination, weird time shit, luck being used as a weapon, a guy without the use of his legs, horses everywhere in a certain part...it's all kind of weird and interesting. So that's why I did an EPIC JOJOKE for this trackart. If you don't understand what's going on here, read some more Jojo, I guess. Or don't. Look, Hors is a great, funny track, and this is the dank artistry it deserves as accompaniment. You're welcome.
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@@ -2685,7 +2685,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Homestuck has been a heck of an adventure, one that I had the privilege of watching firsthand for some number of years. I am honored to be able to pay a tribute to such a beautiful thing with my comparatively small contribution to this project. A million thanks to [[artist:andrew-hussie|Andrew Hussie]] and all the artists/musicians who put in so much work to make the comic into what it became. It truly was something really excellent.
 
-    <i>Rebecca Peason:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Rebecca Peason:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The End of Something Really Excellent brings a lot to mind. To the end of the story, to the end of the adventure, end of the game, the fighting, the dying, etc. Listening to it I thought of when The Beginning of Something Really Excellent [[flash:1026|played in comic]] and started there. The concepts jumped but in the end, I wanted something that speaks to the end of the harrowing journey playing this game was. What a relief it is that the fighting is over and for now can be left behind.
 
@@ -2745,7 +2745,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     this track has been in the works for a very, very long time (since 2014 i think?). feels good to finally get it out. the longest and most ambitious track i've ever made, telling the story of the cherub siblings in three movements. enjoy, love from jo psithurist, xoxox
 
-    <i>SmashCooper:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>SmashCooper:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I'm really glad I had the chance to draw track art for a cherub song since Caliborn is probably one of my favorite characters in Homestuck. I tried to fill this up with as many pieces of imagery of the cherub's journeys to god tier, all framed within a beautiful clock ready to be smashed with a crowbar. Side Note: Caliborn's gun was superbly hard to draw and now I can see why Hussie used a jpg image for it as often as he could.
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@@ -2769,7 +2769,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track almost didn't see the light of day. I submitted it for the [[group:canmt|Cool and New Music Team's]] credits music contest, and ended up pulling an admirable 3rd place. At first, the track wasn't going to be used in the credits mix (partially due to recieving 3rd place, but also because it fell short of the 7 minute length requirement), but, after a miracle on-par with the birth of Christ took place, Resend was just barely able to squeeze in due to a mandatory meme credits addition.
 
-    <i>yazshu:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>yazshu:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     originally this song was going to be replaced by [ocean man](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vcaPiiFZu2o), per my request. it wasn't. fuck you [[artist:bambosh|bambosh]]
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@@ -2838,7 +2838,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     🅱️
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This is a highly stylised representation of [[flash:8127|Act 7]], with Alt!Calliope creating the black hole that consumes the entire universe, and John reaching for the knob of the door into the new universe. They circle around Skaia, neither pulled into it nor escaping it, but trapped in the loop of its inscrutable machinations. This scene is set against an image of Paradox Space cracking at the edges, which also resembles a cracked disc: the final disc of Homestuck, shattering at the edges, foretelling of the destruction of the story itself.
 
@@ -2878,7 +2878,7 @@ Track Artwork:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Crystalmethequins
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>tti:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>tti:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     dont do drugs
 
@@ -2941,7 +2941,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This track was originally made for the Cool and New Music Team's ["Cool and New Homestuck"](https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLMXVVm-BDvr9G2C_sk0OSKpZuxGzsIAh-) project, remixing and parodying the various Homestuck Flashes. In case you can't tell, this song is a parody of [[Time on my Side]]. I mostly played it straight to the original song, changing the instrumentation and adding some twists of my own. Of course, there's some jokes thrown into the mix as well, such as the [[track:axel-f-crazy-frog|Crazy Frog]] theme song, [[Waters of Nazareth]], and other subtle additions. All in all, I hope you like this song! It's good enough for [[artist:tensei|Tensei]] to say "this is pretty good," so make of that what you will.
 
-    <i>Ephemerald:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Ephemerald:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     When I saw that Thyme on My Fries' art was still unclaimed, I knew what I had to do. This is the result - a love letter to the song and the Flash it's parodying.
 
