jebb commentary review

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 - kneelian
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     <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([Bandcamp about blurb](https://what.bandcamp.com/album/extermination-shock))
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     Soundtrack for the dog-fighting space sim.
-    https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/
 
-    <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/WHATISL0ST/status/1808931605353746816), 6/10/2024)
-    Extermination Shock's demo is out as part of Steam NEXT fest! I did a bunch of work on the music and sound for this. If space dogfights sounds like your jam, give it a try!
+    [store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/)
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+    <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/WHATISL0ST/status/1800224792110571722), 6/10/2024)
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+    Extermination Shock's demo is out as part of Steam NEXT fest! I did a bunch of work on the music and sound for this. If space dogfights sounds like your jam, give it a try!<br>
     [(Steam link)](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/)
 
     <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([Twitter](https://twitter.com/WHATISL0ST/status/1808931605353746816), 7/4/2024)
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     [(Bandcamp link)](https://what.bandcamp.com/album/extermination-shock) The original soundtrack for Extermination Shock is now up on my bandcamp!
 
     The soundtrack will be available on steam as well in a few weeks, once Valve approves the store page for it anyhow.
 
     <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([Tumblr](https://whatislostinthemines.tumblr.com/post/755100551468957696/oh-and-if-youre-interested-in-the-soundtrack), 7/4/2024)
-    [(Steam link)](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/) I completely neglected to update my tumblr with this, but Extermination Shock, the dogfightin' space sim I've been making the music for for a few years is out now! Take a look if it sounds like your thing!
 
-    Oh, and if you’re interested in the soundtrack, it’s available on my bandcamp at [(Bandcamp link)](https://what.bandcamp.com/album/extermination-shock)
+    [(Steam link)](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/)
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+    I completely neglected to update my tumblr with this, but Extermination Shock, the dogfightin' space sim I've been making the music for for a few years is out now! Take a look if it sounds like your thing!
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+    Oh, and if you’re interested in the soundtrack, it’s available on my bandcamp at [(Bandcamp link)](https://what.bandcamp.com/album/extermination-shock)<br>
     It’ll be available on Steam as well once Valve finishes reviewing the store page! Expect that in a few weeks!
 
     <i>Extermination Shock:</i> ([Steam page description](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2992040/Extermination_Shock_The_Original_Soundtrack/))
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     The soundtrack for the game!
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 Track: Flight Stick
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 - https://what.bandcamp.com/track/scramble
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     <i>WHATISLOSTINTHEMINES:</i> ([SoundCloud description](https://soundcloud.com/whats-this-thing-here/scramble-extermination-shock-now-available-on-steam))
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     A track from the dogfightin' space sim I worked on. Get the game at [(Steam link)](https://store.steampowered.com/app/2510820/Extermination_Shock/)
     
     The full soundtrack is available on my bandcamp.