drop "track artist" commentary annotations

1 files changed, 39 insertions, 39 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam3.yaml b/album/lofam3.yaml
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--- a/album/lofam3.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam3.yaml
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Calliope
 - Lord English
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I want so very badly to draw cherubs, Lord English chasing down poor Calliope.
 
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I wrote this song as an art exchange for redux on the forums who wanted more [[Sunsetter|sunsetter]] remixes.
 
-    <i>awakesleeping:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>awakesleeping:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     When I first saw the track's name on it's own I thought of Caliborn's planet quest, but I thought this song was too upbeat for that, so I went with a Derse and Prospit's moons exploding and the Alphas reaching godtier. I really enjoyed drawing Jake and Jane's face. Drawing Derse and Prospit was quite the challenge but I hope I managed something recognizable! I tried to include some pixely elements and most of the godtier update (unfortunately I couldn't find a place for Jake's crotch but hey we all know why he's so shocked).
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@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Of course, this track being so old, I'd long since deleted the original FL Studio project file during spring cleaning, so I didn't have access to any of the MIDI data (the same thing happened with [[Sign of the Scorpion]]). I couldn't even properly remaster the song since I no longer had a lossless source. That's why I made a brand-new arrangement of the piece for LOFAM 3 that captures the piece's ouriginal beauty and romantic feel while only adding to its richness and elegance. Both [[Dance of Thorns]] and [[Endless Climb]] are hinted at in the composition, and while there aren't any quotes from [[album:alterniabound|Alternia/Bound]], the stately elegance of the piece is meant to recall Kanaya.
 
-    <i>rosesarecrimson:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>rosesarecrimson:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This was a piece where I had the concept from day one. I knew that the piece ought to be ballet-inspired, given the prompt. Grimdark Rose and Kanpire were aesthetic choices - I wanted their duet to be balanced, with neither one taking the background role, and the duality suited the theme nicely.
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@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Warweary Villein is a song about my personal favorite character. Inspired by Toby Fox's [['Mayor Maynot']] it is about how such a little dude can be such an inspiration for a massive call to arms. My favorite part about the piece is the harmonies. The song was also revamped for the LoFaM3 album and completely remade from the ground up. Hope you enjoy!
 
-    <i>piskomil:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>piskomil:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     He's on a walk with his citizen-cans. They're having a lot of fun if you couldn't tell.
 
@@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     [[Sburban Jungle]] has been stuck in my head since the moment I first heard it in Homestuck, and the rest of [[artist:michael-guy-bowman|Michael Guy Bowman's]] work is equally memorable. For this piece, I chose to mix Sburban Jungle with [[69423]] from his album [[album:comfortable-bugs]]. As for the title, well, I'm thinking of a number [[track:bowmans-credit-score|between 450 and 850]]...
 
-    <i>sayachan-art:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>sayachan-art:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This music gave me a ton of inspiration for the track art but I ahd to draw a lot of different things and concepts before I actually came down to what I really wanted. For starters, [[Sburban Jungle]] has always been the music that kick started the game for the kids. For a beautiful track like this I felt the need to be a bit more abstract, so as the kids rise up, they bleed this colourful and glitchy glitter and the image itself follows the sequence of the Zodiac Signs (Trolls amde the kids), Green Spirograph (Beta Kids session) and the game reset which amde the Sburb logo red (Alpha kids session).
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@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     also sousa is the best
 
-    <i>rosesarecrimson:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>rosesarecrimson:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I knew from the minute I read it that I wanted it to look something like a Russian propaganda poster. The toughest thing about this was the over composition. Turns out it's reallllllly hard to get a rectangular composition to translate to a square.
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@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     This is intended as a walkabout track.<br>
     No guitars this time.
 
-    <i>awakesleeping:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>awakesleeping:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This piece has a bit of back story that I made up and I suppose I might've been more than a little self-indulgent here with my otp, but it's what the song made me think of. So the idea is that Dirk and Jake are adventuring together on lomax with Sawtooth and Squarewave (who are providing the hip hop backdrop). I imagine Dirk would be very controlling during tomb raids and such, taking the leader role, or at least being manipulative in some way. I think this would really make Jake feel uncomfortable and.... (wait for it) uncertain about his feelings towards Dirk. I think the songs vibe really matches this as well with the cool electronic instrumentation (Dirk) and the walk around looping anxiousness of it (Jack and his adventuring).
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@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Excluding the actual production, the subject and title of the song, "Medium", really stood out to me while I was making it. The Medium holds all of the planets, all of the life, and all of the excitment of S___b. Actually, it holds everything that there is about the game. So, I wanted to make the song sound vast, but I also wanted it to be a bit more personal. Maybe "vastness of the mind" could be a good description. All in all, I'm satisfied with the song, and I hope whoever hears it will be as well.
 