@@ -3001,7 +3001,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     But in all seriousness, the wildly different sections of the song was more accidental and natural than anything else. I like to think parts of the song imply the introspection and humanity behind Dave and Dirk's cooldude persona, like the comic often demonstrates to us. And if not, at least we get a couple minutes of cool blues scale noodling.
 
-    <i>piskomil:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>piskomil:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Radness is a rad song so it needed a rad track art and what is more rad than alpha dave soaring through space on unreal air? but there's also a bit of playfulness to the song which is why I added those shitty statues of liberty. Imagine dave with pockets full of shitty statues of liberty just tossing them down on the planet as he flies by.
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@@ -3023,7 +3023,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     made for redditstuck. homestuck is bad
 
-    <i>yazshu:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>yazshu:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     since july 20th, 2016 i have made trackart for many variations of this song. i helped [[artist:cryptanark]] create [[track:conflict-question-mark|the very first mashup of this song]]. i have drawn the characters from a comic i dont even like that much more than my own. when i was sent the spreadsheet, and i saw it sitting on there, unclaimed, i knew i was the only man capable of doing this. thank you emelia k for creating my entire career.
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@@ -3047,7 +3047,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This was one of my first truly good songs, having distinct sections. Also included my first guitar solo. At the time of creation, I was playing VVVVVV, and is now one of my favorite games of all time (the music being especially good). I hope y'all enjoy.
 
-    <i>Mags:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Mags:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The pairing of aggressive electric guitar and elegant violin immediately made me think of the similarly aggressive-but-elegant PM, and the snazzy chip tune flair inspired the pixelated art style.
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@@ -3103,7 +3103,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song started out as a test to see if I could replicate that bassy blare from every major action film trailer from the past six or so years. Then, it evolved into a [[Rhapsody in Green]] cover, and the rest is history. While making this I had the image of the Midnight Crew's casino burning down as Spades struggles to escape, then I re-thought it over with Lord English's arrival into Jack's body, then Jake's battle against the leprechauns, until I eventually decided, "as long as it's Felt-themed, this song is about it". There are a few references to Felt-based songs in here, too. The aforementioned Rhapsody in Green, the eerie variation of [[English]] from early on in [[Carne Vale]], the opening from [[Afraid of the Darko]] (although quite drastically rewritten for a cinematic vibe) and a hopeful piano reprise of Carne Vale as a reflection of the first defeat Jake had left the Felt with. Then it concludes with the tail-end of English, because the Felt never truly stay down.
 
-    <i>sonotcanon:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>sonotcanon:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     snowman a la mal from inception. credit to [[artist:grace-medley|power]] for the concept!
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@@ -3150,7 +3150,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song was inspired by the cosmogonical aspects of the MSPA universe(s), and by those universes' cryptic curators.
 
-    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Selan Pike:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     GPI: Fondly regard Selan spending too much time fiddling with the background
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@@ -3217,7 +3217,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I think I'm more or less satisfied with the end result, even though it hardly resembles jungle (as a music genre, not, you know, [[Sburban Jungle]] or anything). Anyway, I hope you like it.
 
-    <i>Andiavang:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Andiavang:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     "Boom boom boom boom<br>
     I want you in my room<br>
@@ -3248,7 +3248,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This was my first foray into dubstep, and looking back on it, I could have done a lot better. I wrote this as a sort of mock-up "flash soundtrack", hitting a lot of different styles at different points in the song. At the time, though, I was experimenting with a lot of different things, and it's actually pretty good for what it was. This was also my entrance into sampling, which helped me get the experience needed to start writing newer, fresher material, by listening to other peoples' far better material.
 
-    <i>AS:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>AS:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     [Typheus may not be pretty to look at, but he is not a bad guy at all!](https://www.homestuck.com/story/3953)
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@@ -3280,7 +3280,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     A lot of people helped me to get this song into the state that it's in now, and I'd like to take this opportunity to thank them. Thanks to [[artist:viko-rifeo]] and [[artist:kusoro]], who both had some really great ideas on mastering and percussion that ultimately didn't make it into the final song; to [[artist:wheals]] for giving it a final name, and ESPECIALLY to [[artist:seijen]], whose mastering made the final product much better than I could have ever thought. And of course many, many, many thanks to [[artist:circlejourney]], whose art is indescribably fitting and amazing. Finally I'd like to thank the LOFAM team for all their help and support, y'all are a bunch of great people and its been an honor to have this opportunity
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The track is clearly about the Ultimate Alchemy, which I also find it very evocative of. I took that prompt on as faithfully as I could.
 
@@ -3346,7 +3346,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The song was made with a particular narrative in mind, with each section of the song signifying another step in the juju's journey. [Crowbar leads the Felt on Alternia, crowbar in hand.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1273) [Slick steals the crowbar](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1275) and [opens the Felt vault,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1322) [distorting spacetime.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1337) [Kurloz finds the crowbar in a memory and hands it to Gamzee.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5308) [The meteor reaches B2,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6278) and [the crowbar is given to B2 Jack Noir.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5804) [He destroys his prison,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5816) [then fights some kids and himself on top of a building.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/8036) [He and the crowbar are sucked into a black hole.](https://youtu.be/Y5wYN6rB_Rg?t=948) [The juju is thus brought to a dead Earth.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5441) [Gamzee again hands the crowbar to his lord, Caliborn.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5492) [With the crowbar in his possession,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5495) Caliborn trudges through his Sburb session, planet by planet. [He builds an ensemble of loyal leprechaun people,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6192) [including Crowbar himself.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6022) Finally, the crowbar is given back to Crowbar, [who will later lead the Felt on Alternia.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1273) With so many diverging timelines in the intermission alone, we are left to guess whether the cycle will repeat again, or be cut off.
 
-    <i>Griever:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Griever:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     You know, the great thing about Homestuck is that a lot of panels are so iconic that Hussie more or less traces over them to make a new panel, and it still looks great, and people love him for it. And this self-referential quality extends to fanworks, to. Makes my job easier.
 
@@ -3386,7 +3386,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Dirk
 - LoTaK
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Another very nice track for the Alpha kids' medium, this time for LOTAK. Unlike my other art pieces on LoFaM, I used SAI for this instead of the usual MS Paint. It's a nice change of pace to be working with another art program.
 
@@ -3420,11 +3420,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     It always struck me how different alt!Calliope was from her friendly, happy-go-lucky counterpart—she almost seemed like a different character. Alt!Calliope had given up on ever feeling happy or fulfilled. She only had a single solitary purpose left to her: to die. I wrote this song as a melancholy elegy for a lost soul.
 
-    <i>Quietserval:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Quietserval:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     A representation of alternate Calliope's journey to achieve her ultimate goal.
 
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I love dealing with dark foreground figures against bright backgrounds, so this was fun to add the final touches to. I got a sense of what Quietserval was going for with this drawing from talking to them, and tried to realise that in its fullest.
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@@ -3452,7 +3452,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Dream bubbles allow the various players of Sburb a chance at an Everlasting life. I wanted to illustrate the feeling of traversing these bubbles and exploring the infinite possibilities they create.
 
-    <i>PatManDX:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>PatManDX:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     When I hear the song, it's a no brainer that it was about Roxy in the dreambubbles, being a remix of [['Even in Death']] and all. What was tricky was figuring out what exactly to show in the track art: what angle, what aspect of the dreambubbles, and so on. I didn't want to make the art too busy, so I went for a simpler piece that showcased one of the grander moments of the [[flash:4486|'Roxy: Sleepwalk']] flash—where the music swells as Roxy falls into that dream bubble. Pinks and purples were used cause they pop on the black, and they're nice mysterious colors.
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@@ -3471,7 +3471,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Corridors of Time
 - Crystalanthemums
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I was just trying to capture Aradia to the sweet tunes of the song!
 
@@ -3509,7 +3509,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Courser
 - Black Hole / Green Sun
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Circlejourney:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This track was reassigned to me after the original artist dropped out. I decided to further extend the image formed of [[Crystalendofgames']] and [[track:ultimate-alchemy|Ultimate Alchemy's]] track illustrations after several people expressed assent when I aired the idea on the LoFaM server.
 
