general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 45 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-6.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-6.yaml
index 312fb1d3..b6da0e71 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-6.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-6.yaml
@@ -306,14 +306,32 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'GameBro (Original 1990 Mix) - JohnJRenns (drums).mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Erik Scheele:</i>
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> (alternate artwork, [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_-LPPdHEyA))
+
     <img src="media/misc/gamebro-original-1990-mix.jpg" width="350">
+
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_-LPPdHEyA), 1/6/2011)
+
     THE GAMES, WILL, NEVER STOP
+
     THE GAMES WILL NEVER STOP
+
     you know the rest
+
     (alternatively: where the heck did that horrible dude come from get him out of the way of the album art jesus)
 
-    I just binged on too much [Go Mario Go](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xkreaWxL224) and [The Heat Is On (bust a groove 2)](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cez1x1Gei4) and went out to mow the lawn and came up with it
+    If you have some money, you should consider getting [the whole album](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/homestuck-vol-5-6-with-the-felt), it'll sound much better from there and there's also a buttload of other great stuff on there.
+
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> ([YouTube comment](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_-LPPdHEyA&lc=Ugi8uWiElrLFBngCoAEC.8JU1nbN61lI8JU8OpO0TJn), 10/1/2016)
+
+    > Hussie said to Erik, (creator of the song,)<br>
+    > "Ok, I want a song that sounds like if the 80's just gave up."
+
+    [[artist:andrew-hussie|hussie]] didn't say anything, I just binged on too much [Go Mario Go](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xkreaWxL224) and [The Heat Is On (bust a groove 2)](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cez1x1Gei4) and went out to mow the lawn and came up with it
+
+    > ***** its a joke.
+
+    people suggest way crazier things on a regular basis how was I supposed to know
 ---
 Track: Tribal Ebonpyre
 Artists:
@@ -330,10 +348,19 @@ Referenced Tracks:
 - Atomyk Ebonpyre
 - Sburban Jungle
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Erik Scheele:</i>
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> (alternate artwork, [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xStVhvhg1i4))
+
     <img src="media/misc/tribal-ebonpyre.jpg" width="350">
+
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xStVhvhg1i4), excerpt, 1/6/2011)
+
     naknaknaknaknaknaknaknaknaknak
+
     Although I didn't think the crocodiles would be so low, but whichever
+
+    Also you should check out the whole album here: [(Bandcamp link)](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/homestuck-vol-5-6-with-the-felt)
+
+    Also you apparently need to be in 480p for it to sound correctly. How annoying.
 ---
 Track: I Don't Want to Miss a Thing
 Artists:
@@ -506,8 +533,11 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Walk-Stab-Walk (R&E) - Nocturne.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Erik Scheele:</i>
-    No special picture this time because -I am lazy-
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4UpaT_FjsH8), 1/6/2011)
+
+    No special picture this time because <s>I am lazy</s>
+
+    Also you should check out the whole album, it's amazing and awesome: [(Bandcamp link)](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/homestuck-vol-5-6-with-the-felt)
 ---
 Track: Gaia Queen
 Artists:
@@ -763,7 +793,7 @@ Art Tags:
 Duration: '4:13'
 URLs:
 - https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/3-in-the-morning-pianokind-2
-- https://youtu.be/OesxlnyaBGE
+- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jMn9u4BMPE4
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Three in the Morning
 - Doctor
@@ -778,6 +808,15 @@ MIDI Project Files:
 - Title: MIDI by Galactides
   Files:
   - '3 In The Morning (Pianokind) - Galactides.mid'
+Commentary: |-
+    <i>Erik Scheele:</i> ([YouTube description](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jMn9u4BMPE4), 1/6/2011)
+
+    Man the quality got rather killed for no reason in spots on this.
+
+    ANYWAY 3 IN THE MORNING YEAH.
+
+    Go to the original page here, help support the people who made it: [(Bandcamp link)](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/homestuck-vol-5-6-with-the-felt)<br>
+    Or alternatively go to the page for this song to hear it better: [(Bandcamp link)](https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/3-in-the-morning-pianokind-2)
 ---
 Track: A Tender Moment
 Artists: