never place online commentary above booklet commentary

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     Some trivia: this song was named after an update discussion thread on the old MSPA forums. Apparently, that thread was in turn named after [a TVTropes page](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Retconjuration). Also, alongside a [[Homestuck Anthem]] quote at the end, the music box refrain featured throughout the song quotes [[track:windchime-foley|the foley]] on [[flash:82|Homestuck's title page]]. That's both because it's where the retcon arms first appear, and because I always wanted to reference those windchimes. Now you know!
 
+    <i>William Leonard:</i> (booklet commentary)
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+    I've always loved the 'John's retocn adventures' section of Homestuck, and I think it has to do with how it leads both the characters and myself along a brisk rollercoaster of twists and turns, through unknown paths - this sense of adventure is what I tried to convey in this art.
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     <i>keyboard cait:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/ndividedbyzero/retconjuration), excerpt, 10/26/2016)
 
     "[The Treasure] is an obvious symbol of our desire to see more transparency from the Obama administration." -Andrew Hussie
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     [...]
 
     "post-retcon" ver. might need a little mixing work still
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-    <i>William Leonard:</i> (booklet commentary)
-
-    I've always loved the 'John's retocn adventures' section of Homestuck, and I think it has to do with how it leads both the characters and myself along a brisk rollercoaster of twists and turns, through unknown paths - this sense of adventure is what I tried to convey in this art.
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 Track: Formation
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     The song was made with a particular narrative in mind, with each section of the song signifying another step in the juju's journey. [Crowbar leads the Felt on Alternia, crowbar in hand.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1273) [Slick steals the crowbar](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1275) and [opens the Felt vault,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1322) [distorting spacetime.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1337) [Kurloz finds the crowbar in a memory and hands it to Gamzee.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5308) [The meteor reaches B2,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6278) and [the crowbar is given to B2 Jack Noir.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5804) [He destroys his prison,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5816) [then fights some kids and himself on top of a building.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/8036) [He and the crowbar are sucked into a black hole.](https://youtu.be/Y5wYN6rB_Rg?t=948) [The juju is thus brought to a dead Earth.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5441) [Gamzee again hands the crowbar to his lord, Caliborn.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5492) [With the crowbar in his possession,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/5495) Caliborn trudges through his Sburb session, planet by planet. [He builds an ensemble of loyal leprechaun people,](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6192) [including Crowbar himself.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/6022) Finally, the crowbar is given back to Crowbar, [who will later lead the Felt on Alternia.](https://www.homestuck.com/story/1273) With so many diverging timelines in the intermission alone, we are left to guess whether the cycle will repeat again, or be cut off.
 
-    <i>keyboard cait:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/ndividedbyzero/juju-breaker), excerpt, 2/8/2016)
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-    a tune dedicated to crowbar and the multi-universal journey of his crowbar.
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     <i>Griever:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     You know, the great thing about Homestuck is that a lot of panels are so iconic that Hussie more or less traces over them to make a new panel, and it still looks great, and people love him for it. And this self-referential quality extends to fanworks, to. Makes my job easier.
 
     Oh right, on another note, Crowbar's pretty sweet, I guess. Enjoy.
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+    <i>keyboard cait:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/ndividedbyzero/juju-breaker), excerpt, 2/8/2016)
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+    a tune dedicated to crowbar and the multi-universal journey of his crowbar.
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 Track: Tragic Heights
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