finished descriptions for i dreamed of feeling better, vol. 1, and chapter 8; foreign bodies and apple in flight are here too

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diff --git a/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1.yaml b/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1.yaml
index 9954b743..72b17d10 100644
--- a/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1.yaml
+++ b/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1.yaml
@@ -22,6 +22,24 @@ Wallpaper Style: |-
     background-size: 1920x;
 Banner Dimensions: 975x180
 Banner File Extension: png
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1), excerpt)
+
+    i dreamed of feeling better, vol. 1<br>
+    a godfeels fan album<br>
+    by [[artist:dj-terezi]] and [[artist:ash-taylor|ash taylor]]
+
+    read [godfeels](https://archiveofourown.org/series/1475819)
+
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/album/i-dreamed-of-feeling-better-vol-1))
+
+    credits:<br>
+    tracks 1, 3, 5, 7 by [[artist:ash-taylor|ash taylor]]<br>
+    tracks 2, 4, 6, 8 by [[artist:dj-terezi]]
+
+    based on godfeels by sarah zedig, and Homestuck by [[artist:andrew-hussie|andrew hussie]]
+
+    cover art by [[artist:ash-taylor|ash taylor]], based on the Homestuck Aspect symbols for Light, Breath and Space
 ---
 Track: next to me
 Artists:
@@ -35,7 +53,7 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Doctor
 Commentary: |-
     <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/next-to-me))
-    
+
     <code style="color: #033e9d">"you said you'd always fight for me."</code>
 
     In a quiet moment, the phenomenon called June Egbert sits down at a piano, and lets the breeze guide her hands.
@@ -48,6 +66,10 @@ Duration: 2:30
 URLs:
 - https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/june
 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fErKEgRSG_Y&t=224s
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/next-to-me))
+
+    <code style="color: #0715cd">"I'm a girl now, and you can call me...</code><code style="color: #033e9d">JUNE!!</code>
 ---
 Track: its jade, but she's a gilf now
 Artists:
@@ -59,6 +81,10 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Crystalanthemums
 - track:megalovania-undertale
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/next-to-me))
+
+    <code style="color: #4ac925">"collapsed spacetime can be so hard to navigate"</code>
 ---
 Track: wherever the breeze takes this
 Artists:
@@ -69,6 +95,10 @@ URLs:
 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fErKEgRSG_Y&t=604s
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Sburban Jungle
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/wherever-the-breeze-takes-this))
+
+    <code style="color: #929292">"bUt that said: woUld yoU like to get REALLY fUcked Up?"</code>
 ---
 Track: vriskafic8ion
 Additional Names:
@@ -83,6 +113,10 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Savior of the Waking World
 - Doctor
 - Killed by BR8K Spider!!!!!!!!
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/vriskafic8ion))
+
+    <big><big><big><code style="color: #005682">"IT'S <i>OUR</i> 8USINESS, REDGLARE!"</code></big></big></big>
 ---
 Track: dire convergence
 Artists:
@@ -93,6 +127,10 @@ URLs:
 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fErKEgRSG_Y&t=1057s
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Doctor
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/dire-convergence))
+
+    Cerulean lightning screams out from the torrent, snaking out like roots into the fabric of the universe itself.
 ---
 Track: MeGaLoVania (Reprise)
 Artists:
@@ -107,6 +145,14 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - track:MeGaLoVania
 - Doctor
 - Sburban Jungle
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/megalovania-reprise))
+
+    <code style="color: #005682">"WELL? ARE WE DOING THIS OR WHAT?"</code>
+
+    <i>Ash Taylor:</i> ([Bandcamp credits blurb](https://8reath-of-light.bandcamp.com/track/megalovania-reprise))
+
+    [[MeGaLoVania|original]] by [[artist:toby-fox]]
 ---
 Track: age of monsters
 Artists: