lilith nov 2 general review + changelog

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     My interest in doing Homestuck fanart has waned over the past few months, but I will always have a soft spot for the exiles no matter what. So it is only natural that I do goofy exile art for an [[Explore]] arrangement! Even though I was seriously burned out on art in general when I did this, I think it turned out okay. Goofy, happy exiles always turn out okay!
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 Track: Ohgodboss
+Additional Names:
+- OhGodWhat Boss Battle Remix (working name)
 Artists:
 - Kevin Grant
 Duration: '3:20'
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     I actually did two pieces of potential art for this, both featuring Dave and Jade fighting Bec Noir, since it seemed appropriate for an intense boss tune featuring a theme associated with Jade. There was a duller version of this as well as a more comic bookish one. A panel of friends agreed that this one read better, but it was a little flat, so I started brightening it and tweaking it, but still wanted to convey '8-bit', so I started playing around with a square brush throwing in this Darwina-esque square noise, which I thought looked pretty cool. It has been remarked that Jade firing an assault rifle in the air in front of a volcano is metal as shit. That's probably my favourite commentary on the image.)
 
-    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (WIP track art, and alternate track art, [Tumblr](https://faisdm.tumblr.com/post/52294281017/track-art-for-ohgodwhat-boss-battle-remix-by), 6/6/2013)
+    <i>Kate Holden:</i> ([Tumblr](https://faisdm.tumblr.com/post/52294281017/track-art-for-ohgodwhat-boss-battle-remix-by), 6/6/2013)
 
     Track Art for 'OhGodWhat Boss Battle Remix' by [[artist:kevin-grant|UWBW]] for Land of Fans and Music 3 (coming soon, I hope!!). Originally I drew this all with hard pixel edges:
 
     <img src="media/misc/ohgodboss-wip.png" width="350">
 
-    ...but it wasn't really 'working'. It looked a little flat and also a bit blobby up close (something I didn't like about my artwork for [[track:amongst-smiling-faces|'Amongst Smiling Faces']] on [[album:sburb-ost|SburbOST]]), which would have taken a fair bit of fiddling close up to fix. So I got out some smooth brushes and smoothed up a lot of the lines and added some glowy effects to soften things and bump the contrast. That looked nicer, but then I felt the link to the chiptune feel of the piece of music was lost. I decided to do something Darwinia-esque, got out a square brush and threw in a lot of square noise.
+    ...but it wasn't really 'working'. It looked a little flat and also a bit blobby up close (something I didn't like about my artwork for [[track:amongst-smiling-faces|'Amongst Smiling Faces']] on SburbOST), which would have taken a fair bit of fiddling close up to fix. So I got out some smooth brushes and smoothed up a lot of the lines and added some glowy effects to soften things and bump the contrast. That looked nicer, but then I felt the link to the chiptune feel of the piece of music was lost. I decided to do something Darwinia-esque, got out a square brush and threw in a lot of square noise.
 
     While I was feeling dissatsfied with the above image, before making those changes, I actually did a whole other piece of alternative track art though!