-    <i>Scarodactyl:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Scarodactyl:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I really enjoyed working on this one. Trying to get the entirety of The Medium into the canvas in a coherent way was an interesting challenge.
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@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Snowman
 - Alternia
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I imagined this song would fit Snowman perfectly, so I tried to squish dramatic moonlight and her into the same square and this is the end result.
 
@@ -801,7 +801,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO HAA HAA HEE HEE HOO HOO
 
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I originally drew this on a post it note, and it kept reappearing in weird places and scaring me. It was a sign I had to paint this, I think.
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@@ -943,7 +943,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Sign of the Scorpion is an old track of mine, about maybe 14 or 15 months old, and while I'm legitimately proud of a lot of compositional elements, the mastering and production horrified me looking back on it. Like [[Dance of Viridian and Violet]], I'd long since deleted the project file, since it was just a one-off Homestuck song that I figured I was unlikely to ever need again, so I made a new arrangement of the piece from scratch, taking elements I liked from the original and putting them in a new context. It doesn't quote any Homestuck themes (I don't believe the original did at all), except for a brief mention of [[Spider's Claw]] right at the end. The new arrangement has a bit more of a hard-rock feel and toned-down orchestral elements, making it a bit more reflective of Vriska as a character.
 
-    <i>Ducky Senpai:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Ducky Senpai:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I did a track art for [[track:finale-strife|one of Ascenzo's songs]] back in [[album:lofam2|LOFAM2]] as well and also the art for [[Rust Apocalypse]]. So, when I saw two songs by them on the available songs for track art, I couldn't really help myself. Their songs are great. I know you like it, I can tell. Hope the track art seems suitable, and that you'll enjoy that as well. I have nothing else to say on the matter. That's it.
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@@ -974,7 +974,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <small>a pumpkin is a type of gourd that is the pun</small>
 
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I loved the sound of this song but had a hard time figuring out what to draw for it, but whenever in doubt draw a sad Roxy inside a pumpkin.
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@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This is a song for Aranea Serket. I originally set out to make this piece for a Hero of Light, mainly for Rose at the conception of the piece, but as I got further into making it, it became clear it was not a "Rose" song. Although I think this song goes off on too many tangents (not sticking to a particular melody or motif throughout the song) I find it suiting for Aranea due to her tendency to jabber away at any chance she gets, often changing the subject multiple times. Or maybe I just made that up now to make it seem like I did it on purpose...The world may never know. I have also been thinking about making a sort of "sequel" set of songs to this one for Vriska and Rose. They would be called "Fortune Stealer" and "Fortune Teller" respectively.
 
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Aranea.
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@@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Early last year, I had developed a Rose album.  Now, it's kind of split into two things: an independent concept album that'll be released sometime early this year and this.  Stitching two tracks from the ex-Rose album together + one track I finished yesterday (and streamed at one point), I created The Metamorphosis, divided into three parts: Treading the Line, Harbinger of the Outer Gods, and The Solar Ascendancy.  Together it lasts about 10 minutes, but this post will just be a preview since there is a chance this might find a place with a future album.
 
-    <i>Racheme:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Racheme:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This beautiful track and it's title is very direct that this is about Rose and how far she has come since Act 1 so I just drew what it told me, I hope it is okay ;;
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@@ -1078,7 +1078,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <i>GameBro and GameGrl work the crowd at the Slam Jam, with a little help from QCD.</i>
 
-    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This is simultaneously the best and stupidest thing I have ever created. Thank goodness for the 90's.
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@@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     A 'quick' fact, I had planned to continue the [[track:killed-by-br8k-spider|Killed By 8r8k Spider]] section through over the top of the [[Unite Synchronization]] ostinato, but when I played back the section after the high G, stacatto F into the ostinato, I felt a powerful urge to just get straight back into the final version of Eden, which was written on whim straight into that 4/4 pattern and more fluidly in B minor. It feels like a new life has been breathed into Eden because of it, and I'm so happy to be the man to have done it!
 
-    <i>azuzatori:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>azuzatori:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     scoot did piano<br>
     i drew piano
@@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Many of my recompositions tend to be experiments with lemotiffs, and Electric Fireflies is no exception. While largely focused around the light flicks of piano melody within [[Firefly Cloud]] and the song itself by [[artist:erik-scheele|Erik "Jit" Scheele]], I found my experiment to take a course of it's own. I tried to follow Jit's carefully integrated elements of [[Doctor]] to discover that his method employed a much more flowing and intertwined realization of instrumental melody; this was something I felt that I did not achieve. I felt refreshing to observe what can only be described as mastery of melody, theme and atmosphere. It was a pleasure to make this piece.
 
