too many things...

- dapper dueling commentary citation
- embittered shore tumblr commentary

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
index 24e79ae3..1d84007d 100644
--- a/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
+++ b/album/coloUrs-and-mayhem-universe-b.yaml
@@ -856,10 +856,18 @@ Cover Artists:
 - Soju
 Art Tags:
 - Jake
+Sheet Music Files:
+- Title: Rough sheet music
+  Description: >-
+    Shared by the composer on Tumblr, alongside a crappy piano recording.
+  Files:
+  - 'Dapper Duelling Piano Rough - Max Wright.pdf'
 Commentary: |-
-    <i>Max Wright:</i> (composer, via [early commentary collection](https://hsmusic.wiki/media/misc/commentary-collection.txt))
+    <i>Max Wright:</i> (composer, ([Tumblr](https://imbrog.tumblr.com/post/21076871581/dapper-dueling-context), 4/14/2012)
+
+    >So, I was a HUGE fan of Dapper Dueling when you first put up the original version, but I LOVE what you did with it for the Homestuck music contest. I can't wait to see what you came up with next, because holy crap you are talented. What inspired you with this one, since it's telling me to ask you something? It has a very Firefly, Joss Whedon sort of feel to it, which I personally really like about it.
 
-    Dapper Dueling was inspired originally by a Steampunk band named The Cog is Dead - after listening to the song I just linked, I tried to take down the general feel and basic instrumentation, and then work on my own from there. Instruments used in the piece are:
+    Dapper Dueling was inspired originally by a Steampunk band named [The Cog is Dead](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tWnRrm_Xpw) - after listening to the song I just linked, I tried to take down the general feel and basic instrumentation, and then work on my own from there. Instruments used in the piece are:
 
     - Acoustic Guitars
     - Accordion
@@ -871,7 +879,7 @@ Commentary: |-
     - Maracas, castanets, very very faint snare (you can hear it at 0:10, under the whistle), constant bass drum beat
     - bang bang wink
 
-    I also gave the original Showtime strife mix a few listens for the purpose of structuring my piece - after all, it's meant to be a Strife theme. However, pretty much all sources of inspiration were only used in the parts before the banjo solo; the rest was just me having fun with music.
+    I also gave the [[Showtime (Original Mix)|original Showtime strife mix]] a few listens for the purpose of structuring my piece - after all, it's meant to be a Strife theme. However, pretty much all sources of inspiration were only used in the parts before the banjo solo; the rest was just me having fun with music.
 
     Let me also point out that it made me extremely happy to see in canon that Jake bounces from side to side before he is about to fight; it was the exact image of him I was hoping for.