bite the apple review

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/album/lofam3.yaml b/album/lofam3.yaml
index ff7e0000..3a0e6fdb 100644
--- a/album/lofam3.yaml
+++ b/album/lofam3.yaml
@@ -139,26 +139,19 @@ Commentary: |-
     Some cool time-reversal effects in this track. Very reminiscent of the [[album:the-felt|Felt album]]. Cool art, too. Always like Ella's stuff.
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 Track: Bite the Apple
-Additional Names:
-- Bite the apple (name in Bandcamp re-release)
 Artists:
 - Nice Wizard
 Duration: 4:21
 URLs:
 - https://unofficialmspafans.bandcamp.com/track/bite-the-apple
-- https://nicewizard.bandcamp.com/track/bite-the-apple
-- https://soundcloud.com/nicewizard/bite-the-apple
 - https://youtu.be/ifulxtLc1_o
+- https://soundcloud.com/nicewizard/bite-the-apple
 Cover Artists:
 - inimitable-nectar
 Cover Art File Extension: jpg
 Art Tags:
 - John
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Nice Wizard:</i> (SoundCloud description)
-
-    A track about John!
-
     <i>Nice Wizard:</i> (booklet commentary)
 
     Hey there! Bite the Apple is a song about John going from being a goofy kid playing the piano to a goofy kid being launched into SBURB! For me, this was an incredibly refreshing song to write, and I still find it refreshing to listen to! You might even call it... A Breath of fresh Heir. I'm so sorry, I'll never make puns again. Thanks for listening!
@@ -167,7 +160,11 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     In this piece, John is biting the apple. Clever!
 
-    <i>Nice Wizard:</i> (SoundCloud art)
+    <i>Nice Wizard:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/nicewizard/bite-the-apple), 5/1/2012)
+
+    A track about John!
+
+    <i>Nice Wizard:</i> ([SoundCloud artwork](https://soundcloud.com/nicewizard/bite-the-apple), 5/1/2012)
 
     <img src="media/misc/bite-the-apple-alt.jpg" width="300">
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