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Sketched and colored in Paint Tool Sai and color adjusted in Photoshop.
 
@@ -1387,7 +1387,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     The Blast is a song written from Aradia's perspective regarding the 'sollux killing her hyped up on Mind Honey' incident. It is about her about to blow up about telling everyone that it is 0kay. The song was written mostly as a 'Can I write a simple and effective only 4 chords song' and I think it was successful. The song was revamped for the LoFaM3 album and completely remade from the ground up. Hope you enjoy!
 
-    <i>RaChoTamer:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>RaChoTamer:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Oh man. "The Blast". I really love this song. Seriously, Snortrax is a very lovely musician. Go listen to his other stuff after you listen to this album!
 
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Me jumping the gun on making a land theme for Dirk. Had put it forward for [[album:homestuck-vol-9|Vol. 9]] as just a track about him but didn't make the cut. Held onto it for a while hoping I could find some way to make it better, but it's aging on me.
 
-    <i>inimitable-nectar:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>inimitable-nectar:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I listened to the song on loop while I was drawing. I think it ended up being about 36 plays long.
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@@ -1469,7 +1469,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I made this shortly after LOTAK was first revealed, and I wanted to capture the pressure and paradoxical claustrophobia of that huge space blanketed by a heavy, inert atmosphere. I started with the drums, which were just an attempt to create a kit from scratch that I didn't entirely hate, plus a ton of reverb. Next came the atmospheric elements - the distorted tremolo synth, the piano, the echoing synth bleeps which to me are a signal intended to guide the player, decayed over the aeons the planet has waited for Dirk's arrival, and the nearly-metronomic hat-click to reinforce the sense that, now that he's here, his limited time is rapidly ticking away. Finally I tried a few string melodies for the middle section, but simply nothing says 'towering ancient remains of a lost civilization' as effectively as [[artist:erik-scheele|Erik Scheele's]] [[track:ruins|Ruins]], so I stole it and added a sort of contrapuntal harmony underneath. And now I give it to you.
 
-    <i>fueledbyanimation:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>fueledbyanimation:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I was beyond excited to get to be part of another fan album, especially to be drawing for a song connected to Dirk's planet, since he's one of my absolute favorite characters. Every kid/troll's planet reflects them and also challenges them at the same time. LOTAK is one of the more dangerous planets, with its constant raging lightning storms and the most powerful denizen at it's center, fitting for Dirk who is a determined, skilled fighter. The planet is also a contrast, a planet full of tall buildings for someone who grew up in an ocean surrounded by nothing. I really wanted to show LOTAK as an extension, or part of, Dirk himself. The song itself gives a sense of floating, or as the music artist said themselves, a very spacey feeling, so I tried to capture this as well, with the overview shot of the planet that Dirk appears to be floating over. I hope that others who look at my piece will feel I managed to picture the song well in my drawing for it.
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@@ -1494,7 +1494,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I wrote Contention as a strife theme for Dirk Strider. It's synthesized entirely with FM patches ripped from a ROM of Sonic The Hedgehog 2 and converted to FM8 format, in keeping with the Sega Genesis inspired style of Dirk-related songs like [[track:anbroids-v2|Anbroids]]. The rhythms in this song were largely inspired by the drums in the song ["Tung, The Icelandic Lesbian"](https://lapfox.bandcamp.com/track/tung-the-icelandic-lesbian) by Kitsune^2. I've always been a big fan of heavy 6/8 two-against-three rhythms played with Sonic-style drums, so the choice of time signature for this track was a no-brainer.
 
-    <i>Cadalyst:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Cadalyst:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Here we see Dirk, the Prince of Heart, preparing to clash with the Imperial Drones sent by HIC to dispose of him. His loyal and steadfast retainer, Sawtooth, seeks to thin the enemy ranks while Dirk meets the opposing force head on. A fierce and devastating battle ensues, yet the Prince prevails. For now...
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@@ -1515,7 +1515,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Three in the Morning
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Snowman and Spades Slick.
 
