add 124 commentary collection citations + lots of dates

also some new commentary yippeeeee

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
index bfedb8c2..7904281b 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-4.yaml
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Revelawesome - MrCheeze.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i>
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     Another "Andrew asks for music for situation X" - In this, he wanted a dramatic reveal that was basically too epic and obviously a piss-take. The two main ones that were used for this and Hardlyquin (Both were used in the comic for more or less the same joke). The goal was to basically make something so dramatically epic and life-changing that it would just be incredibly silly. (I believe Hardlyquin ended audibly on a joke sound, while I wanted Revelawesome to be played as straight as possible).
 
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Harlequin
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Mark J. Hadley:</i>
+    <i>Mark J. Hadley:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     When Andrew asked us to do something for a shock and surprise for the upcoming reveal of John's Dad's room, this is what I came up with. I slipped some Harlequin in there for good measure. The original version was exactly as it appears in the comic (complete with the record scratch at the end), and I lengthened it for the soundtrack since it was so very, very short. Somehow it came out creepier in that version.
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@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Carefree Victory - Twix Stix.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Andrew Huo:</i>
+    <i>Andrew Huo:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     Carefree Victory is really Hadley's baby, and I would feel like I'm plagiarizing to really call it my own. I really just dictated his piece, called Carefree Action, put it into PXTone, added some lines, changed the tempo, and added a coda (which wasn't even used in the comic, I think?).
 
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ Sheet Music Files:
   Files:
   - 'Ballad of Awakening - EuniverseCat.pdf'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i>
+    <i>Malcolm Brown:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     Jade. I think, at least if not Jade then certainly something about Dreams (Which a lot of the story was turning into via the Prospit/Derse stuff). It was prevalent that a lot of Jade's character was coming from vague aloofness, yet a degree of precognition via dreaming that would prove central to the character and the concept of Sburb.
 
@@ -365,14 +365,16 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Doctor - Twix Stix.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Clark Powell:</i>
+    <i>Clark Powell:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     Doctor was originally by Buzinkai and then a now non-active member Michael Vallejo added a few bits of percussion to it. I then put together a larger mix of the tune with shinier production and a glockenspiel tag, and this was the version Andrew used in the end.
 
-    <i>Buzinkai:</i>
+    <i>Buzinkai:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
 
     Doctor was written before Homestuck, actually. The only thing I can really remember was that Super Smash Bros Brawl came out right before I finished it. The original loop (which is not the one specifically heard in the comic, but was included in the album release) was directly inspired by music from Cave Story, and I was trying to at the time musically embody how I felt at the time, I think. Though it never seems to come out exactly as I plan it, I enjoyed the results. I will say that I cannot truly believe how many people have remixed it.
 
+    [(dead image embed)](https://web.archive.org/web/*/http://buzinkai.net/doctor.png)
+
     The arpeggio part at the end goes between the left, both, and right speakers sequentially. I was too lazy to set the channel settings manually, so I did each note on a different instrument, which is set to each speaker channel. Not many people know that, and I think it actually made it a living hell for remixers who got a hold of the original file.
 
     <i>(On March 17, 2013, [Buzinkai ran an AMA - "Ask Me Anything" - on the r/Homestuck subreddit.](https://old.reddit.com/r/homestuck/comments/1afvkb/hi_im_george_buzinkai_writer_of_the_doctor_and/) Select responses are listed below; you can visit the full AMA on the [Wayback Machine](https://web.archive.org/web/20230625011746/https://old.reddit.com/r/homestuck/comments/1afvkb/hi_im_george_buzinkai_writer_of_the_doctor_and/) as well. Banner art below is from a [fundraiser](https://www.gofundme.com/f/buzinkai) ran for their first album in 2016.)</i>
@@ -527,7 +529,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Endless Climb - Twix Stix.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Buzinkai:</i>
+    <i>Buzinkai:</i> (via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
     The inspiration for this was from a not-very-well-known indie game called Tower of Heaven, which has phenomenal music. Believe it or not, the arpeggios were written first, and the main melody was written last. I tend to write songs backwards sometimes.
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