general commentary citation + dates review for official disco

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/album/homestuck-vol-2.yaml b/album/homestuck-vol-2.yaml
index ea645a5e..5728f52e 100644
--- a/album/homestuck-vol-2.yaml
+++ b/album/homestuck-vol-2.yaml
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ URLs:
 Referenced Tracks:
 - Harlequin
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (composer, from [Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
 
     The rock version of "Harlequin" sure made a scene, blasting through people's speakers as the background music for the Green Slime Ghost pogo game. Joseph nails the tough bits along with some sweet harmonics on the chorus.
 
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ MIDI Project Files:
   Files:
   - 'Upward Movement (Dave Owns) - Unknown B.mid'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i>
+    <i>Quasar Nebula:</i> (wiki editor)
 
     Andrew Huo's edits aren't described more specifically, nor credited on Bandcamp; this credit is pulled from [the original MSPA sound credits](https://web.archive.org/web/20100210001701/http://www.mspaintadventures.com/soundcredits.html). It was removed sometime between [June 12, 2012](https://web.archive.org/web/20120621202058/http://www.mspaintadventures.com/soundcredits.html) and [August 5, 2012](https://web.archive.org/web/20120805031705/http://www.mspaintadventures.com/soundcredits.html), when the sound credits were updated with proper links back to Bandcamp.
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@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ Commentary: |-
 
     I tried towill write something a little more thought provoking this time without too much drummage in the background. It came out smoothly, and I do think it's quite the haunting melody. I was unaware that [[artist:andrew-hussie|Andrew]] wanted me to finish the original loop, and someone else remixed a longer ending for it, doing quite a fantastic job.
 
-    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> (arranger, from [Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
+    <i>Michael Guy Bowman:</i> ([Music and Stuff](https://web.archive.org/web/20110326020456/http://www.iambowman.com/music.html))
 
     "Explore" was one of Buzinkai's distinctive snippets that I arranged - the melodies she writes are always strong, and the only appropriate scale to work on with that kind of material is grand.