@@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <big><p style="font-family:'Comic Sans', 'Comic Sans MS', cursive">BWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEeeeeeeeeeflareee<b>eeeee eeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEE EEeEEEEEeeeeEEEEEeee</b></p></big>
 
-    <i>Veritas Unae:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Veritas Unae:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     <p style="font-family:'Comic Sans', 'Comic Sans MS', cursive">"i don't usually make art<br>
 
@@ -1583,7 +1583,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Although [[track:MeGaLoVania|MeGaLoVania]] is an awesome track for [[flash:3297|[S] Wake]], I felt that it didn't really tell the story of how Aradia arose, and eventually faced Jack and vanished through his frame into the realm of the Green Sun. And with my love of [[psych0ruins]] and [[Liquid Negrocity]] / [[Black]] leading me to sessions on the piano playing around with the song, a steady chain of events started forming as I played around with the medley. Imagine the events of Aradia's half of [S] Wake playing, plus those pages that come a little while after where Aradia stops Jack in time (note the 'ticking' of the high notes late in the piece!) Of course, I had to pay homage to the original track used for the flash. What you hear is played live, too! (albeit through a MIDI keyboard) Many thanks to [[artist:david-ellis|Lunatic]] again for providing assistance - it's insane the air this guy's got.
 
-    <i>laroone:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>laroone:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Since Aradia came back to life she's been entertaining nuts, and I had this image of her sitting with a calm smile on her face while Jack is trapped and PISSED. I thought it would be fun since Aradia takes everything so in stride, and when she first becomes God Tier she freezes Jack mere seconds before he kills her, with a big smile on her face and no worries. I wanted to go with something like this, Jack being trapped in 'time' and Aradia sitting by sweetly.
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@@ -1614,7 +1614,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     This was a collab between me and Cullen! I had a ton of fun working on this with him. It was his idea initially to mash up a few songs featuring DD. I didn't really expect it to turn into a dubstep piece as I had no experience making the genre at all!
 
-    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I wanted to go with a simple but striking design that worked on two levels: the large diamond with the grey layers, which looks good as a thumbnail on a small ipod screen or similar, and the silhouetted shadowy type DDs that are more apparent when you view the art at full size. I'm really happy with how well it worked out!
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@@ -1635,7 +1635,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Tentacles
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     A friend of mine made a plush squiddle so I decided to let it have a moment to shine! Also this song is the cutest thing what the heckie.
 
@@ -1742,7 +1742,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Great perspective work on the art.
 
-    <i>queenoftheantz:</i> (track artist, [Tumblr](https://queenoftheantz.tumblr.com/post/48054358055/my-track-art-contribution-for-lofam3-for-a-song))
+    <i>queenoftheantz:</i> ([Tumblr](https://queenoftheantz.tumblr.com/post/48054358055/my-track-art-contribution-for-lofam3-for-a-song))
 
     My track art contribution for LOFAM3, for a song called Sketches in black. I hope they will like it! c:
 
@@ -1826,7 +1826,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I wanted to ruin [[track:iron-infidel|Samm's song]]. Mission accomplished.
 
-    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Let's be 100% clear here, I freaking love prog rock, so I was pretty pumped listening to this tune over and over while drawing this one. Every piece of track art I've done for this album has been a little different. This one was the easiest to do and only took an hour because this kind of inked comic book art is my bread and butter. I felt that something bold and comic bookish would fit well since it has that epic kind of scope prog rock gets across. Remember how in the eighties the X-men seemed to spend most of their time in space participating in big Space Opera stuff? I wanted to do something like that.
 
@@ -1868,7 +1868,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     Thanks also to sayachan for the exceptional track art.
 
-    <i>sayachan-art:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>sayachan-art:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     This song takes me back to when Rose was trying to escape her impending doom and get into the game and then when hearing [[Flare]] I find myself thinking about the tumor, it's countdown, her death and ascension and it makes me realize how much she has grown. So, what I tried to imply with this cover is how that fire she was trying to evade eventually became the flames of the green sun where she accepted her fate and arose anew.
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@@ -1897,7 +1897,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     *900pm<br>
     butts per minute*
 
-    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I had been wanting to make a full set of functional, repearing titles anyway for use in maybe making a simple platformer, so I decided to make use of them and create a sort of "If mspa was a game in the 16 bit era" thing. The spirtes were also an excellent opportunity to test out the sprite base I've been working on making from scratch.
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@@ -1924,7 +1924,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     It's a battle for dominance between Caliborn and Calliope.
 
-    <i>Caliboner:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Caliboner:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     All I really have to say is that I have never worked as diligently on any art piece, as I have on this. I spent, what, two months psychoanalyzing a painting of a skull, covered in blood. I had several friends critique it through the process, and eventually ended up with this.
 