@@ -3613,7 +3613,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song didn't actually start out as a Homestuck song when I was first making it. It went from tune stuck in my head, then into a random song that I was calling Metallic Mayhem, then into Flare, then into a practice in motifs, then into what is now apparently my most popular by far!
 
-    <i>Scarodactyl:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Scarodactyl:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I have wanted to do something like this for a long time. Final Fantasy 6 is a big inspiration for me, particularly the in-battle sprites and backgrounds. Homestuck, with its numerous great designs, seemed like it would be really fun to render in this style. When I saw Strife Mayhem on the song list I knew what I had to do--a large-scale battle with lots of characters to match an amazing battle song with lots of leitmotifs. I pulled a few elements from my previous track arts which were sort of stabs in the same direction, particularly the background from [[track:medium-lofam3|Medium]] and the handmaid from [[Maidswap]]. The GUI is also a bit of a reference to [[track:strife-mayhem|the previous track art]] for this song on Cool and New Volume 7.
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@@ -3684,7 +3684,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     If some of you thought this was [[le canrival]] from Cool and New Webcomic's V8LUME, then you'd be right! I initially made le canrival as a Cool and New Webcomic track, but the folks over on the Land of Fans and Music team took some interest in it. So, we arranged to have it put on the next LOFAM, under a new, more classy name.
 
-    <i>0ysTezy:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>0ysTezy:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     this track art you see right here took over two months of work as we needed to space out time for other projects as well. the setting takes place in the land of tents and mirth as shown. The experience of creating this project was sorta stressful but fun. it was mostly stressful for me since I had many other things I needed to work on. EllenZarael worked with me over the course of the drawing.
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@@ -3733,7 +3733,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Ok, here's another fun fact then. The title of the song is a play on the FreshJamz player which has the fruits on its interface, the Homestuck song [[Hauntjam|"Hauntjam"]], actual fruit jam, and the fact that it is a song (i.e. "jam") about fruits. Neat!
 
-    <i>sweetjegus:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>sweetjegus:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Open your heart to the fruity embrace of Apple Girlington! I have the fondest memories of Jade's fruit mishaps back in Act 3 and a soft spot for fun and twangy tracks, so Fruitjam was the perfect storm. Her outfit is drawn from cubewatermelon's [absolutely adorable Apple Girlington design](https://fwugradiation.tumblr.com/post/33361755348/cubewatermelon-happy-birthday-to-toby-radiation), and I've kept to the Touhou art tradition of contorted angles within a dramatic flying object vortex - but updated, now, for a lurid fever dream ft. the chlorine-headed personification of an apple.
 
@@ -3785,7 +3785,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This piece was originally [[track:rozepiano|for CaNMT]], although it was still about the character Rose Lalonde. Perhaps you're wondering why someone would release a track on CaNMT, before putting it on LoFaM, but that was due to my joining LoFaM after this song was published. I worked on this song for nearly 2 months, so the production was a pretty complicated process - but at least I could finish it. It doesn't matter how long it took, what matters is that it's done. Originally, using pianos wasn't a part of my plan - the step before it was to use violins and Pavellion strings, because violin is Rose's instrument. But I couldn't pull it off so I switched to extremely romantic pianos midway through production. However, if I did take the pianos off I feel this track would've suffered a lot of pain, barring its size. In the end there really wasn't much that survived of my original image of this track, but I'm still happy with what I ended up with. Lightfall was my first song published anywhere, so you could say this is a big song for me.
 
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I envisioned the scene of Rose playing on LOLAR for this art as well as the song. I can't count how many times I redrew this piece before finally getting it to look good, since I'm only a beginner at drawing scenery. I'm glad it turned out nicely in the end though. Also I gotta say, doing art for your own songs is kind of weird. :p
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@@ -3810,7 +3810,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The base idea for this song's groove came about in late 2011 when I noticed the repeated piano riff was just an E-flat blues scale [[artist:toby-fox|Radiation]] messed with, and I started laying it over a Latin-style chord rhythm and liked what I heard. I thought to myself, "this must be what it sounds like when the Midnight Crew just jams", and before I knew it I had a remix idea in my head. Something I've always loved about the original mix I did, poorly executed as it was, was how it took an idea we know to be so dark within the Homestuck universe and turned it into a light, relaxing, foot-tapping piece, something the Crew might have done in happier times.
 
-    <i>Daniel McDonald:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Daniel McDonald:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     It's been long enough since I made this image that I don't have much that I can remember to say about this, beyond feeling like I really nailed Boxcars' face.
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@@ -3834,7 +3834,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This song was originally made for the [[group:canmt|Cool and New Music Team]], but I went with a much more Homestuck slant than a cool and new one for this track. I wanted to take [[track:upward-movement-dave-owns|Upward Movement]] and change it into something more EDM and techno, so I chopped and screwed traditional strings and mixed them with the powerful drum tracks and synths you hear in the song. I wanted to include motifs from both Dave and Nepeta as they're two halves of Davepeta's whole. I also incorporated caws and meows for the same effect. Finally, I put the Undertale track [[CORE]] in the song because of that one scene in [[flash:8087|EOA6]] ([you know the one.](https://youtu.be/Y5wYN6rB_Rg?t=670)&#8288;) There's an additional reference at that point if you're listening carefully! Although this song was challenging to make, I think it turned out very well in the end.
 
-    <i>Shadok:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Shadok:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     this used to be [[track:collision-course-davepetas-movement|a normal edit]] of [[track:upward-movement-dave-owns|the Upward Movement cover]] but [[album:greatest-hits-2|greatest hits 2]] happened on the cool and new music team so i decided [[track:collision-course-davepetas-movement-greatest-hits-2|to redo it]]. i experimented a lot with the shading but in the end, i kept something simple
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@@ -3862,7 +3862,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This art was made in like five hours on Christmas 2016 when i yelled at nights to make some John/Aradia art for Revisit/Rewind (it being based off [[Ascend]], with its iconic John/Aradia art). That's basically the plot of The Christmas Carol and by writing this seven months later I'm now the Ghost of Christmas Future. I'll let Past Nights (the Ghost of Christmas Past) fill you in on the rest:
 
-    <i>Nights:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Nights:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     <img src="media/misc/nights-revisit-rewind-1.png" width="268" height="93" pixelate inline alt="Four Discord messages from nights: im doing the background / the bg is just / a giant dick / ok"><br>
     <img src="media/misc/nights-revisit-rewind-2.png" width="289" height="47" pixelate inline alt="Two messages: john and aradia are too lewd / theyre touching hands"><br>
@@ -3921,7 +3921,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Homestuck Sonata was written around the time we were submitting pieces for [[album:homestuck-vol-10|Volume 10]]. The idea was to write a piece that loosely followed the sonata form with [[Homestuck Anthem]] being the first main theme and [[Penumbra Phantasm]] (via [[FantasyP]]) being the second. It's also intended as a left hand practice piece so the left hand is much busier than in most of my other work!
 
-    <i>Sozzay:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Sozzay:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This idea came to me after scrapping a few rought drafts. Originally I planned for an artwork starring an original hero, but decided to change it to something involving John because his associated instrument is a piano. It was a difficult piece to draw, but I am very happy with the finished result and feel I created something really dynamic.
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@@ -3943,7 +3943,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - White King
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>PatManDX:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>PatManDX:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     [[artist:rnd|RND]] and I used to collaborate on projects years ago so we've become very familiar with the other's work. When I first heard this track, back about 3 years ago, I knew I had to do the art for it. The song felt very grand and frenetic, while giving a sense of regality and awe, so I did my best to capture those feelings into the track art. I knew that I had to put in the White King as the main focus on the picture, since the song is a remix to [[track:white-king|a certain other song]]. There is a great emphasis on texture and desaturated colors, to help make the piece feel almost like a worn tapestry. I added a bloom filter to add to this effect.
 
@@ -3991,7 +3991,7 @@ Lyrics: >-
     (I will rise, I will go so far and)
     Even in my death
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Sam Garcia:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Sam Garcia:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This song is about the beta kids so i drew them like if they were in a cd/disc. I did it like that because the transitions between different moments of the song reminded me of a movie or song playing. So basically i drew this how i thought a cd for homestuck would kind of look like.