@@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@ Art Tags:
 - Twin M9 Berettas
 - Hope
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Elanor Pam:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     [[artist:veritas-unae|Veritas]] wanted to use [[track:disk2-lofam3|my Together at Last pic]] for this track (since [[track:together-at-last|that one]] already has track art) but I thought it was too contemplative for this song. Hope Remains has something of an "ongoing chase scene" feel for me. So I offered to come up with something more active. Then my comp's power source went and burned... good thing I have a tablet at work! And that work on this day was slow to a ridiculous degree. I had but few interruptions while drawing this one. Whew, crisis averted!
 
@@ -1978,7 +1978,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     But really, it was never meant to.
 
-    <i>dodostad:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>dodostad:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     The song is very uplifting, but you can't really draw Handmaid without making her glare really hard, can you?
 
@@ -2031,7 +2031,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     We started this song back in January 2012, during one of our regular hanging-out-<i>probably</i>-drinking collaborative sessions. We got talking about the fact that [[track:frost-vol6|Frost]] had been remixed a couple times (once by us, and [[track:meltwater-lofam|the other]] by [[artist:elaine-wang|orngje223]]). One of us (probably Nick) wondered what Frost would sound like as a really cliched remix, to which Jeremy sarcastically pointed out that the only people who ever remix Frost is himself and his friends. This idea was, obviously, a total joke; nevertheless, we kept at it. The song ended up getting to a point where we realized the joke had been lost, and something awesome took its place. To put it simply, what started out as us dicking around ended up becoming one of the coolest songs we've done together.
 
-    <i>devonianecho:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>devonianecho:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Doing art for a dance remix of [[track:frost-vol6|Frost]] wouldn't have proved tricky if not for a perplexing (but very cool) track title. And so, here we have Jade and some frogs integrated as part of a... metaphoric-circuitboard-type-thing by Echidna. I think if you imagine the song set to a trippy frog-gathering montage on LOFAF with this imagery, you'll get a better idea of what I was aiming for. At any rate, I'm really happy with how it turned out, and I hope I've done the track the justice it absolutely deserves.
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@@ -2071,7 +2071,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     4:00-4:13: One jump cut later, Dualscar is left adrift in a lifeboat as Mindfang's ship, a little worse for the wear, vanishes into the fog.
 
-    <i>Ducky Senpai:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Ducky Senpai:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Oh look, it appears I've done yet another track art for Ascenzo. I'm kind of like Willow's artist stalker.
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@@ -2125,7 +2125,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     In fact, people liked it enough that it was nominated for LOFAM 3, no more than a year later. Having improved a lot by that time, I decided to touch it up a little, and this version is the result. I didn't really change all that much, besides adding and tweaking a few instruments, but I hope it sounds better nonetheless!
 
-    <i>Lunise:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Lunise:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     My interest in doing Homestuck fanart has waned over the past few months, but I will always have a soft spot for the exiles no matter what. So it is only natural that I do goofy exile art for an [[Explore]] arrangement! Even though I was seriously burned out on art in general when I did this, I think it turned out okay. Goofy, happy exiles always turn out okay!
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@@ -2160,7 +2160,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     <small><small>oh for the love of god!</small></small>
 
-    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Kate Holden:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I actually did two pieces of potential art for this, both featuring Dave and Jade fighting Bec Noir, since it seemed appropriate for an intense boss tune featuring a theme associated with Jade. There was a duller version of this as well as a more comic bookish one. A panel of friends agreed that this one read better, but it was a little flat, so I started brightening it and tweaking it, but still wanted to convey '8-bit', so I started playing around with a square brush throwing in this Darwina-esque square noise, which I thought looked pretty cool. It has been remarked that Jade firing an assault rifle in the air in front of a volcano is metal as shit. That's probably my favourite commentary on the image.)
 
@@ -2204,7 +2204,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     My first attempt at a dubstep song, from my ill-conceived dubstep phase. It took a ton of time, an entire new drum pack, and ultimately, a new laptop to finish. It's not my favorite song I've ever made--it doesn't sound like a real dubstep song, in my opinion--but I learned a lot in the process of making it.
 
-    <i>Lunise:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>Lunise:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     I HOPE YOU LIKE GAMEGRL
 
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 Referenced Tracks:
 - Stargaze
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (track artist, booklet commentary)
+    <i>plaidcushion:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Starblaze is a really cool track, and I'm really pleased i got to make the art for it! I tried to stick with the same format as the art for [[track:stargaze|the song it came from]], but a bit more lively- It made me think of the Alpha kids hanging out together at night, lit only by the glow of their lanterns from the tower in LoCaH.